Date: 07/15/10 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww... this is so sweet... love it (:
Author's Response: Thank you =D
Date: 07/06/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
This story is so good >__> I was really confused when she didn't know it was them, but I loved the scene where he finally told her. I like that you're writing what she's feeling in such details. And that it's not going too fast; cause if it does, it quickly gets ooc. but this is not ooc at all. I really like it. ^^
Author's Response: Well since her brother was only a fan of TH's, Ari didn't know the band...not even what they looked like. Sure she knows their songs, but that's because of her brother being a fan. If they would have made it to the concert, then she would have known who they were. I am really glad you are enjoying. I am trying to take things slow and not have anything get rushed. I sometimes get ahead of myself though and feel like I am rushing. Thank you for the wonderful review. I hope to hear from you in the future =D
Date: 07/06/10 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow! I really like how this story is developing! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you are enjoying it =]
Date: 07/06/10 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
DAMN GIRL!!! you r on a seriously HOT roll..I haven't seen anyone update so fast keep it UP!! I hoping Tom would stay with n I glad he did ugh their soo CUTE together n glad she isn't mad anymore...as for WIYA u'll get into it again ideas will come =D Great Writing Keep Up the BTCHIN' WORK 5thumbs up!
Author's Response: 5 thumbs up now? Wow! I love it!! I hope to have the next chapter up by the end of the week =] Tom and Ariana have some more talking to do =] I am going to post a new chapter for WIYA tonight...I finally was able to come up with something. Dame writer's block sucks! =/
Date: 07/06/10 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
I like that she went to Tom, and I like that he's being so understanding.
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: The consensus seems to be about the same...glad that Ariana went to Tom. Thanks for the comment. =] I will update soon =D
Date: 07/06/10 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
I think they are moving at a fine pace...I absolutely love this story and I love how fast your updating please dont stop!!!
Author's Response: =] Thank you! I will try and keep updating the chapters as fast as I have been. I have been on a roll with this one. I hope to have another chapter up soon =]
Date: 07/06/10 04:58 am Title: Chapter 7
Tom should have went to her. But I like it either way :) hope you have more ideas for wrapped in your arms, :)
Author's Response: I thought since she had freaked out on him, she should be the one to sort things out. I'm glad you still liked it thought =] I hope to come up with something for WIYA soon too. I have a bit typed, but not nearly enough to post =/ Soon I hope! =D
Date: 07/06/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter 7
bvyrheubvueriovf That was so sweet of Tom. ^^
And I didn't think it was too fast at all. They're friends, and Ariana wanted to apologize. It's good the way you wrote it, with Ariana going to Tom rather than Tom seeking Ari's forgiveness. :)
And this is super random, but I bet Tom smells good. XD
Author's Response: OH THANK GOODNESS!! I was hoping you were going to like how I took things! LOL! I was so worried that I had moved too fast. Tom is super sweet in this chapter. And, I think you're right...I bet he does smell good!! REALLY GOOD!!! =D
Date: 07/06/10 04:23 am Title: Chapter 7
It's perfect! I think with Ariana going to Tom helps her to cope and get better. It seems she's getting stronger! :) love it!
Author's Response: I think you're right =] I'm glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the comment <3
Date: 07/06/10 03:34 am Title: Chapter 7
aww, i love it.
the flash is soo sad.
I think it's good that ariana went to tom, since she did say all those thins to him.
And no, i dont think they are moving too fast.
Author's Response: =D Thanks, I was really worried about this one. I think Ariana should have been the one to go to him too =]
Date: 07/05/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
ugh! finally she knows who he is..I feel bad tht she is mad at him but I understand I so totally can NOT! wait to found out what happeneds next eep!!! keep it up keep it up!!! your writing is INCREDIBLY KICK ASS!!! -4thumbs up!- =D
Author's Response: Yes finally she knows! I have the next chapter started but it might be a bit before I get it posted. I want to get the next chapter to 'Wrapped In Your Arms' up finished first. I feel like I've been slacking on it =/ Thanks for the wonderful comment. It seriously made my day!!
Date: 07/05/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
this story is so emotional. i've not read a chapter yet without tears in my eyes x'D i love it. keep it and update soon!
Author's Response: I don't want you to be crying through the whole thing =/ I'm glad you are enjoying it though =] I will try and make it more happy and less sad =D I will update soon, I promise!
Date: 07/05/10 08:43 am Title: Chapter 6
please please let ariana come to her senses and think that tom and th didn't do anything wrong and please please let tom do something really sweet to sweep ari off her feet - wow that's a lot sorry -.-' haha can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response: It rhymes...'something sweet to sweep ari off her feet' =D...I will update soon and hopefully things will be happier in the next chapter =]
Date: 07/05/10 03:46 am Title: Chapter 6
Yay, a long chapter! And it was a freaking GOOD chappie, too!
To be honest, I don't really see why Ariana is so pissed at Tom. I mean, I understand why she's upset, but I don't think she should be as angry as she is. *shrugs* At least the truth is out there. :)
On another note, I love club scenes lol. There's always someone who has a *little* too much to drink haha. I can't wait until I turn 19 in December so I can go dancing with my friends. =D Maybe I'll go when I'm in Edmonton this summer lol.
And is "Still Haven't Found..." really your fave U2 song? I'm not sure what mine is, but that one is definitely a good one!
Author's Response: I think it has to do more with the fact that he didn't tell her that he was in the band. More will come out in the coming chapters...or maybe in the next one? =] I like club scenes, but I find them difficult to write =/ This chapter came easily to me though, which was good. Yes, 'Still Haven't Found...' is my favourite U2 song. I have always loved it. I really like 'With or Without You' as well. They have so many great songs, it's so hard to choose, but those two are on the top of the list =]
Date: 07/05/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 6
I think it's going to go all down hill from here. :( poor Ari. (cheer up charlie and forgive Tom!)
Author's Response: =/ We will see
Date: 07/05/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 2
I live in alberta canada!
Author's Response: That's cool! So do I =]
Date: 07/04/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
I liked this one, especially the end. makes me wonder if she will leave and go back home or stay. cant wait for more!
btw, on the lyrics, it's "Do i make your heart beat like an 808 drum.
Author's Response: Thanks! rnrnI got the lyrics off of a website to make sure they were correct and that's what it said. =/
Date: 07/03/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
awe. yay!! I love ariana n Tom together i think they're adorable I can't wait for more n looking forward when Ariana finds out about Tom n the band xD great writing keep it up!!!!!!
Author's Response: =D I think they are good together too. So far things are moving slow with them...friendship is good, right? Who knows what will happen when and if Ariana finds out about the band. =] Thanks hun for the comment!
Date: 07/03/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
A particularly long game of 20 questions and not ONE question about what Tom does for a living? Gah! LolZ.
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: I know!!! I realized that AFTER I typed it all up and posted the chapter =/ Don't worry, the game will continue =] But that doesn't mean she will find out what he does while they play again. rnrn
Date: 07/03/10 11:37 am Title: Chapter 5
i love these! it's as good as wrapped in your arms! i hope you continue this, and continue to write more fics of tom :')
Author's Response: Why thank you! I will definitely continue writing this, it just might take me a bit longer to update is all =] As for writing more fics of Tom, I may do that as well =]