Date: 09/09/11 03:18 pm Title: Prologue: You can't force me to leave
are you ever going to finish this? its too good to just drop ;)
Date: 04/04/10 01:32 pm Title: 3 Lovers
cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
Date: 06/14/09 12:58 pm Title: 3 Lovers
This is a nice read. I really liked the relationship between Tom and David!
Date: 02/17/09 10:12 pm Title: 3 Lovers
I love it, and i can't wait for more.. .and believe me, im shocked. I'm more of a twc gal, than an, er... anything else kind of person :P
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so sorry for the late reply. I was really busy for the University. And now that I'm free I'll translate next chapters as soon as I can, I promise.rn
Date: 02/17/09 09:42 pm Title: The Ultimate Bullshit
It's Bill! *wriggles excitedly*
okay.. done with outburst... onto the rest of the story. Sorry... got excited there *blushes*
Date: 01/22/09 02:43 pm Title: What's wrong with Bill?
"Are you mad because he's a man or because he's old?"
"Because he's DAVID!!"
Tom caught his brother off guard with his allusive grin. "Jealous?"
Bill's pale complexion turned a very peculiar 20 days old lime colour. "I think I'm gonna be sick..." - *giggles* he’s been caught! Ha ha
"What happened?" He asked, in a very gloomy voice.
Tom coughed, embarrassed.
"OHMYGOOOD!!" - *giggles*
"I don't freak out!" Bill screamed hysterically, before hanging up. -*snorts*
Author's Response: I so pleased you liked it ^_____^rn(sorry, I'm so late :P)
Date: 01/22/09 02:37 pm Title: The Eagle's Scream
"That’s nonsense; Bill's too delicate to make a move on him." He realized what he had just said only when he saw Tom freeze and glare at him with fury.
"While Tom could be easily raped, couldn't he?" – oh my!
"I'm asking you..." he started, murmuring. It was a plea: please, tell me this is not true, that I'm making everything up. He knew he couldn't stand an admission. He caressed his arm slightly and then he stepped back, moving away from him. He looked down. "Forgive me. I never wanted to hurt you. I swear I won't lay a finger on you never again." – oh poor confused David.
The caramel world they slid into as their lips touched was suddenly crushed down by some sort of eagle's scream. They both turned towards the weird noise; confused.
At the end of the hall Bill stared at them with his mouth wide open. David pulled away from Tom immediately and pushed him away as he stared at the person who would decree his death sentence. – first *gasps* OMG! Second awesome line decree his death sentence! Way to go!
"How do you fucking switch him off?" David asked exasperatedly with his face contorted in pain. He was sure his eardrums were going to break soon.
Tom suppressed a giggle while he moved behind his brother. The guitarist pressed a hand over his mouth and shoved him toward his room. "It's better if I talk to him." - *giggles along with Tom*
Date: 01/22/09 02:29 pm Title: Milk and Cookies
Tom grinned naughtily. "I'm sure you're really good. Or I wouldn't choose an older lover, would I?"
David opened his mouth wide astounded. "You really are awful!" – OMG yes you are!
He was almost used to the idea of something inside him when, suddenly, he screamed. David stopped immediately. "Did I hurt you?" he asked, worried.
"Oh God, no!" the teen moaned. – found it!
“When we were kids," he said with his mouth full, "Bill would often come in my room during the night. It didn't matter that we had seen each other all day; he said night created a special atmosphere for confidences. So he would come to me all excited with a tray of junk food and a thousand things to tell me. I liked to hear him ramble about his weird projects on how he would manage to gain magic powers, but I couldn't help but hate the damned tray. Staying up until three o'clock in the morning made me hungry too, but Bill would always bring sweet things. And I like salty food, for Heaven's sake! He never got it!"
Oh, Poor Tom! What a horrible childhood!" David said pityingly – ha ha! *cracks up*
Date: 01/22/09 02:13 pm Title: The Ultimate Bullshit
Fabulously worded intro!
"You are... sorry?" the blond asked, quiet unbelieving. – oh he broke Tom.
"Are you gone completely insane?" he snapped hysterically – beta moment…Have you gone….
He looked ravished at the devilish smile spreading on Tom's lips and he knew he was fucked up for good – ah ha ha ha!
Date: 01/22/09 02:03 pm Title: Prologue: You can't force me to leave
He was less then 3 inches away from his nose. Actually, to be honest, he was less then 3 inches above his nose, because the bastard was taller than him. - *giggles*
David couldn't answer to him. He was already concentrating too much on remembering why he was so desperately trying to stop one of Tom's rare moments when he took the initiative. He rummaged around his brain for those reasons, because he knew they were there. They had to be there: no sane human being would try to stop that dreadlocked gift from heaven without a reason. - *grins*
The “speech” *giggles*
Date: 11/28/08 09:03 pm Title: 3 Lovers
Poor David, had no luck with his former girlfriend, huh? Anyway, I so adore this pairing. I think Tom looks cuter when being paired up with David (if that's even possible!) Oh, and Bill...he should stop acting like an ass, it's starting to get me on my nerves, really!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like the pairing *__*rnBill is..err... he could be lovely if he wants, but I'm afraid this is not the case :Prnanyway, thank you very much^^
Date: 11/27/08 06:55 pm Title: 3 Lovers
oh mein gott! haha so funny the way bill is so blunt and serious! haha and the fan fics haha my my... keep this one up! :D
Author's Response: thank you very much *__*rnas soon as I can, but my translator has some troubles ç.ç
Date: 11/26/08 01:14 pm Title: 3 Lovers
Poor David Ö *hugs David* It be okay, you got Tomi now ^^ Loved it! I hope you coninue soon!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you *___*rnyeah, he has Tomi. Lucky man *.*
Date: 11/26/08 12:46 am Title: 3 Lovers
YES! You finally updated. I think I'm starting to tear up. Lol. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay :PrnAnd thank you for the reading *.*
Date: 10/29/08 05:03 pm Title: Milk and Cookies
I'm literally jumping on my feet right now, I just can't believe I'm reading a Jost/Tom and eventually find myself enjoying it so far! Is it a translation? If so, I dare to say it's very well done. I'm no good at translating, and I salute you for doing it. Firstly, because I envy you for having that skill and also because I don't know how to speak Italian, so I might never have found this if you hadn't translated it! My, Tom is just too cute (and sexy) for this world. Yeah, that's probably why David likes him.
Author's Response: well, first of all: yes, it's a translation, but I'm not the translator. Emilianne is. rnAll thanks go to her ^___^rnrnThen, well, I'm very glad you liked it^^rnI know that Jost/Tom is such an unusual pairing, but I can't stop loving them *.*
Date: 09/27/08 01:34 am Title: Travelling by Tour Bus
omg! haha i love this bill! cuz i don't like david hehe
Author's Response: 'm very glad you found a reason to read this story, even though you don't like David^^rn
Date: 09/06/08 10:04 pm Title: The Ultimate Bullshit
100th review^^
so happy
awsome story
^^
please continue! >:D
Author's Response: Thnak you so muchhh!!rnI'm so sorry I haven't seen your review since now ç__çrnStay tuned, Nex chapter's in my beta's hands ^___^rn
Date: 07/06/08 04:25 am Title: Travelling by Tour Bus
HILARIOUS!!
bill's the best character in this fic ever!! i love how he manages to be sooo annoying. Fortunately david's always in control of his emotions and mature. I like his personality too. You guys make those characters so ...Human.Yeah, i can imagin every single scene and feel something while i read it. I wonder if tom's gonna have patience with bill. But hey! Bill always WINS!! yeah...I like the fact that he's not forgotten and put as a random character and dismissed. He is part of the fic and reading about him
trying his best to ruing sweet moments between tom and david is too good!(sorry, did i tell i'm french? My english's not perfect.)
Anyway,i really love this fic!Ah i forgot, the "queer" attitude of bill...Haha! then now, the man who would want to do him won't have any rest, tom's protective nee? That would be hilarious. David would have a huge headache non-stop(and bill's an too) while the twins won't stop arguing oh my...Well,i can't wait for the next chapter to come!i wanna know what happen next! *pout*
Author's Response: Ahahah! You are definitely a great Bill’s fan!rnWell, I’m afraid his characterization is too stereotyped, so you make me very happy^^.rnAnd I’m happy you like David, too! His personality is a bit complicate and I hope I could convey it^^ rn
Date: 07/06/08 03:49 am Title: The night before.
I re-read this chapter...Yummi! XD
I really loved it. I love the parts talking about Bill, the way he is and such...the description of his personality makes him more adorable than he already is =) . Tom refusing to picture his baby brother having pleasure is sooo cute! he loves him that much? The person who wants to be intimate with bill better watch out for "the Tom" XD. I' in love with this fic. I was missing on this site for a while but now that i come back i want to know what happens next and there's a new fresh chapter for e yay!!
Author's Response: You are really, really loveble!rnAnd I’m very happy you like Bill’s parts, because I’m so unsure about his characterization rnTom in my fic has idealized his baby brother, so, no, he can’t have sex XDrnI hope I could update soon *___*rn
Date: 07/03/08 09:14 pm Title: Travelling by Tour Bus
"Self-preservation my ass! I wouldn't wake up if you kicked me!"
I think that is my favorite line ever! out of anything i have ever read! i love the story and cant wait for more! update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You are very kind^^rnI'll update ad soon as possible, when my translator's hard work's finished^^