Date: 10/14/10 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
Was that Bill's way of threatening rape? Ooooh naughty Bill. I usually don't like stories with rape, but Tom, although pissed, seems to have liked at, and still want it from Bill. O_o
Date: 10/14/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
Prissy little Bill akways gets his way. Will he get Tom again? OR will Tom get his "revenge"? I'm ultra curiour to know :)
Date: 10/14/10 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
Bill ish crazy :O But I love it :D Oooooh I gotta read more!
Date: 10/13/10 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
LOL Geo xD Good chapter good chapter :) I take napnow and read more once I've awoken :o
Date: 10/13/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
I WAS RIGHT! >:O And the sicko liked it xD Lol I'm sorry, I just can't imagin Tom being over-powered, especially by Bill! But it's an interesting concept.
Date: 10/13/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ok see that makes more sence, I can understand mean twelve year olds lol. Did he like, rape Tom or something? Well not rape, but attack him? That would be sort of funny and Idk why haha. I can't stop reading till I know what Bill did! And maybe not even then!
Date: 10/13/10 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wtf did he do?! I must know!! Lol Tom has a crush on Bill? So cute! But wait, wern't they like 3 when the left? What bad thing could a 3 year old do that would make him want revenge years later? And also "I have no idea what he looks like" Yeah you don't know that he's a bitch either. But as long as he's pretty! Lol........ cookie? :3
Date: 10/13/10 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooooooooh what did he doooooo? I must know! I got so many giggles from this chapter. Especially when Molly was saying what fun her and Bill had at the party xD SHE had fun but BILL obviously didn't. Lolz I also like how Bill wrote "In your dreams" Haha that is what he said right?
Date: 10/13/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like Tom :) He's all proper, but seems tired of it. Like he's ready to be 'normal' for once. Geo would look funny in golf pants. Just saying x)
Date: 10/13/10 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
You're doing great :D Bill's suck a bitch xD But it's funny. I totally saw this picture of Bill giving this "get the hell outta my way" glare, and thought of it when reading this LOL Reading the next chapter now :)
Date: 10/04/10 12:17 am Title: Chapter 10
Tbh, I thought it started a little bleh in the beginning of this chapter but I LOVED the end :D
Date: 10/02/10 12:01 am Title: Chapter 10
i can't even explain how badly i want tom to get his revenge!
Date: 09/30/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
LOL!!
I wanna know what Tom will do!!! XD
Date: 09/30/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oeh, that last part is so exciting! I'm happy you finally updated again (: I cannot wait for more!
Date: 09/30/10 09:52 am Title: Chapter 10
Oooh!
Yayz your finally back! More please!
Date: 09/30/10 07:39 am Title: Chapter 10
i can't wait to find out what tom has planned...if he even decides to go through with it...
Date: 09/30/10 03:41 am Title: Chapter 10
I think this story is really interesting but it's so wierd for me to think Tom in Poolo and Geard. I laughed so hard. I really hope you are going to make them and expecially Tom change out from that to those baggy hip hop clothes we know and love? Because I can see in my eyes how Bill is making him change.. little by little when he leads Tom to town and shows him all this what his mother kinda hide from him or said that it's "inconvenient" :D
Please keep up the work!
Date: 09/30/10 03:18 am Title: Chapter 10
i am so excited to see a new chapter to this story :) Update soon!