Date: 02/24/13 03:07 am Title: Prologue.
Pleaassseeee write moreee!!!
Date: 09/22/10 08:51 pm Title: Three: Following.
:O Whoa... I can't wait to read more!!!!
Date: 07/09/10 04:51 pm Title: Three: Following.
hell yes
that was awesome
Date: 07/04/10 08:28 pm Title: Two: Theo
I def like theo...I still claim my awesomeness exceeds hers just on a different level...and i feel all "low class"....Love the story ladies, sorry it took so long to review!! :D
Date: 06/28/10 05:04 am Title: Two: Theo
LOL XD Loved it guys :) Keep going!
Author's Response: awww thanks :)
Date: 06/26/10 11:29 pm Title: Two: Theo
i think theo is awesome! dude, she's freakin crazy! i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: ahha i LOVE theo. she'd be like my best friend if i met her. XD glad you liked it!
Date: 06/26/10 10:48 pm Title: Two: Theo
Tho is really creepy...scratch that...she is a psycho
Author's Response: thats the best thing about her xD
Date: 06/26/10 07:32 pm Title: Two: Theo
Dude, lol, I love theo.
Author's Response: same xD
Date: 06/26/10 07:14 pm Title: One: Learning
I really liike Simone :)))
Author's Response: she's sweet :)
Date: 06/26/10 07:11 pm Title: Prologue.
AWESOME!!!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 06/23/10 07:35 am Title: One: Learning
Yey!!!! Guys!!! I love this! Continue it!
Author's Response: -huggle- DANKE XD
Date: 06/22/10 09:08 pm Title: One: Learning
Bill's not safe...well he s now but not really. The Plague will take over the world except for like Guam...Bill and Tom will move to Guam and live happily ever after screwing each other all day long...the end ^_^ lovelove....aya
Author's Response: maybe.. maaayybbbe xD
Date: 06/22/10 04:04 pm Title: One: Learning
I like your idea for the story btws :) but your moving the plot very quick so it doesnt make sense. The news report was very matter of fact and it was informal. News reports should be formal and informative but you seemed to rattle off the whole plague very quickly. Look at news reports for inspiration and think realistically. Also why did you say those things about his dad that quickly? It ddidnt make any sense and its like you just spilled out most of the plot while a lot of this information could have made the plot really interesting later on.Would you expect your mum to just tell you everything like that on the day you moved? just like that? think realistically and build more onto the characters. But otherwise your doing well :) your writing flows but just be aware of what I said. It spoils the plot a little. Im sorry to bring a lot of negativity into it but I do want to see whats gonna happen :)Keep writing :)
Author's Response: We brought in these things because they aren't significant at all to the plot that's to come. Really, we promise, otherwise we wouldn't have done it. We do appreciate the criticism, thanks for it :)
Date: 06/22/10 03:27 pm Title: One: Learning
awwww poor billa and simone. great chapter, i'm so excited for this story!! even more excited to see the pigeons ;)
--jilly
Author's Response: -huggle-
Date: 06/22/10 02:34 pm Title: Prologue.
-hugs byrd and ashley-
AWESOME CHAPTER. I shall be your fangirl. -scurries off to make BSI merchandise- XD
Date: 06/21/10 01:50 pm Title: Prologue.
Interested to see where this goes.
Date: 06/20/10 12:12 am Title: Prologue.
sounds like Vampires....well apart from the bleeding and aging thing
Author's Response: meh. kind of. xD
Date: 06/17/10 10:44 am Title: Prologue.
CONTINUE... PLEASE GUYS. PLEASE.
Date: 06/17/10 01:22 am Title: Prologue.
GAHHHHHH......zombies!! *hides in plain sight as a Cactus....if anyone tries to bite me I'm spiking their ass!!! Keep up the work guys, I'm terrified already!!
Author's Response: -cuddle-
Date: 06/16/10 07:53 pm Title: Prologue.
YUSSSS. I LOVE IT. Seriously. It could use a TIIIINY bit of cleaning up, but that's just me, Izzy the beta Nazi.