Date: 02/08/08 08:03 am Title: Chapter 8 ~ Cicadas, Fireflies, and Sprinkler Systems
THIS! What was I was waiting for! I absolutely love it :D
Author's Response: Had to build tension. ;) hehe glad you liked
Date: 02/08/08 02:12 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Peterhof Palace
Bill could have never imagined a more special place for the photoshooting and for their love, this is ideal for them as they are: sensitive in their artistic nature.If I were to live a perfect love story, I would certainly place it there.
Author's Response: Awe <333333333 That was an awesome reply. I use Versailles normally as my fantasy palace (I studied French for so long that it kinda came with the territory lol) but I figured I could use a change of pace. Gotta have a bit of fairytale romance in there.
Date: 02/07/08 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ Cicadas, Fireflies, and Sprinkler Systems
xDD I came home from school and turned on the television. On screen was a commercial for a Barbie doll with the name Mariposa. xDD
Author's Response: Was there really? XD OMG! Must buy it...rnrnI had something like that happen once. My dad's ex's daughter had 4 barbie dolls that looked EXACTLY like 4 characters in my story I was writing then. I was like "OMG! IT'S A SIGN! I WILL BE A FAMOUS WRITER!"
Date: 02/07/08 09:49 am Title: Chapter 8 ~ Cicadas, Fireflies, and Sprinkler Systems
Awwwww, they got together ^_^
Bless them both :)
Update soon pleasee! I love this fic :D
Date: 02/06/08 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Photoshoot
I really love how you write, and i really love this story!
Please update it soon!
Date: 02/06/08 09:46 am Title: Chapter 7 ~ Photoshoot
Simply amazing. Bill is so sweet, and.. Well, it's just awesome! :D
Date: 02/06/08 02:27 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Brandenburg Gates
as delicate as ever... I wonder what's happening in his mind, I like imagining that.
Date: 02/06/08 02:10 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Brandenburg Gates
Awesome! Keep it up!
Date: 02/05/08 09:25 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Sticky Ice Cream, French Fries, and a Star Tattoo
This is actually one of the best chapters, I think. You should be proud :D It's awesomely sweet,and I'm drooling all over my keyboard xD
Author's Response: Thanks :D There'll be more tonight. I'm at school now, and the file is saved at home (of course).
Date: 02/05/08 03:31 am Title: Chapter 5 ~ Sticky Ice Cream, French Fries, and a Star Tattoo
I also like this chapter best, but that is because their relationship becomes more consistent, and not because it is better written (since EVERYTHING is very well written).
Author's Response: I think you're right...it's the first time their relationship starts to settle, and you can see how strong the bond is. Thanks a bunch for the review. :D
Date: 02/03/08 05:42 am Title: Chapter 4 ~ We're 2 talkaholics, we can do it all night
I love this fic! You write so realistically, it's just amazing.
I love where this is going too, can't wait to read more :)
Date: 02/03/08 02:41 am Title: Chapter 4 ~ We're 2 talkaholics, we can do it all night
indeed cute, i love it, please go on!
Date: 02/03/08 01:58 am Title: Chapter 4 ~ We're 2 talkaholics, we can do it all night
are you trying to kill me!? XD I can't handle all this cuteness, I'll swell! :D Anyway, more soon please! :D
Date: 02/02/08 03:51 am Title: Chapter 3 ~ Change of Plans, Change of Life
will they see each other again? They have to!
Date: 02/01/08 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Story Of An American Girl
Hey! i am happy you are expanding your horizons with posting this story on multiple boards.
And i am also happy people are widely accepting your story.
Author's Response: thanks a lot for the support :D
Date: 02/01/08 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Please Don't Jump
ooo, good!
Date: 02/01/08 10:32 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ Please Don't Jump
You.. Are amazing! Mariposa is an amazing character, and Bill is just.. You made him so.. Bill-like. I've always imagined him to be like that! And to see it written just.. makes me happy; it kinda' proves that I'm not insane xD Thank you! Update soon:D
Author's Response: shit i know I'm really late in replying this comment, but I was rereading everything. I get kinda tired of always seeing Bill be this spoiled brat. I'm sure he has tendencies to that, but I don'tthink he's som diva bitch all the time. That boy has a poet's heart, and I tried to keep that in mind when I made up a character around him
Date: 02/01/08 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Story Of An American Girl
..Woah! Simply just.. Woah. This is some damn good writing, you know that? You've got skills! You've suceeded in capturing me like no other fic has ever done, and what's even better; you make me want to read more! fantastic!
Author's Response: Awe, thanks a lot! *squee* I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far. :D
Date: 01/31/08 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Story Of An American Girl
This is amazing!
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Date: 01/31/08 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Story Of An American Girl
wow, this is a really good start.
Can't wait for the update =D