Date: 07/25/08 02:44 am Title: Chapter 22 ~ Reality
amazing amazing amazing=]
Date: 07/04/08 08:56 am Title: Epilouge
Squeeeee!!
It all ended happily.
(I cried at one point, but ssh, I think I was just emotional :P)
Nice story! I loveeed.
Date: 05/21/08 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 10 ~ Damn Regret
...my gosh, i blushed there XD
Date: 05/21/08 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 ~ Sticky Ice Cream, French Fries, and a Star Tattoo
I enjoyed it verry much! x'D And I can only say three words to you;
You Are Amazing
Author's Response: aweeee thanks a bunch <333333
Date: 04/21/08 04:21 pm Title: Epilouge
I loved it!!
I really did ! =]
Date: 04/06/08 01:54 pm Title: Epilouge
That was beautiful
x
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 03/30/08 04:01 pm Title: Epilouge
Thank you so much for a wonderful story. This was great, I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks again ^^
Author's Response: You're welcome :D
Date: 03/29/08 06:01 am Title: Epilouge
Nooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 It finishedd !!
You have nooooooo idea how much i LOVED this story! It was just so FUCKING AMAZING!
Shame 10's the highest rating...you deserve more !
Author's Response: awe *blush* that was so sweet of you to say. Thanks bunches. :D
Date: 03/28/08 02:00 pm Title: Epilouge
Awww, such a sweet ending! This was perfect... but i can't help but be dissapointed it's over.. *sigh*
Where will i find another fic as good as this one?
I think i may have become addicted to it >,< that can't be good, right?
Anyways, just wanted to tell you that this is one of the BEST, and i mean the best, fics i've read on this, or any other site... And i may have said this before, but this is practically the ONLY Bill/OFC i actually followed...so be proud ^^
*Sigh* I still can't believe it's over >,
Author's Response: awe THANK YOU SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH! I just can't write slash/twincest and do it justice (but I would try). I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I am proud you liked it so much. :D
Date: 03/28/08 01:04 pm Title: Epilouge
yay happy ending :) i think its nice to name their daughter after her mother ...now iys finished, i miss it already but twas awesome
*lolypop*
Author's Response: i've been going through withdrawals ever since i finished this fic. LOL. I miss it. I wanna keep Mari as a character and maybe write another story about her, but it's not an ff and try to publish it. But IDK what to write. :P
Date: 03/28/08 11:23 am Title: Epilouge
I think I'm going to burst with happiness!!
I'm trying to form a competent review here, but... I'm finding the only thing I can say is that this is totally amazing...but that makes me sound really immature and unimaginative!
I loved this from start to finish... It was such a rollercoaster for Mari from start to finish, and it was a pleasure to watch it all (read of course, but it played like a film in my head ^_^)
To say you are talented is quite the understatement :P Whatever you do in life... keep writing... 'cos you rock at it!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. :D That really made me feel a bit better...I've had a bad day so far, so such a great comment put a smile on my face. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :D
Date: 03/28/08 09:05 am Title: Epilouge
awwww thts cute awww
luved it very goood
ly
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Date: 03/27/08 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 55 ~ Who wouldn't be the one you love
this was so beutiful and i am so happy they are back together:) its so sweet
Date: 03/27/08 10:03 am Title: Chapter 52 ~ False Pretense
i really really liked this chapter it was so amazing *hugs*
Date: 03/27/08 09:56 am Title: Chapter 51
i wAnt her to get back with Bill they seem so miserable on their own
Date: 03/27/08 07:14 am Title: Chapter 55 ~ Who wouldn't be the one you love
very gooood luv it glad their together agen
ly
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Date: 03/26/08 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 55 ~ Who wouldn't be the one you love
Aww! I must say Im a little dissapointed this story is over but overall it was an amazing story!
Date: 03/25/08 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 55 ~ Who wouldn't be the one you love
BEAUTIFUL!!!
This is the best fan-fic I've EVER read and I've read every chapter...
You're blessed with amazing writing skills.
I hope you keep it up!
b29;[Aleks]b29;
Author's Response: Thanks. THis is one of my favorite stories I've ever written. :D
Date: 03/25/08 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 54 ~ Merry Christmas Mari
Awww, that's sooo sweet! Her father is just the GREATEST. omg im so excited! will mari get back with bill? -spazz-
please update soon!