Date: 06/18/10 04:18 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
i loved this! not too into the spit, but the rest of it was so fabulous i didn't care. the fashion designer twist made it perfect. =)
Author's Response: XD I think the verdict is 50/50 on the spit. I just thought it was amusing. The designer idea was all thanks to Jen :P
Date: 06/18/10 02:56 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
;) I had a nice senario where designer!Bill uses Tom's... um... leftbehind stuff for his next collection.
/creep
Author's Response: Left behind stuff?
Date: 06/18/10 02:49 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
THAT'S SO MEAN OMG HOW DARE YOU TAUNT US WITH YOUR SALIVA-SMUT THEN SLURP IT BACK UP AT THE LAST MINUTE!
Author's Response: XDDDD You have NO idea how hard I just laughed at that. Because I'm the author and I feel like it! Use that pervy little mind to create scenarios, sweetling, I know you can ;]
Date: 06/18/10 02:30 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
LOVED IT. WANT MORE.
Author's Response: TOO BAD XD
Date: 06/18/10 01:51 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
Ohh my bad lolz. D: I didnt read it was a one-shot. Lolz. Now i feel actually silly.
*Shame on me*
Author's Response: Oh no, it's fine! You're forgiven =]
Date: 06/18/10 12:27 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
I was in desperate need of new kink - preferably water sport. Thank you!! This is so fucking hot. The spitting was.....yeah. It was good. ;)
So, more? I wanna know what Bill has planned for Tom. Heh
Author's Response: XD Yay you liked it! Sorry, no more though. Use your imagination, sweetling! Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/18/10 12:01 am Title: Girls Gone Wild
I think I've found a new kink, too. lol. who woulda guessed it.
So good. I hate the GGW franchise and everything about Joe IRL, so I almost didn't read this. But I'm happy I decided to look past that! :D So good. Any chance we'll see this Bill and Tom again? *hint hint* They make me unf. :)
Great job. Thanks for writing it!!
Author's Response: Hahah, you're welcome. Oh, god, it's awful to be watching a comedy show late night on Comedy Central and then it's like "WARNING: THIS COMMERCIAL IS FULL OF PORN." -.- But you have to admit, Joe is a freaking GENIUS to have done this. He's probably super rich XD Thank you so much for the lovely comment!
Date: 06/17/10 10:20 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
oh wow that was wow and the spit didnt gross me out it was like normal compared to all the kinky shit i know lol but nice nice -favs-
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!!
Date: 06/17/10 09:35 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
i loved it, really original. i'd like 'the second' part, where they meet again. wonder what other perverse things Bill has on his mind? Hmm.
Author's Response: XD no second part sweetheart, sorry. Use that vivid imagination. Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/17/10 07:12 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
I adored this story. The only part that grossed me out was Tom telling about what some of the girls have done. The idea of anyone finding it arousing to be shit on simply makes my stomach churn in the most painful of ways. Haha. The spitting thing didn't gross me out in the least.
I almost wish the story didn't end where it did. I'm curious now as to what Bill had planned that would exhaust Tom. XD
Author's Response: Yeah, that part was a bit painful to write XD I was just thinking about Not Another Teen Movie and was like 'okay, I need to add that in somewhere.' I'm so glad you like the story, thank you for the comment!rn
Date: 06/17/10 06:03 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
That was so hot ! Are you planning on writing more of this? Cause I would totally be interested in reading more about those characters! Really good fic!
Author's Response: I'm not actually, sorry. I don't have the strength XD Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/17/10 05:59 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
I actually would LOVE to read this as a full fic! ^^ the spit thing wasnt gross XD and is there anyway u can email me the two pics from the banner? like Bill and Tom? they're just SOOOO sexy! my email is nutty.hk@hotmail.com xx
Author's Response: I'm sorry, no full fic :P just a one-shot. I'll get the picture of Tom from my banner maker, and when I get that, I will send them both to you! Thank you for the review =]
Date: 06/17/10 05:00 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
Would it be completely needy of me to ask you make this a series? Because this is FABULOUS and HOT and NGGGGGGGGGGGHHHH and I can surely ignore the spit factor if I read it over reallyreally quick!
*dies*
I'll be over here in my bunk now...
Author's Response: XD it might be. I can just tell you that no such series will be created. BAHAHA that's good, ignore what squicks you! Thank you for the comment!
Date: 06/17/10 03:50 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
Wow.. I love it!
Amazing story!!
Thank you :)
Author's Response: :D Thank you for the fab comment!
Date: 06/17/10 03:39 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
I really liked this! I love how you wrote Bill and Tom and the smut was awesome! Not gross at all.
I'd love to read about their hookup in San Francisco. Great story! :D
Author's Response: Use your imagination, make up your own kinks for Bill :P Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/17/10 03:12 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
That actually didn't gross me out as much as I thought it would! It was actually pretty hot, omnomnom.
Loved it!
Author's Response: XD glad to hear it!
Date: 06/17/10 02:38 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
You know, I almost didn't read this because of the water sports warning. Almost.
God, this was so good, in a kind of weird way. It was funny but also hot. Well done, you! :D
Author's Response: XD I'm glad you gave it a try. And I'm even gladder...? Whatevs, that you like it. Thank you for the review, sweetling.
Date: 06/17/10 01:22 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
I have to admit, I wasn't grossed out, because I'm a sick kinky twist. Prolly more info than you needed, but you're the one who wrote the story! Hot cannot describe it.
Author's Response: No, I like learning more about people. It's always nice to know about someone better =] Thank you so much for the wonderful review!
Date: 06/17/10 01:11 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
PLEASE i'm begging you do more. I loved this.
This actually didn't gross me out one bit. ;)
Author's Response: I won't. No sequel. Use that imagination! Thanks for the review =]
Date: 06/17/10 01:08 pm Title: Girls Gone Wild
okay u are awesome!!
i loved this story, great idea and lol spitting is now officially a watersport...
yes..the spitting thing kinda grossed me out a little bit..but whateva the rest was awesome
*faves story* and *waits hungrily for more* X
Author's Response: XD I figured I'd play it safe because I'm totally literal so when I think bodily fluids I cover everything from spit to jizz. So there. Thank you so much for the comment, and I'm sorry, but no sequel. That's the way it has to be XD