Date: 06/22/10 09:13 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
Bill is jealous of the lady? hahahaha! fuck, i would be too. maybe Tom can hold Bill like that later and calm down... i want them to kiss~~~~~
Date: 06/22/10 08:21 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
I bet Bills jealous of the hug! He wants to be in toms arms! lol this story is AWESOME! LIKE SERIOUSLY!
Date: 06/22/10 08:20 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
*hides* y is bill so angry?
Date: 06/22/10 08:03 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
ooohhh is bill jealous??!! update quickly so i kno!!
Date: 06/22/10 06:10 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
damn...bill seems like the jealous type lol...great chapter! i cant wait for more!!!!!xD
Date: 06/22/10 06:01 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
loved the ending, it definately intrigued me :D
Date: 06/22/10 05:49 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
i like this one more! :D
Date: 06/22/10 05:37 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
Tomi can hold me hostage if he wants. Wing fic!!!!!!! so cool. Write some more.
Date: 06/22/10 05:20 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
Of course I like it, I've like all the others too^^ keep it up !:D
Date: 06/22/10 04:59 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
I WANT MORE!!!!!!
Date: 06/22/10 04:50 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
I hope Bill doesn't kill Benny's mom. If he wanted Tomi hugs he just had to ask. Jealousy is a funny thing.
I hope as the fic progresses I understand more about Bill and what he is. I may have to re-read chapter 5 a couple of times lol
Date: 06/22/10 04:47 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
uuuuu. im wonder did Bill look venomous out of jealousy or pissed cause Tom didnt stay cause of him??? Still great story!!! u come up wit really good ideas!!! :D
Date: 06/22/10 04:37 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
oooo damn someone is jealous lol
this just keeps getting better and better(:
Date: 06/22/10 04:34 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
love where this is going... +the dread of the last sentence always a reminder of the situation, really. You're such a great author!! :)
Date: 06/22/10 04:29 pm Title: 6. Negotiate
brilliant chapter (as usual) keep up the good work..
im loving your story
..wait..is bill jealous???
updaet SOON X
Date: 06/22/10 11:10 am Title: 5. Gods and Angels
Ahh, I'm glad Bill decided to give Tom a bit of insight into what he was. Then again, maybe it wasn't such a good idea =/ I can't help but feel a bit bad for poor Bill, though. Enjoyed it! :)
Date: 06/22/10 10:02 am Title: 5. Gods and Angels
Oh god, this just got a lot more interesting :O
Dude. This is so legit. Like...FREAKING LEGIT.
Date: 06/21/10 09:22 pm Title: 5. Gods and Angels
wow your story keeps gettin better and better, can't wait for more x
Date: 06/21/10 09:14 pm Title: 5. Gods and Angels
Whoa, this story took a turn for the unexpected. I'm full of questions! One is, did you choose Morgan for any particular reason? Anyway, great story! I wasn't expecting to be this enthralled.