Date: 06/17/10 01:01 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
Sorry to disappioint you, but I wasn't grossed out at all, because spit is love! Oh f*ck, it was hot! And in real life, too... I would sell my grandma for getting that kind of spit play with Tom... Did I just said thatout loud? Surely not? :D
Nice job and I loved the spit. More bodily fluids, thank you! :)
Author's Response: Which grandma? Hahaha, I think I'd tolerate spit if it came from Tom *whistles* Thank you so much for your lovely comment, and I'm glad I didn't manage to gross you out :P
Date: 06/17/10 12:28 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
Chan! Omgz'! Totally loved it!
Please update soon!
I want to know what is bill capable of doing! haha
xoxo
Author's Response: Silly, I can't update a one-shot, and that's all it's staying as. Use your imagination, you'd probably come up with something good they'd do :P
Date: 06/17/10 11:42 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
LOL ok the spit was a bit... O.o
but its ok, its pretty subtle compared to some fanfics ;)
LOL this was great :)
Author's Response: XD I couldn't help myself with the spit. It was too tempting. I'm glad you liked this :D
Date: 06/17/10 10:15 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
OMG OMG OMG!! I fucking loved this!! The spit wasn't so gross (even though I would NEVER do that with anyone) but still... Gah! There aren't words to describe how hot and perfect this fic was! Oh and I think you should write a sequel. YOu know, write about Tom and Bill's meet up in San Fran!! ;) Perfect! Awesome! Love!!
Author's Response: I know, I never would either XD No, no sequel! Use your kinky little imagination :P Thank you for the wonderful review
Date: 06/17/10 10:12 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
awesome, man, sooooo hot!
more, please? ;D
Author's Response: No, no more. I'm sorry XD
Date: 06/17/10 09:08 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
omfg this was PURR-FECT
Author's Response: Thank you so much =]
Date: 06/17/10 09:07 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
eeeppppp!
that was soooo good! sooo hot! *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 06/17/10 08:57 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
Why a spit should be a squick?)
I mean thats just a spit and anyway it was hot - sex itself and Bill's new kink xD Am I a perv, too?)
Author's Response: I don't know. It just is. We're all pervs to some degree, don't sweat it =] Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/17/10 08:50 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
You grossed me out a lot. Do it some more please?
Author's Response: XD sorry. I'm afraid I can't, sir, this one-shot is going to be a loner. Use your imagination.
Date: 06/17/10 07:34 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
honestly, spit is nothing if you think about it...you exchange it when you kiss anyway, right? besides, oral consists of other bodily fluids that i think would be considered more disgisting than spit...but to each his own...i liked it...and it'll take a little more than spit to gross me out!!!
Author's Response: Maybe it's just the awareness that grosses people out. Thank you so much for the nice review =]
Date: 06/17/10 07:28 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
-cackles- this was hot.
and i'm a perv in that i loved it. xD
seriously, dude, you're the man of PWP/lemon. hats off. xD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You flatter me too much, sir, with your calling me The Man. I am semi-mediocre at pwp :P Thank you again for the nice comment <33
Date: 06/17/10 06:01 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
OMG so far from being grossed out!! That was hot hot hot! Can we get a sequel?? Loved it, gah *puddle of goo*
Author's Response:
Author's Response: If it makes you feel better, I wasn't grossed out either. I can't do a sequel, this is one one-shot that is going to stand alone. Thank you so much for your delectably sweet comment!
Date: 06/17/10 05:30 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
I think i'm more grossed out by the fact that i wasn't all grossed out. Somehow, you just magically made spit seem really fucking sexy. And your characters!! Ace, my friend. I'd love to see a sequal, or even a series with these characters. You're Bill is so charming, and Tom just couldn't be any cuter. The naive little gay porn photographer...best Tom i've read in a while :D
Author's Response: XD Hahaha, I don't mind it, I just wouldn't want it done to me. That's what Jen said, too, she was like "The twins are the exception to every rule." I'm so glad you like this, it makes my day. And no, I can't make a series out of this, my mind died writing the girls, I can't do it again XD
Date: 06/17/10 05:12 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
I loved this! It was very well written, and not to mention very hot. It didn't gross me out though!I'm part perv myself you see, lol.
'Poor, naïve Tom. You barely saw a fraction of what I can do to you.' I hope this mean we get to see more of what Bill can do to Tom XD
Author's Response: Thank you so very much =] Sadly, no, there will not be a sequel, this took me long enough to write by itself. I'm glad you like it though!
Date: 06/17/10 04:46 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
hahahaa. Damn that was fun to read xD
Really liked it. A secuel in the furure? xD loved it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. But sorry, no sequel XD <333
Date: 06/17/10 04:19 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
Is it bad that I wasn't completely grossed out? XD I mean, yeah it was gross, but at the same time I think I was almost as turned on as Bill. Lol anyway, really hot stuff here, and I'm rather disappointed you ended it teasing like that. ;p But yeah, really hot and I really loved it and I'm just leaving a quick review before I go reread it. XD
By the way, I'd totally buy those clothes in the Dread line. XD
Author's Response: XD No, it's not bad. It varies by person. I'm the queen of tease, hehe. HAHAH rereading it, yes!! Thank you for the sweet review =]
Date: 06/17/10 04:04 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
amazing! simply amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!