Date: 03/07/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 39 ~ Sunday Brunch
Aww, i love the little part about the silverware! it makes it seem so much more realistic... Btw, I am completely in love with this story, its just SOOO great! ;P
Author's Response: hehe, thanks. :D I was trying to figure out what I could about southern society without being totally archaic (I'm a yankee ALL the way LOL). I'm glad you like it though. :D
Date: 03/06/08 02:22 am Title: Chapter 38 ~ Open the doors and watch them pray
Mari is certainly courageous to begin a new life like that. I wonder how long she will last before crying for her old one and for poor Bill.She is strong, I get that, but inside I wish she wasn't...
Author's Response: Sometimes Mari's strong to a fault. ;)
Date: 03/05/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 37
awww. i love this story so much! the plot is so well developed as are the characters!
more soon please? ^.^
Author's Response: Thanks. I actually shocked myself with how everyone turned out in the end. This was a really spontaneous story.I had no outline, no plan, nothing. Just sat down and wrote. Planned it as i went.
Date: 03/05/08 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 37
fabulous fabulous fabulous! and i just want to read more now.
Date: 03/05/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 37
Aww, poor mari.
And how could her dad not tell her he had a gf?! *shakes head*
she's going through such a rough time >,
Author's Response: The whole thing I at least insinuated was that he wanted to pleasantly surprise her. He wasn't trying to lie, but it blew up in his face.rnrnIt's pretty rough for Mari from here on out, but she copes. ;)
Date: 03/05/08 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Story Of An American Girl
Wow, very well written! Fantastic!
Date: 03/05/08 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 37
This is an awsome fanfic!
It's so realistic I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks. :D I tend to write stories that are at least likely. I read way too manybad, far-fetched fanfics when I was younger. It left its mark on me.
Date: 03/04/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 36 ~ It's good bye, but only for a little while
*sobs* so much angssst.... I wonder what Mari's gonna do in the US... *feels sorry for bill*
Date: 03/04/08 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 36 ~ It's good bye, but only for a little while
More. :)
Date: 03/04/08 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 36 ~ It's good bye, but only for a little while
Nooo! They broke up!
PLEASE tell me they get back together! Poor Bill and Mari!
Update Noww!? Please :)
Author's Response: If you read you'll find out. ;) On a really fast break from practicing (I hate jazz blargh) but I'll post more when I get home tonight. My concert was cancelled...AGAIN.
Date: 03/04/08 10:55 am Title: Chapter 36 ~ It's good bye, but only for a little while
I love you too...and I also cry. Waiting for the next move.
Date: 03/03/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 35 ~ His side of the story
Aw god, poor bill. >,< This is soo sad
they better get back together... or im gonna be depressed for a while >,<
but good job on bill's POV
Author's Response: My fiance laughs at me because I got so emotionally attached to this story. *hugs*
Date: 03/03/08 10:46 am Title: Chapter 35 ~ His side of the story
This is drama all right. But no hope left? I am an optimistic nature, how about you (they) trying to be too? (just a suggestion, nothing more)
Author's Response: It'll all sort itself out in the end. ;) I won't say too much more. I don't want to ruin it for you.
Date: 03/02/08 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 34 ~ Your Halo's Slipping Down To Choke You Now
*gasp*
NEIN! Why Mari, why?
It was so perfect! *sobs*
poor bill! >,<
Author's Response: They can't be too perfect though. And once again, I hate linear plot lines
Date: 03/02/08 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 34 ~ Your Halo's Slipping Down To Choke You Now
ouch.
Date: 02/29/08 10:09 am Title: Chapter 32 ~ The Big Apple
very good i like it loadz xx
Date: 02/29/08 04:02 am Title: Chapter 31 ~ L'un Pour L'autre
what now? well, it was too good to be too long, ha? please, don't let anything serious happen to them...
Date: 02/28/08 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 31 ~ L'un Pour L'autre
EEeek! It's getting so exciting... *Sigh* can't wait for more!
This just keeps getting better and better. Srsly.
Author's Response: Thanks. It's gonna get even more intense from here on out. ;) Lots of changes, lots of drama...haha I'm being a tease. ;)
Date: 02/28/08 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 29 ~ Behind the Scenes
good i liked it update soon huggles and kisses
Date: 02/28/08 04:34 am Title: Chapter 28 ~ Milan
I've been reading your story from the very beginning, but I've never really had the time to review and I apoligize for that.
This is one of the best stories I have read for a very long time (including books). I'm pretty sure I check for updates every single day and I'm so excited everytime I see that you've updated the story. I love the way that you've "made" Bill. He is the sweetest thing ever and Mariposa is a wonderful character.
I can't explain to you how much I love this story.
I hope that you will keep up the awesome work and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: awe thanks :D I understand the time thing. Most of the time when I'm online, it's in the middle of getting ready for school, in class, or after class and it's about 2 am. LOL. Your comment though is so flattering. I've never been told my works were better than a published book. *giggles* And I'm keeping this up. I actually finished this story a few weeks ago, and there's still quite a bit left to write.