Date: 06/13/10 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really awesome. There is nothing wrong with your writing but you've described other characters but not the main one, haha, what does she look like? Where is she from?
Author's Response: Thankyou! :) Lol the main girl is the girl in the banner :L lol. That's what Im basing Blair's image from. :) But in the next chapter, I'm planning to go more in depth about Blair. So don't stress ;)
Date: 06/13/10 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Super!! Uh... What you do whith the text when they speak.. It makes you feel like they are wispering... Thatīs the only negative thing I got....^^
Author's Response: Lol well, i see alot of other people on here have italics for the characters dialogue. So that's what I thought I would do. I don't get how italics make them appear as they're whispering but whatever xD I might not to that in the next chapter...thankyou for the review! <3
Date: 06/13/10 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1
OMFGGGGGG DDD: I accidently deleted a review T_______T im soooo sorry whoever that was! I went to delete MY response cos i fucked it up and ended up deleting the comment ): girl im so sorry! but thankyou for the review and Cherrybomb is my fave song aswell :')
Date: 06/13/10 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
i cant wait for you to update this fic
Author's Response: awww thanks! :D <3
Date: 06/13/10 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1
loveeeee
Author's Response: n_n <3