Date: 12/14/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
dawwww that was really sweet!
Author's Response: *yaiii* Thank you!!
Date: 06/14/10 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh boy, what can I say about this story?... I liked the plot, I thought it was really sweet and I think it's unique that it's from Andi's point of view. That's the good part.
The bad part is the atrocious grammar!! I know you said that this story was translated from another language and it's blatantly obvious. Normally I would read the first three lines of a story like this and then click the Back button, but I decided to give this one a chance. And like I said, I think this was a very cute story. This is why I'd like to offer to beta read this story for you and fix all the grammar errors. If you're ready for a big change, email me: ema.dan@live.com
I think there's lots of room for improvement in this story. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, though there were mistakes, as you said. I like Andi a lot for some reason so I guess that's why I wrote it from his point of view :) rnrnAnd I wrote you an e-mail already; and I'm thankful you offered me beta read! Thanks a lot, for both - beta read and for stuck with this story even if that's not what you're doing when it's gramatically wrong. I really appreciate it!
Date: 06/11/10 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is my favorite, I already read it in Czech, but it still was fun for me. Andy's character is amazing, I like him in this story, and back and time I disovered what shot is thanks this. Great job, I hope we'll see soon another your amazing stories. :o) J.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I appreciate your review and I'm really glad you still like it! :)) And yeah, shot is really interesting 'thing' :D And Andi in this story seems nice to me, too! :) Thank you.
Date: 06/10/10 04:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Like it! :) It's cute and Tom is so cute and Bill.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) I kinda like it, too :))
Date: 06/10/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Cute story. Nice :)
xx
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/09/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
There were some mistakes, but of course English is not your mother tongue, and it was actually less mistakes than I've usually seen. :)
I really enjoyed it, it was a cute concept. ;)
Andreas is awesome. :D
Author's Response: Yeah I know and I'm doing my best to write without mistakes, but it's kinda hard still for me :) But thank you.rnrnAnd I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was my intention! ;DrnAnd Andreas IS awesome! :D
Date: 06/09/10 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwwww !!!! It was incredible!!! I love it !!!! ^^
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it!! Thank you!