Date: 07/25/10 10:01 am Title: Chapter 8
I just found this story today and i think im in love with it..its brilliant & i love the concept..
You've created some great characters..tom the prissy southerner is different but i like it!
*gives you a cookie* and *faves story*
i love your writing style & its safe 2 say im hooked... i love it & im looking forward 2 more X
Date: 07/25/10 05:51 am Title: Chapter 8
Gah! Please update soon!!!!
Date: 07/25/10 04:28 am Title: Chapter 8
WHAT THE FUCK IS BILL DOING IN TOM'S BED?!!?! 0_________________________0
Wow this amazing! Very nice!
Thank you!
Date: 07/25/10 04:22 am Title: Chapter 8
ooh, very interesting ending. =)
Date: 07/25/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter 8
hahahah awesome story... when geo and tom talk i seem to get a proper English accent come to me LOL
Date: 07/23/10 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
Our tutor is kind of cute, don’t you think?” I wonder if it's a boy or a girl. Hmmm.......
" In school, I fought my German accent tooth and nail and made my parents get me an English tutor so I could perfect my English pronunciation." Sounds like me with my jamaican accent only I didn't hire someone. I would listen to the radio and try to sound more 'american' even though I was born there. It didn't even make any sense. It toke me years to get passed that and im still self conscious about it sometimes.
“When he raped me…and I…I liked it.” *drop drops* RAPPED? ... IS THAT WHY HE WAS CHASEING HIM? 0_o
Author's Response: I actually really love/appreciate your super long commentaries, they're honest and, well...long. and I like that :)
Date: 07/23/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Bills a brat. Just figured id state that. His mom isnt very firm with him about anything. While im at it wheres his father?
How does gustav have his number? I like gustav and i feel bad for him but at the same time i -IN A WAY- know how Bill feels. I have a guy thats been fter me for going on 3 years, just wont take the no, and its pretty damn annoying. At the same time i dont find the guy attractive and i think id have more patience for gustav - sounds shallow i know but gustavs good looking AND has a steller personality and my guy has either. i cant really pick a side on the Gustav Bill thing.
I know this isnt a vampire story - i dont think it is anyway- but i kept thinking bill was going to drink the guys blood. lol #teamjacob
He's chaseing Tom?... WHY is he chaseing Tom?
I was wondering how he could be remembering a chase if they were only 3. Turns out they were 12. Liar.
Date: 07/23/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
"I ANT TO GET MY REVENGE!" "Hallo?" *click* yeah he's really scarred of you now. lol
Date: 07/23/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ha! She thought bill was a girl.... at lest she thought he was a pretty girl! lol
He wears eyeliner in the pool? psh its bill of course he does
"She throw the fucking party fucking last night. She was all the fuck over me' geez he drops alot of f bombs. Im surprised the store isn't blow up. lol
ouch why her hair have to be nappy just cause you dont like her bill? were bitchy...
Is he just going to find every little mistake in her appearance and point out that he's prettier? I mean its kind of funny but give the girl a break.
Hot guy at a jewels story? Nice.
i so had to use google translator to figure out what that said. i thought it just said IN YOUR DREAMS in german. #opps lol
Why did he turn down the hot guys number? He could of just let him call and told him it would take more work to get a date with him. oh bill that ego of yours is such a barrier
if Bills gay why does he use deogratory terms like 'queer' and 'fag(o)' ?
ooooh what ddi he do to Tom?
Date: 07/23/10 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
man tom sounds proper...
i sure hope there german goes as well as their english. Or depened on how you look at it worse. Their english is a little TOO proper. They sound odd.
i dont really like the brothers either. they seem.... snoody and stuck up.
Date: 07/23/10 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Warning-I do comments instead of 'reviews' they tend to be rather long so if they annoy you tell me and ill stop...…
I dont like Bill. Hes an egotistical jack ass and he turned down my gustav! Its also pretty upsetting that-far as i know-no one at his school can see thru his ego.Im interested in why he thinks his cuzo's are douche bags if he hasn't seen them since he was three...
Date: 07/22/10 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lmao. Ilike it
Date: 07/22/10 09:33 am Title: Chapter 7
yay updates!
Update more!
Date: 07/22/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 7
thanks for the update, i can't wait for more!
Date: 07/21/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow-awkward is not the word! Torture much. Looking forward to more...
Date: 07/21/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Omg please update soon! This has me on the edge of my seat, I love this!!!
Date: 07/21/10 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
Georg is really a priss XD
Date: 07/21/10 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
I have a feeling that i will love Georg in this story. He's already great. i literally laughed out loud at his last line. can't wait for more :)
Date: 07/21/10 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
bahahahahah indeed. I;ve had enough 'sufficient awkwardness' for one chapter XD
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