Date: 03/24/08 06:32 am Title: Chapter 54 ~ Merry Christmas Mari
Ahh!! She's going back she's going back!
*dances around the room clapping her hands*
Aww... her dad's lovely to do that for her, get her the tickets and all that. I'm glad someone finally gave her the push she needed to go back to Bill ^_^
Author's Response: I thought it would be neat for Mari's dad to do something for her. She put it all on hold for him, and now he's doing her a favor. :D
Date: 03/24/08 05:55 am Title: Chapter 54 ~ Merry Christmas Mari
Shes going back? YAY!
You go Mari!
Date: 03/24/08 03:37 am Title: Chapter 54 ~ Merry Christmas Mari
Great :D
Date: 03/24/08 12:03 am Title: Chapter 54 ~ Merry Christmas Mari
I DON'T WANT THIS SERIES TO END ! =(
Date: 03/23/08 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 53 ~ It started out with a kiss, how did it end up like this?
Oh GOD. So much suspense >,< i've been hoping and praying that Mari gets back with bill for like the last week.. I hope she doesn't do something stupid that messes it all up *has spazz attack*
Author's Response: ah hell guess i oughta post a new chapter then, eh? ;)
Date: 03/23/08 09:09 am Title: Chapter 53 ~ It started out with a kiss, how did it end up like this?
Wow. That was intense! I liked the way that both Bill and Mari had to resort to cigarettes to deal with the situations ^_^ I though that was so cute. Andrew's a cute guy... But of course... he's not Bill. They have to get back together!! *whines*
Date: 03/23/08 07:33 am Title: Chapter 52 ~ False Pretense
woooooow i always liked this story i will so be wait for this update
ly x
Date: 03/22/08 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 52 ~ False Pretense
Zomg. Can't wait for more ^^
This is seriously like, the best story i've read on this site, and practically the only Bill/Ofc i'll ever read XP
I really like how you added in Andrew's POV, it really gave the story more substance... good job!
Author's Response: awe *squee* thanks. <3 Glad I could be the exception to the rule. ;)
Date: 03/22/08 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 52 ~ False Pretense
Ahh it was a good story... but its got kinda boring towards the end. No offence or anything, I think your an amazing author.
Author's Response: NO offense taken. It had to get a little slow for a while, before it could pick back up. The calm before the storm, so to speak.
Date: 03/22/08 10:48 am Title: Chapter 52 ~ False Pretense
You know what would shock me in the most delightful way? That Andrew talked Bill into coming back to USA for Mari, what could be the best proof of love? Since he knows he can't have her...I don't know, but I've had the feeling he would do something like that ever since he appeared in the story. I'm crazy, aren't I?
Author's Response: hahaha not at all. ;) I like hearing what people think will happen with the story. :D I think I'm gonna go post the next chapter now.
Date: 03/22/08 09:11 am Title: Chapter 52 ~ False Pretense
I'm still loving this storyy
i follow it religiously ;]
Date: 03/21/08 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 51
Great chapter (as always) ^_^
Date: 03/21/08 10:25 am Title: Chapter 51
awwww i soo want her ot get bk together with bill i relli think tht would work but u no wt way u want it to go i relli thought she was goin to do by ur side ich bin da or w.e yer so tht was a suprise then i rembered the name sping nicht duh me dumb or wot neways update soon xxx
Date: 03/21/08 07:39 am Title: Chapter 51
Awww *hugs Mari*
She told her story...
I have to say, i want a princess pillow now. But her's smells like Bill :P I think THATS what i want more than the pillow haha...
Good job! Im gona miss this when its done :(
Author's Response: I begged my fiance to buy me a princess pillow...that's where I got the idea. LOL.rnrnThis story is so hard for me to let rest. I love it so much, and was really emotionally invested in it. MOre than I am in most of my other stories now.
Date: 03/19/08 05:10 am Title: Chapter 50 ~ Does it have to be in English?
awww this is a good story plz update soon!!?????
Date: 03/19/08 03:51 am Title: Chapter 50 ~ Does it have to be in English?
Yeah, it is a good baby...Take care of the ending, hearts are easily broken (both in your story and in readers.
Author's Response: awe *hugs* I did...I think you'll like it. I loved writing it. <3
Date: 03/17/08 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 49 ~ Fidelity
alice seems nice i am just dying for mari and bill to be together again
Date: 03/16/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 48 ~ I want my Daddy
nooo she let him get away
Author's Response: holy shit thank you sooooo much for the awesome comments. *huggles tightly*
Date: 03/16/08 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 47 ~ Bill, grow a pair
i like how it changed from mari and georg to bill and tom
Date: 03/16/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 46 ~ I see it on you, I don't know what you've been through
i love this song and it fits perfectly with this chapter