Date: 11/20/10 12:45 pm Title: i will hold onto your heart
Hey. I didn't say anything. I enjoyed every minute of that. XD Thanks for the awesome new merciless Tom chapter! lol
Author's Response: Who doesn't love Tom when he gets like that? :3
Date: 11/20/10 09:01 am Title: i will hold onto your heart
I dont't mind Tom's brutalness, but mutilating him in that specific way seemed kind of pointless and overdone. But it was sufficiently horrific, if that's what you were gong for.
Poor Bill has AIDS. I don't know how long people generally live once they get full-blown AIDS, but I know it's not a good thing. I'm not worried though, since Tom will turn him before he can die.
I wonder how Bill will take the news of Tom being a vampire and wanting to turn him?
Author's Response: Torture makes the world go round *shrugs* to each their own. When HIV progresses into AIDS, they are lucky to have two years, according to a girl who did her thesis on the LGBT community and also plays a really large role in her local LGBT community.
Date: 11/20/10 08:42 am Title: i will hold onto your heart
Oh, poor Bill! God I want to read more :)
Author's Response: More shall be up soon enough :3
Date: 11/20/10 08:14 am Title: i will hold onto your heart
I'm actually enjoying how gory this is. LOL!
Author's Response: Hahaha woot! I didn't even write it really. My Tom muse just kind of took over and by the time I finished it and read it over I was like "O.O my god!" XD
Date: 11/20/10 01:09 am Title: i will hold onto your heart
I told you, justifiable homicide.
Author's Response: I agree entirely! XD
Date: 11/20/10 12:58 am Title: i will hold onto your heart
I wasn't going to complain. WOW I'm just generally in shock! I never suspected AIDS to be what was wrong with Bill and I would have killed Murphy too. I would have been upset if Tom hadn't! Now I want the next chapter even more. haha. Good Job!
Author's Response: Unfortunately, after a chapter like that, the next one seems so boring lol
Date: 11/20/10 12:47 am Title: i will hold onto your heart
Poor Bill! what will happen now?! I don't want Bill to suffer like that :( It makes me so sad.... what can Tom do to help him can he change him or cure him or something. This is so... so.... I"m so sad ;(
Author's Response: I didn't mean to make you sad. There's not really a whole lot Tom can do. Even all the money he's accumulated over the years won't count for anything.
Date: 11/20/10 12:40 am Title: i will hold onto your heart
Ja. I agree with Trixi; she always be right anyways.
Much love. I love this story!
Author's Response: Somehow it doesn't surprise me that you agree with her lol. But dude, shut up! She might lurk the reviews and read that. Do we REALLY need her ego getting any bigger? lol
Date: 11/10/10 06:49 pm Title: prologue: take my hand
I do that too so I know how that trick works. :D
Date: 11/10/10 01:10 am Title: i will
EIIIIII! oh my gosh! I hope we find out soon! : D I think he had some kind of STD or something, but that's just me... :P
Author's Response: Like I told some others, don't be too sure of yourself ;)
Date: 11/09/10 05:59 pm Title: prologue: take my hand
I know. That just popped into my head. I've been surprised plenty of times and if I can predict the plot that quickly, the story becomes boring. So I hope it's good and creative! :)
Author's Response: I also don't add some warnings until the chapter calls for it. This way people aren't expecting it.... Curious now? lol
Date: 11/09/10 05:04 am Title: i will
He gave him something...and i don't even want to guess what, in case that makes it true. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: He could have. But there are plenty of things it could be
Date: 11/09/10 01:02 am Title: i will
Terminal disease! That's my guess. :) Fantastic story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Don't get too cocky in your guess just yet lol :D
Date: 11/08/10 05:32 pm Title: i will
OH MEIN GOTT!!!! Does Bill have STD or some other sexual transmitted diease by Phy!??!?
Author's Response: STD stands for Sexually Transmitted Disease, but I know what you mean. As for if that's actually what's wrong with him...well it's better if youw wait and see.
Date: 11/08/10 03:12 pm Title: prologue: take my hand
I think Bill got something serious! Like Aids or another disease. And Im happy that Tom is ther for him.
Author's Response: Sometimes we make things out to be more serious than they really are.
Date: 11/08/10 12:29 pm Title: i will
I think you are one mean person, to cut me off there. I want to know what's wrong with Bill!
Author's Response: I AM mean *beams* You'll find out next chapter
Date: 11/08/10 08:11 am Title: i will
Is he dying? Does he have cancer? :(
I found it really sweet that Tom cooled his fever :)
Author's Response: He could have cancer. You'll just have to wait and see
Date: 11/08/10 07:48 am Title: i will
Oh no, is he Hive positive? Poor bill: (
Author's Response: Bill could have hives, but if he did, Tom would've noticed because he'd be covered in red spots that were itchy. HIV (human immunodeficiency virus) is a viable option however. Either way, you'll have to wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11/08/10 06:26 am Title: i will
He didn't get anything from his boyfriend?
xx
Author's Response: You'll have to wait n see XD
Date: 11/08/10 02:36 am Title: i will
Murphy gave him the hiv!! Yes/no/maybe so?
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. I was thinking along the lines of something a little worse....Cos I'm a betch XD