Date: 08/06/12 01:10 pm Title: By the river
Great story, however, suspenseful cliffhangers make me exceptionally eager for the next chapter.
Date: 08/12/11 12:54 pm Title: By the river
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 08/12/11 12:20 pm Title: The Campfire Dance
Loved it!
Date: 08/12/11 12:15 pm Title: The Water is Cold!
Loved it!
Date: 08/12/11 12:06 pm Title: Camping: Its so pretty!
Loved it!
Date: 06/28/10 04:44 pm Title: By the river
O.O They found JC but managed to get into trouble......can Lyssa not go ONE chapter without getting into trouble??? Oh well it makes the story better.
Author's Response: sorry! i love action and tend to write in short spurts, so i lose track of when last i had a fast scene. thnx for the review.
Date: 06/26/10 02:45 pm Title: Camping: Its so pretty!
Oy! what a cliff hanger...I can't til ur return to read more great work!-2thumbs WAY up-
Author's Response: thnx. just a bit of lurking, not on long enough for a chappie!
Date: 06/25/10 09:49 pm Title: By the river
Geez! What a place to leave it! I'll be counting the days! :P Great job so far!
Author's Response: yeah, sorry about the whole ten day thing! thnx for the review!
Date: 06/25/10 09:15 pm Title: By the river
Oh my god.his is just,wow.this girl is smart. she has street smart but she know not to just take on some random kidnapper.at least not right away
Author's Response: exactly. though i have none of this talent. thnx for the review!
Date: 06/25/10 12:13 pm Title: The Campfire Dance
Please update it's really good can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: soon, once i'm done wrting it. thnx for the review!
Date: 06/25/10 11:49 am Title: The Campfire Dance
O.o JC JC WHERE ARE YOU?????!!!!!! It's sweet Bill and Lyssa are warming up to one another
Author's Response: Thnx for the review!
Date: 06/25/10 01:03 am Title: The Campfire Dance
This is really good, can't wait till the next chapter, I want to know what happens.
Author's Response: just wait!!thnx for the review!
Date: 06/24/10 11:55 pm Title: The Campfire Dance
x.x Suspense! You must go on!! :P
Author's Response: i will, i will! thnx for the review!!
Date: 06/24/10 07:35 pm Title: Camping: Its so pretty!
oh s#!* someone take JC!! I wonder who it was?hhmm anyway ur a great writer keep up the great work :D
Author's Response: aww, thank you! really, i'm not that great.
Date: 06/23/10 07:39 pm Title: The Water is Cold!
CONTINUE!! This is great!
Author's Response: thnx for the review!
Date: 06/23/10 07:00 pm Title: The Water is Cold!
Great story i can't believe the guys are camping they don't seem like the outdoor type
Author's Response: thats the whole point. thats going to be half the fun in later chapters! thnx for the review!!
Date: 06/23/10 06:59 pm Title: Camping: Its so pretty!
Aw yay! lyssa the hero!! xD
I can't wait what happends at the camp fire oohh
keep up the work girl.me l.o.v.e :D
Author's Response: thank you so much!!
Date: 06/23/10 06:21 pm Title: The Water is Cold!
wonderful nicccceeee Bill was super nice and lyssa is a super hero
Author's Response: thnx for the review!
Date: 06/23/10 06:21 pm Title: The Water is Cold!
wonderful nicccceeee Bill was super nice and lyssa is a super hero
Date: 06/23/10 06:21 pm Title: The Water is Cold!
wonderful nicccceeee Bill was super nice and lyssa is a super hero