Date: 02/18/08 08:14 am Title: Chapter 19 ~ Don't Hold Your Breath, The Pretty Things Are Going To Hell
i love this story :) and i love reviewing it:)
tis full of such mixed emotions:)
Date: 02/17/08 10:15 am Title: Chapter 19 ~ Don't Hold Your Breath, The Pretty Things Are Going To Hell
wooo this is so good i jus read and read and read now i have no more to read =[ lol plz update soon its so sad tht the mum comitted sucide but it added drama update soon xx
Author's Response: Yeah it was something to keep the story from becoming too linear. And, Bill and Mari needed something to throw their relationship into a whirlwind. I love a good romantic story, but I don't like when they become cookie cutter
Date: 02/17/08 03:37 am Title: Chapter 19 ~ Don't Hold Your Breath, The Pretty Things Are Going To Hell
good, things are moving. I like the mixture of music and text, music says always very much about the atmosphere, there is a whole world in it. In fact, i guess that's why you write a TH fic and that's why you chose bill as your partner.Had I been more easy with words, I think I would have done exactly the same choice.
Author's Response: I guess you're right about that. I used to joke I was going to grow up and be a rockstar's wife. LOL.
Date: 02/16/08 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 18 ~ Hey Beautiful, need a ride?
this is truly filled with emotion but oh no if georg has a crush on her...
please update soon this is an amazing story
Date: 02/16/08 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 17 ~ Suicide Notes and Butterfly Kisses
the letter made me cry it seems so real
Date: 02/16/08 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 16 ~ I watched you drift away
omg i didnt expect her death oh no that has got to be painful aLL she has now is Bill
Date: 02/16/08 05:01 am Title: Chapter 18 ~ Hey Beautiful, need a ride?
This is.. Omg! It's amazing, how you describe her feelings, but still have that 'fun' undertone!
Date: 02/14/08 02:13 am Title: Chapter 16 ~ I watched you drift away
Sad, but beautiful though. Go on!
Date: 02/13/08 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 16 ~ I watched you drift away
Oh my god!! How sad an unexpected, well kind of.
Poor Mari!
Date: 02/12/08 11:40 am Title: Chapter 10 ~ Damn Regret
love this storyy
Date: 02/12/08 10:29 am Title: Chapter 14 ~ Gossip
Who leaked?! Who leaked?! Who friggin' leaked?!
Aha, sorry..got carried away^^ I wan't to know! Pleaseeeee update soon! Me want's to read!
Author's Response: it'll be answered before too long :D
Date: 02/12/08 09:28 am Title: Chapter 13 ~ Absence makes the heart grow fonder
omg! i love this story so much
xx
Date: 02/11/08 10:25 am Title: Chapter 12 ~ Now I'm Feeling Zomibified
"I couldn’t have asked for anything more." Neither could I...but still I need a new chapter...
Author's Response: there'll be one soon. ;) *this fic is actually nearly done*
Date: 02/08/08 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 10 ~ Damn Regret
this is just so beutiful i cant think of any other way to explain it
Author's Response: awe thanks for all your replies. <3
Date: 02/08/08 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ Cicadas, Fireflies, and Sprinkler Systems
this is so romantic and i love how its slowly built up
Date: 02/08/08 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Story Of An American Girl
i love how you have set this story. it shows a lot of emotion through your words i love reading it
Date: 02/08/08 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Story Of An American Girl
i loooove this story.
i read it at the forum and now im rereading it, and i love it more and more.
Author's Response: YAY! A familiar face! Well name. LOL. ANywho, thanks for reading it over here to. <33
Date: 02/08/08 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 10 ~ Damn Regret
How amazingly cute! They're such a sweet couple! :D
Author's Response: This was actually one of my first real attempts at a love scene. I wrote one in high school, and frankly it wasn't that awesome. LOL. Most of my fics have been really tame over the years. This is my first one where I pushed my own boundaries with that.
Date: 02/08/08 10:52 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Peterhof Palace
What a cute thing to do for her ^_^ Bill's such a sweetie (:
I'm soo happy that you update so fast :D Keep on doing it pleasee!
Date: 02/08/08 08:16 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Peterhof Palace
Awesome, can't wait 'till the next chapter :}