Date: 06/20/10 04:40 am Title: 4. Phone Home
Love that story
Very very good and original, Hope u'll update pretty soon
Thanx for writting this
Date: 06/19/10 10:53 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
i can not wait to see whats going to happen next!!
Date: 06/19/10 09:19 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
*does a happy jump*
Date: 06/19/10 08:19 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
oh god, i wish Bill would hold me hostage and then hold me in a back room... i love both Bill and Tom in this story...
Date: 06/19/10 06:57 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
ohmygawdohmygawdohmygawd im in love with this story, hope u post more soon :))))))
Date: 06/19/10 06:17 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
awww bill & tom are getting closer
Date: 06/19/10 05:10 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
this is very interesting so far, keep up the good work!
Date: 06/19/10 04:07 pm Title: 3. Consequences
its all good lol i babble all the time especially in reviews lol(:
oooo cocktails never had one before it will be my first (:
omg i can't believe he shot her this is getting so crazy good thing i can just go on to the next chapter (:
Date: 06/19/10 04:05 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
that was good (:
i love the ending lol(:
Date: 06/19/10 03:28 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
Ohh deadly interesting! I love it!
more more more :DD
xoxo
Date: 06/19/10 02:33 pm Title: 4. Phone Home
Whoop!! Bill and Tom are getting somewhere :D
And I'm reallyy dying to know why Bill's doing this
Date: 06/19/10 04:46 am Title: 1. Homecoming
I can just agree with Bill about that "fate-talk". Heh. {:
I'm liking it so far! :D
Date: 06/19/10 03:44 am Title: 3. Consequences
I really like this. It's seriously interesting, and I can't wait to read more.
Date: 06/18/10 10:26 pm Title: 3. Consequences
*hide teh cookie* *glomps*
Date: 06/18/10 08:27 pm Title: 3. Consequences
Haha, I was kind of hoping for that Champagne girl to get shot. She was pissing the fuck out of me. Guess Bill and I are like-minded, huh? XD
Interesting-er and interesting-er :)
I like that saying, too. I half-believe it. I just believe you can change things when you have the opportunity, but that is ultimately your fate because fate decided you'd choose what you chose, you know? You can't change fate because even if you make a decision that you think changes fate, it doesn't. Because your fate was to choose that decision to try and change fate.
*brain a'splodes*
Oh, and thanks for the info on the H&M incident. I mixed it up with stalkers XD I'm stupid.
Date: 06/18/10 08:26 pm Title: 3. Consequences
Yikes, Bill is definitely not one to be messed with. I'm surprised Tom even had the courage to talk to Bill the way he did. And I'm wondering about what Gustav said. Bill's very mysterious, and it shows in this chapter.
I have to say I loved the Pirates of the Caribbean reference. I could totally picture Bill sitting up against the wall like that, all nonchalant and uncaring. I thought that line fit perfectly - then again I could be a little biased seeing as it's one of my favorite movies. XD
Anyway, thank you for the update! Can't wait for the next. ;)
Date: 06/18/10 05:50 pm Title: 3. Consequences
I like where this is going :D
And that Champagne person was kind of asking to be shot. I mean, come on, she KICKED him.
Date: 06/18/10 05:41 pm Title: 3. Consequences
i like it, i like it
Date: 06/18/10 05:06 pm Title: 3. Consequences
*takes drink* and *offers you cookie*
WOW!! good chapter..*applauds you* for updating so soon
im really intrigued by your bill..i love how he sort of changes mood so quickly..this story has definetely captured my interest and im hooked..(reel me in please lol)
i like the line "fate is inexorable"
im curious..is that something you believe in? im not sure what i believe.. do you think that are lives are mapped out for us..and things that happen are "fated"?
again well done,take care and keep up the good work *hugs* =D
Date: 06/18/10 04:46 am Title: 2. Bill Morgan
That is so right never mess with phases i learned that lol
OMG Bill is here lol dude it would be so weird to be in that situation and thinking that the man who is holding you captive is hot lol (: But then again we are talking about Tom lol jk **
Author's Response: I learned that when I misphrased something in an exam and lost like half my marks :D good times. Ahh, now I would think it would be quite cool to think that someone is hot even though he's being nasty to you, but then, I'm a total masochist. I think. I'm burbling, I'm sorry.