Date: 08/15/10 11:27 pm Title: Welcome to the Western States
I figured whenever I had some time I would try to check out a few of your other stories, seeing as to how I really like your, "Whatever Happens" fic *-*
Awe, I always love scenarios where Tom will put on his, 'protective big brother,' pants to try to comfort Bill {even if he desperately needs a bit of comforting himself XD}
This was definitely a great one-shot ^^
I've never been in an earthquake before {& being here in Florida, I doubt that will change for me any time soon} But like you said, Bless anyone who has. I can only imagine how scary they must be.
Near the beginning one of the lines you had written said Tom was shivering under his big baggy clothes...bahaha XD If you take out the bad situation causing his nerves to erupt, the mental image you get of that is kind-of hilarious :P
I also really liked how you incorporated their dogs into the scene, since it's obviously true how animals can sense things like that. For me, that definitely added a dose of realism to the story ^^
{& I hope you won't get tired of me saying this, but I can't stop gawking at your banner.
I T ' S . G O R G E O U S . & . F I E R C E (:
{I really like that word, 'fierce,' so I'm trying to use it whenever possible XD}
*adding to favorites*
-----Samantha.
Author's Response: You know what. I was so sad and almost crying then I was like.. ehh lets see if I got reviews. They all said 0 but the last option for this fic. I frowned like, WTF?! And clicked it... then this colorful massive review popped up. O_O I smiled and died. Seriously. Thank you. :)rnYou know what fic i'd die if you checked out? "Porcelain Butterfly." that fic is my favorite.. no one will read it! DXrnLulz., protective big brother pants. xD rnFlorida doesn't have earthquakes?!?! DUDE I AM SO MOVING THERE. O_O THEY ARE TERRIFYING... rnxDD lmfao.. I just pictured that, wtf. rnYah.. I have cats, so it sort of helps? :) rnI hate this banner. XD I feel liike I could've done better. FIERCE is how to describe Bill! :DrnOMG thanks for favoriting!<3 *loves on you*rnand thanks soooooooo facking much for this. :')
Date: 06/17/10 06:18 pm Title: Welcome to the Western States
Eek, I love it. So adorable! How lovely is Tom at the end there? Amaze
Author's Response: FALENN< 3333333333333 :O *hugs&kisses for you*rnthank youuuuuuu :3333333 rnTom is a lovely boy. Love him ^-^
Date: 06/17/10 04:50 pm Title: Welcome to the Western States
I want more twins' fluffy love! but I still like it:)
Author's Response: What do you mean lol? Thank you so much for reading & reviewing! (:
Date: 06/17/10 04:40 am Title: Welcome to the Western States
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Author's Response: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD idk..... o.0 ! o_O funny facezzzz!!!!! Shannie...
Date: 06/17/10 04:13 am Title: Welcome to the Western States
Oh man I'm scared of earthquakes. But then again, who aren't? This fic was so awesome and good! It's just sweet that they are both scared but Tom tries his best to pretend not to be, to calm his little brother down, that's just sooo adorable. They're so lucky to have each other and, damn, i'm actually pretty bad at leaving long reviews like this. :) I just, I really liked this it seemed so real, you know? because earthquakes happen every now and then and last year, in norway, we had an aftershock and I was a mess! Almost like Bill in this, if i heard a crack or something I thought it was a earthquake and nearly cried. Though, sadly for me, I didn't have anyone like Tom to comfort me. Hehe. Uhm, so yeah, I liked this fic, I really did. :D It was sweet and just bigbrother!tom! and I love that and I love fluff! Well done! ... OH! OH! OH! And the banner... is absolutely super fanastic, gorgeous, pretty, amazing & beautiful :)
Author's Response: omg... thank you so much for this.. very... long.. review *__* I'm super sick right now and you totally made me feel better. :D rnAftershock. xD I was in an earthquake 7.2 like 3 months ago. And I was in a 5.9 just five days ago! They happen like .. idk.. every two weeks or something here. Oh yus, I'm like that. ;) If I hear something I go O__________O and just freak out. Big brother Tom is the sweetest Tom. :3 I didn't like my banner tbh. xDrnonce again, love youuuuuuuuuuu [and your stories :D] thank you so much for the review! < 3 totally made my day ^-^