Date: 07/03/10 05:20 am Title: Chapter 5
This was a nice chapter. =D It was just a cute way to get to know Ariana and Tom. :) And I'm worried that Tom thinks that Mike's death is somehow his fault, seeing as the accident wouldn't have happened if Ariana and Mike weren't on their way to a TH concert. (What can I say? My mind likes to wander haha.)
Also...I love The Princess Bride! And both Transformers movies! And P.S. I Love You! (Which has Gerard Butler in it...just pointing that out ;D) Aaand I love U2! I was supposed to see them on June 20th in Seattle, but their tour was post-poned. :(
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom might be feeling a bit guilty, but we'll just have to wait and see how that all plays out. I wish I could write from his POV, but I can't. I tried and it wasn't working for me =/ All of the movies I listed are some of my favourites. It's so hard to choose just one! You were going to see U2 as well? Me too!!! I was supposed to see them in Edmonton on June 22nd. =[ So disappointing. I kept my tickets just in case they decide to announce another date because I am so going to want to go! U2 is one of the best bands out there!!!
Date: 06/30/10 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
awe. I love this chapter it is so good I'm glad Ariana feels a bit better n Tom is so sweet..-eep!!!- I cant wait for more!!! great writing I have to say u r one my favorite writers..ur work is AWESOME!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot to me. Honestly, THANK YOU! I was having a shitty day, and your comment brightened it up tonnes. =D
Date: 06/30/10 04:34 am Title: Chapter 4
How long will it be until she realizes who they really are?
And won't she be upset that they didn't say anything?
LOVE this, more soon!
XD
Author's Response: She has never seen a picture of Tokio Hotel...she doesn't know what they look like. She has only ever heard their music. She will find out soon.
Date: 06/30/10 04:00 am Title: Chapter 4
You've never been on holiday before? I'll have to take you sometime. =D
And no worries about Tom and Ariana. I didn't think they were moving too fast in this chapter at all. :)
Aaaand I can't even imagine what Tom's thinking right now. Ariana can't stand listening to his music haha. (Well, I really shouldn't be laughing, but it IS kind of funny. Maybe. Not...) Poor Tom. :( Just out of curiosity, which song was Tom playing, anyway?
Author's Response: Well I've only been on holiday to Memphis, so I guess I can't say I've never been on holiday. I just haven't been anywhere tropical. I might have to take you up on your offer =D Ya, I know...Poor Tom =/ I may consider doing a chapter from Tom's POV next but we'll see. If I do that then I'll have to do that throughout the story, right? =/ I really wasn't thinking last night when I typed this...I should have put the name of the song in the chapter. He was playing 'World Behind My Wall'.
Date: 06/25/10 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh how I truly love your work!! n I think Ari should be around Tom more n have more fun too :D n hope u get out of your writers block-funk! keep up your KICK ASS writing ;D
Author's Response: I think she should be around Tom more too! =D Thanks for the wonderful review! It definitely made my day =]
Date: 06/25/10 05:25 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm super tired right now and I'm having trouble typing, let alone thinking of what to say lol. But I'm making a solid effort to review every chapter. =D I apologize for this extremely crappy review. It'd hardly a review, really. I just like talking to you lol. But I will say that if you want to spend less time on this story and more time on Wrapped in Your Arms, I for one would be totally okay with that. :) I would feel swamped working on two stories so consistently. But I'm just one reader...I don't know how everyone else feels.
Anyway, I'm practically typing with my eyes closed, that's how tired I am. I'm actually quite impressed with myself. XD
Author's Response: I feel honoured that you were typing me a comment even though you were so completely exhausted =] I would have just went to sleep and then reviewed in the morning LOL =] But thank you! I enjoy talking to you as well =] As for spending less time on this story and more on Wrapped In Your Arms...this story may not get updated as often as I would like, unfortunately =/ WIYA is my main priority at the moment and I have more ideas for it. I had so many ideas for this one, but my mind went blank when I went to type this chapter. I don't know what happened. Maybe it's because my mind is stuck on Kim and Tom, not Tom and Ariana? I don't know. Hopefully I can get back on track =] rnThanks for the review even though you were practically typing with your eyes closed HAHA. I really am impressed as well =D
Date: 06/25/10 03:03 am Title: Chapter 3
I think Ari should have a good time and try to befriend Tom and the guys! Maybe it will help loosen her up about her brother and to better cope with it?
And good story! Continue it cuz I'll read till the end no matter where the story ends up! :)
Author's Response: I think it might, you are right =D rnrnAnd thanks. I'm glad you like it. I will continue writing it, don't worry. It just might take me a little longer to update it, that's all. My main priority is my other story at the moment. =] This one will get finished though =D
Date: 06/25/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 3
Good story. I really like it :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 06/24/10 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this story too, and no, i dont think it was to fast. Its not like u had them jump into bed or anything. I think it was sweet of him to try to comfort her. Loving your stories;)
Author's Response: Thanks hun!! I'm glad you don't think I'm moving too fast with Tom and Ariana. I hope to get another chapter up soon. =D
Date: 06/20/10 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
nope perfect ur not moving to fast with tom/ariana i luv it
Author's Response: Awesome! That's great to know! =]
Date: 06/20/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
No ur not moving too fast =D yay!!! I LOVE ur stories n writing..ur really good writer honest
Author's Response: =] Thanks hun!
Date: 06/20/10 08:32 am Title: Chapter 2
this. this is beautiful. i love it :3
Author's Response: Thanks hun =] I'm glad you like it so far!
Date: 06/20/10 05:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Yey! I'm so glad you decided to write another story! I really like the begining and I can't wait to read what'll happen next.
It's sad that Ariana lost someone as close as heer twin...
And, though I don't want to say it, I do think that Tom and Ariana are moving a little too fast...give it some time...other than that, everything is perfect! XD
Author's Response: The story wasn't going to go this way...it was going to be a happy-go-lucky story. No sadness in it. But, I needed something to get it rolling. I had nothing. I think I made the right choice, don't you? rnrnDon't worry, Tom and Ariana aren't moving anywhere as for right now. It's just a hug. =] He's only comforting her. He said she looked like she needed a hug. =D
Date: 06/20/10 05:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Tom, such a gentleman. :)
When I think about the beginning of 6 Months and then I look at this story, I can't help but think about how much your writing has improved! I feel like some proud mother or something. XD Although I do think that the Tom/Ariana interaction is a little speedy. Love takes time. :P
Author's Response: And you should feel like a proud mother! I can't help but think you are the reason my writing has improved! Without that review you had given me, I don't think my story would have ever gotten any better! You gave me that extra kick in the butt I needed. After 17 chapters of 'crap' shall I say, I think my writing got better. Maybe it's because I had someone tell me that my story wasn't great...it was good...but it wasn't great. I needed that...so THANK YOU!!! rnrnAs for this story, I got the idea when I watched the movie 'Dear John'. =D I don't know how this story's going to go, but I have an idea. I don't want to move too fast with Ariana and Tom but I wanted to get Tom to go and check on her. As for right now, there is no 'Love' between them =D
Date: 06/20/10 04:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Hollaaa!!!! Another story! =D You just can't escape my reviews, can you? lol
I am being totally and completely honest when I say this, okay? I love this story so far! And it's only the first chapter! If I love it now, just imagine how mind-blowing it'll be once it really gets going! Exactly.
Author's Response: I don't want to escape your reviews! I love hearing from you! =D rnrnYou love it!?! Really? You're not just saying that? =D I have the biggest grin on my face right now! I was so nervous about this one! I'm swaying away from Tom and Kim and it's so different haha.
Date: 06/19/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
okay I have to say WOW! this is great so far...so keep up the amazing stories girl! =D
Author's Response: Thank you!