Date: 06/14/10 05:51 pm Title: Lesson 1
Ooooh. haha..
;)
That was brilliant. Loved it. Simple and hot and the lesson.. (:
Really great. :3
Stick shift :DDDDDDDD
Lovely fic. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 06/14/10 05:16 pm Title: Lesson 1
You're back :D
- or I hope so, at least.
Author's Response: It's a maybe :)
Date: 06/14/10 05:07 pm Title: Lesson 1
i've never heard of a car that turns off when you press the pedals lol, did you make that up?
Author's Response: Distant memory from my driving lessons last summer. As said, I can't drive.
Date: 06/14/10 04:55 pm Title: Lesson 1
That was awkward.... but yet amazing at the same time! kudos 4 u! :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I guess? :P
Date: 06/14/10 04:54 pm Title: Lesson 1
I LIKED. Very much. Amazing, Alva! This is why you need to keep writing. :)
Author's Response: Aw, so glad you did :) <3
Date: 06/14/10 04:47 pm Title: Lesson 1
My god Alvie! I missed you so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so *takes deep breath* so so so so much! And then you come up with this and BAM! The girl is back! Damn this was good!
Author's Response: Awie! :O Not sure I'm back, but I am here, at least :P But thank you!!! :D <3<3<3
Date: 06/14/10 04:34 pm Title: Lesson 1
Excellent!!! HUZZAH
Author's Response: Hahaha :D Thanks :)
Date: 06/14/10 04:31 pm Title: Lesson 1
ALVA THIS WAS HOT! minor spelling errors, but overall really good! i liked it!
Love,
Ashley
Author's Response: To be honest, I didn't even read through it. I know, I know... I usually read through and correct, but if I had now, I'd be second guessing my ass off... But thanks for having the kindness to tell me :) I will correct it ^^ <3
Date: 06/14/10 04:31 pm Title: Lesson 1
Wow! Sure wish I could have had some driving lessons like that when I was learning how to drive. :D
Very hot! Love all the comments at the beginning. "It's so hard" LOL!
Author's Response: Hahahaha! :D SOOO glad you liked it :D
Date: 06/14/10 04:23 pm Title: Lesson 1
dayum, Alva. XD
what lovely innuendos there at the beginning...lol i was laughing through the whole part about "I just can't keep away from my stick. It makes riding so much more fun.” *headdesk* imma perv...
but GOD, it was hot. and clueless Tom in the beginning was priceless. ^_^
Author's Response: Oh, so glad you are saying that. Was dying, for I thought I no longer would be even able to finish a one shot :S Thanks! Both for the review and inspiring me to write it :)