Date: 06/17/10 08:45 pm Title: Barren, Part Two
I love bill when e's eating candy! ^^ he's so relaxed and happy!
Date: 06/17/10 04:27 pm Title: Beginning, Part One
This chapter was exquisite. You practically had me in tears. I occasionally wish, with all my heart, that I could step into some especially moving and meaningful written word. This was definitely one of those times! THANK you.
Date: 06/17/10 02:41 pm Title: Barren, Part Two
I enjoy this Bill and Tom's interaction so much! I'd love to know what Bill thinks about Tom -- he seems so conflicted. Why is he so wary around Tom? Does Tom annoy him for some reason? Does he feel that he can't trust Tom (for reasons wholly unrelated to Tom himself)?
The moment when Bill gives Artemis to Tom is incredible. *_* I love how gentle they both are with her and how careful when moving her, and also that giving Artemis to Tom means Bill has to touch Tom extensively... I love that he's flushed right after!
Tom talking to the fawn and pressing his cheek against her is absolutely lovely. All the details of the ritual are so -- magical and still realistic, like the baby deer looking for milk.
I love how haughty and ethereal Bill can be in one minute, and then flutterclap all enthusiastic about Skittles the next. *g* I especially liked the description that he practically flies to Tom when he sees candy! Hee. Bill's candygasm is surprisingly hot!
Tom's strategy of giving Bill sweets seems like a successful one. Soon Bill will be eating right out of his hand, right? *g*
Date: 06/17/10 01:00 pm Title: Barren, Part Two
This story is so delightful. The fawn is the absolute sweetest thing ever. I love the little relationship slowly bubbling up between Bill and Tom. Tom keeps surprising Bill, but I think Bill should just admit that Tom's more special than he let's on or is even aware of.
Eager for more, as always. :)
Date: 06/17/10 08:40 am Title: Barren, Part Two
Oh my god I love this story! Bill has so many personalities XD I'm exhausted trying to keep up. But I love it ._.
Date: 06/17/10 05:03 am Title: Barren, Part Two
I can't help but love your Tom. ;_; Amazing chapter, waiting for more!
Date: 06/17/10 02:35 am Title: Barren, Part Two
Oh yes, more Bill-and-Tom action, can't wait for that!
So nice story, I like very much! :) Your stories are so good. Original and different, not the one you read every day. Thanks for that!
xx
Date: 06/17/10 01:46 am Title: Barren, Part Two
omg. *_* This whole chapter was just...magical.
I'm really enjoying the building tension between these boys!
Date: 06/16/10 10:48 am Title: Barren, Part One
Rawr! I really love this. Tom Tom is getting a crush on Bill, isn't it? XD Can't wait for more :)
Date: 06/15/10 10:57 pm Title: Barren, Part One
It's really cute, the way Tom is so smitten with Bill ;) It's almost a shame how cold he is toward Tom sometimes, though ._. Haha, either way, I'm really enjoying this so far!
Date: 06/15/10 06:14 pm Title: Barren, Part One
this is so good x3
Date: 06/15/10 03:49 pm Title: Beginning, Part Two
pretty interseting!!!lol
Date: 06/15/10 02:45 pm Title: Beginning, Part One
good chapter!:)
Date: 06/15/10 02:04 pm Title: Barren, Part One
Bill and Tom are going to go and witness a fertility ritual. *_* This is the best story ever!
Tom's dreams sound disturbing! I wonder what we'll find out about Bill.
I love how utterly enchanted by Bill Tom is! He dreams about Bill, zones out, jumps up when he sees him... no wonder Gustav looks concerned like you do when your partner seems a bit out of his mind, hee! I love that Tom is so desperate to spend more time with Bill. And Tom unable to keep his eyes off Bill even when he's talking to other people is priceless! Oh Tom.
This story is so full of marvellous details. I'm practically gleeful! I love that Tom is irrationally jealous when Bill shakes hands with Juanita in public -- and I love even more that Bill seems to sense it somehow. I'm so intrigued by Bill! And his and Tom's connection. I have no idea what to expect! Do they share a past? Is it some kind of telepathy (Tom suddenly thinking that Bill also shreds things when nervous)?
What did Tom buy??? This fic makes me kind of curious, unless you couldn't tell. *g* I'm so happy you promised to update soon!
And omg. Tom touching Bill's hand. It's so subtle and yet so hot. I love that you used that gesture -- "Tom's fingertips rested perfectly against the webbing between those fingers." (I wonder how that felt in reality. Did Bill feel like squirming and making breathless little noises then too?) I love Bill's reaction and Tom's, omg, Tom's! I love that he's so professional on one hand, and so passionate (so suddenly!) on the other, wanting to touch Bill's throat. *fans self* This is just amazing.
I love that touch is such a huge deal for them that Bill avoids touching Tom.
Can't wait for more!
Date: 06/15/10 01:59 pm Title: Barren, Part One
Curious, very curious.... I wonder why Bill seems so intent on being stubborn with Tom, and what it is he's hiding. From how well he can read Tom, I wonder if he's sensitive to mood in the way that animals are. He did hint to having more power than Tom, after all.
Date: 06/15/10 01:49 pm Title: Beginning, Part One
OMG!!!! I want to hang out with Bill! And Tom!! That fawn is just killing me! Let me hold her, pleeeeeaaaassseeeeee???!!!
Date: 06/15/10 01:36 pm Title: Beginning, Part Two
Jumbie the peacock and the world's most delicate vacuum cleaner. I'm in love. This is such a peculiar little story and I love animal-loving Tom and whimsical, eccentric Bill. I'm curious about Georg; from the wink I got the idea that he was a little more human than his companions, and he also seems capable of doing Bill's bidding. But what exactly is going on, and how Tom is going to arrest a dog for this guy's murder, are both beyond me.
By the way, although I haven't read Petshop of Horrors, Bill and his shop remind me immensely of Yuuko from xxxHolic and her shop. If you haven't read it before, I suggest it!
Date: 06/15/10 01:26 pm Title: Beginning, Part One
*cackles*
I wish I read the original Pet Shop, but I only read the Tokyo version. Lol... coincidental no? But yea... I may give this a shot, seeing as I know SOME background to it XD
Date: 06/15/10 01:05 pm Title: Beginning, Part One
*flails*
Okay so admittedly, if anyone else had written this, I would have turned away after the second paragraph, but since you wrote it I figured it would most likely be worth my time. I had to force my way through the beginning half and I was pretty distraught at one point because of the description of the caged dogs, but I was able to make it through. Once I came to Georg the golden retriever, I cheered up and now I am 100% positive that this will be another delightful and quirky story from you. I can't wait to read on. :)
Date: 06/15/10 11:41 am Title: Barren, Part One
I was so excited to see you updated! I am loving this fic!