Date: 06/13/10 11:53 am Title: Chapter 3
“We have to get her on our bus.” Bill grinned.
Oh God! X'D I can imagine Bill's grin! And Brandi is mean! Prostate check, that really cracked me up! :D Last chapter was a little bit boring but i guess it's just good thing, this isn't rushing anywhere. And finally we met the boys!
Please continue soon, can't wait!
Author's Response: It will pick up! and then you will be throwing rocks at me! haha! Thank you for reading! *hugs*
Date: 06/13/10 09:28 am Title: Chapter 3
I can tell this fic is going to be awesome
Author's Response: it is! promise! thanks soooo much!
Date: 06/13/10 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
i cant wait to read more :D
Author's Response: Aww! Yay! *giddy* please do! Read more!
Date: 06/12/10 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awesome!!
Author's Response: Aww thank you very much!
Date: 06/12/10 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Continue :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 06/12/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really like how you started at the beginning with her having the babies
Author's Response: Thank you! I love using flashbacks as long as they don't get complicated and cumbersome! I use the first 2 or 3 chapters as flashback...then present...but its neat! It sets the mood! Thank you so much for reading!!
Date: 06/12/10 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh! You have caught my attention... I'll be looking forward to more soon!!!! :)
Author's Response: Excellent! Now that I have your attention: thank you so much for reading!!! I hope you enjoy the next 2 chapters :)
Date: 06/12/10 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is fantabulous. I just read and re-read it, and then I read it again. (: I love it, and you know it!
Author's Response: Lui! I love you more! I love how you just read stuff over and over again! Haha. Keep reading tho! I may change things up every now and then! Since I can get dirty now :)
Date: 06/12/10 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this already! There's too little stories about Bill being a father so i just had to read this! Continue soon!
p.s. simone is lovely! ^^
Author's Response: Hah! Well thank you! You will fall in love with Bills kids in this story! I promise! They are hilarious! Thank you so much reading! Come back now ya here? :)
Date: 06/12/10 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1
So Simone is there but bill abandoned her, I can't wait to find out why. Please keep writing, i like it so far;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have written over 20 chaps so far! Much longer than this one! Thanks for being my first review!