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Reviewer: Muffinholic Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 06:00 am Title: Constellations

Oh, more please?

Reviewer: LoveGaneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/10 12:29 am Title: Constellations

So Bill does have multiple personality disorder right?

Author's Response: Maybe... maybe not.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 04:57 pm Title: Constellations

Hehe *sees and recognizes Arab proverb*

I was surprised Bill wasn't more upset about Parker kissing Tom.
And he's easily distracted XD

Author's Response: Oh, he's upset, but he just hasn't brought it up yet...

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 04:51 pm Title: Constellations

omg plz moreee like NOW :PPP

Author's Response: XD As soon as I can.

Reviewer: ForbiddenRapture Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/10 11:15 am Title: Distractions

Why do I have the feeling Tom will now have Bill on his mind more now after that kiss? I hope he gives Bill another chance, it wasn't Bill's fault that Tom got so embarrassed that it made him angry...

Author's Response: We'll see ;) And Tom's good at getting mad at others even when he's to blame, as we know by now...

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 10:59 pm Title: Distractions

Lol, I'm not the only one who's stunned. That came out of nowhere. But not necessarily in an unbelievable way.

Also, for several minutes I didn't get what was happening when Tom was eavesdropping. I thought for some crazy reason Bill and Dr. Orson were talking in broken speech. But then I read it again and realized that was just what Tom heard...

Author's Response: Well, Tom and Parker flirted in earlier chapters, and it's implied that they've had a few discussions since because it's been a while since Tom got to Ivyside. ^^ And yes, just bits of what Tom heard.

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 08:48 pm Title: Distractions

Now why would Parker want Tom to feel good?

And uh oh, I take it Bill isn't very happy about Tom and Parker's kiss? 



Author's Response: Haha, Parker's just trying to be a friend in the best way he knows how... and heh, we'll see how Bill feels...

Reviewer: aarriiaannaax5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/10 12:31 am Title: Provocations

OH SHIT. Bill is good.
Such a little stawwkkuurr.

Author's Response: XD! You know it.

Reviewer: KRK2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 01:44 am Title: Provocations

This story is absolutely amazing. It's just the type of story I've been dying to read!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: Rosebleed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 11:23 pm Title: Provocations

I quite honestly love the way you write, and this story is so intriguing! Please continue it and update soon, it is honestly amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 07:58 pm Title: Provocations

Ooh, seductive, sensuel Bill... I like that. He truly has so many sidss in him and even if Bill seems to know what he wants, I'm not sure if it's good for him. And Tom, poor Tom, so completely wrapped around Bill's finger. The ending scene was... hmm.. nice :)

Author's Response: Ah, thank you very much! You may enjoy Bill's personality, but as we learn in the next chapter, Tom doesn't quite feel the same way... ;)

Reviewer: LoveGaneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 03:44 pm Title: Provocations

How does Bill know these things?
Does he stalk Tom 24/7 for another potential way to seduce him? Or what? Good chapter :)

Author's Response: He's all-knowing ;) thank you!

Reviewer: arty343 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 01:13 pm Title: Provocations

i love how bill knows everything (:



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 12:22 pm Title: Provocations

OMG. Bill changed personalities again!

And geez for a second I had no idea how Bill could possibly know that. And then I rationalized that maybe he heard him the night before. Lol, but it sure would be scarier if he hadn't heard him and he knew.

Author's Response: XD Haha, Bill knows all!

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 11:36 am Title: Provocations

Bill really is freaky. Does he always spy on Tom XD I can't wait for the next chapter and Tom's reaction.

Author's Response: Haha, as Tom decided, Bill's his own entity... and thank you!

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 11:36 am Title: Provocations

*GASP* OH MY GOSH!! BILL KNOWS!! :O Poor Tom ;) 

And oh myy, is Bill going to seduce Tom or be mad at him for it?  



Author's Response: XD! We'll see!

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 08:02 am Title: Provocations

I love Bill in this story. And shame on Tom for letting Bill find out he thinks about Bill when he jacks off. Tom needs to be more private about these things... *sighs*

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! :D And yes, Tom's not too good at keeping quiet...

Reviewer: ForbiddenRapture Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 06:48 am Title: Provocations

-blushes hard and tries to breathe properly- wow, that was... really great! please keep up on this story? I really like it a lot, maybe more than I should.

Author's Response: Heh, thanks! I'm having fun with it.

Reviewer: aarriiaannaax5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/10 01:44 pm Title: Emotions

Oh my sweet baby jesus.
Lol. The end is like woah.

Author's Response: XD! Thank you.

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/31/10 08:12 pm Title: Emotions

Oh, poor Bill! I feel sorry for him. He feels so fragile and as much as I know, most of the toughest ones are the most broken ones in real life. I really want to dive deep into his mind - and deep into Tom's mind as well. Solve all the mysteries.

Btw, I loved the masturbation scene. It was hot :D

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! He is quite fragile and broken, yes, yet as you said, very strong. And Tom... he's got a lot that he holds inside. & thank you ;)

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