Date: 02/07/14 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 2- Forgiveness and Insight
I was waiting with reading this story untill it will be finished so now I really enjoy reading it. It so nice written! I really like this how you portrayed both boys, Bill seems to be very clever! I'm more than happy that you are back and finishing your stories!
One thing catched my attention, I don't know about situation in US, but in Germany people would rarely say anything about sinners or hell, especially not young ones. I'm not from Germany, but close enough, and have been there many, many times, Germany are not really religious country, luckily. Teenagers or anyone not very old talking to stranger about religion are very not in european style. Excuse me writing this, hopefully I didn't offend you.
Author's Response: No worries, you didn't offend me. I've never been to Germany (although its always been a dream) so I don't know a lot about that sort of thing there. So you're probably right. I know these events would probably be more likely in the US or something. Oh well though! lol. But thank you for reading, I appreciate your input!
Date: 02/07/14 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 2- Forgiveness and Insight
you might want to change "had known" to "knew" cause "had known" makes it sound like Bill is dead.
I really enjoy this.
Oh and I think that straight people or even bi people get more mad at the mean things that are said about gay people then gay people do. Not all the time but, in my experence anyway, they do.
Author's Response: Okay, noted, I should start getting my stuff beta'd haha.
Date: 02/07/14 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1- Introductions and Surprises
i really like this
i decided to wait till this was finished to read it
there is another fanfic that is simmiler to this, i forgot the name though.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/07/14 04:20 pm Title: Epilogue
Lovely, lovely ending. Thank you for finishing this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 02/07/14 12:18 am Title: Epilogue
Beautiful ending to an awesome story, thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 02/06/14 10:54 am Title: Chapter 25- The End
I've read this all in one go! I'm so in love! This is one of the best stories I've read so far! :D I cannot believe it's coming to an end! But oh well, can't wait for the next chapter! This was absolutely amazing and I'm so glad that Simone and Georg saw reason and decided to support Tom in the end! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 02/06/14 10:33 am Title: Chapter 25- The End
Thank you so much for picking up this story again. Now I know it will be completed I can start over and read it from the very beginning. Loved this chapter. Well done, Tom,and also Simone and Georg. I hope Jorg does jail time for kidnap and imprisonment and that gives Tom's mum and brother a chance to escape his tyranny. Looking forward to the epilogue.
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with the story even though I kept you waiting so long!
Date: 02/06/14 12:29 am Title: Chapter 25- The End
I can't tell you how happy I was when I saw this updated...thank you so much!
Bravo to Tom for having the courage to walk into that church and confront his father and exposing his dad for the cruel man he was! Looking forward to the epilogue.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was shocked when I saw some of my stories last updated dates and just couldn't stand it! The epilogue will be up sometime tomorrow. :)
Date: 02/05/14 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 25- The End
.....When I saw that this had been updated, I was alone, in my room, on my square of the bed that wasn't being used, and said with the biggest and loudest Long Island accent ever in life, "OH MAH GAWD!" (I am not from Long Island, and never have even been there. I am sure, had there been witnesses to this occurance, someone would've said something.) I am glad that you've come back. *pets you* (even if that came out kinda creepy) I am super happy that you've rounded things out- and have even more planned. Don't be a stranger, k?
Author's Response: Lol! thank you so much. I could hardly believe it myself, but I'm glad I'm back and I'm already plotting more! I hope this wasn't to bad, I started second guessing it, but decided it needed to go up before I lost the nerve again, haha. But thanks again, and it's good to be back! :)
Date: 08/12/13 06:28 pm Title: Prologue- New Beginnings
please, update this story!
Date: 04/22/13 05:59 pm Title: Prologue- New Beginnings
Great story! Can't stop reading it! Bill and Tom are so sweet together! All love is good love.
Date: 09/13/12 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 24- Saying Goodbye
OH GOSH i really love it
Toms speech was just perfect and beautiful so accurate!!! EPIC
Simone fighting and Georg defending her
FINALLY OMG just perfect again *u*
the funeral sad the shivers omg T.T
and the end they holding hands just love it
Date: 09/13/12 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 23- The Reunion
OH DEAR lord thank you so much for keep writing you have no idea how much emotions i have now askdamksdad the thought of being so lucky of discover the fic when you just start posting again akdmakd you have no idea the relief i feel is so sad when so amazing stories die so suddenly so.. THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH for keep sharing
much love from Colombia!! i really loved the chapter *u* really all the feelings
Date: 09/13/12 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 20- Help
I love it i fckin love it!!!
i just start a few days ago and i couldnt stop reading alskdmaskd
but now let me run to the next chapter im dying with this end OMGGG
next chap a better comment i promise *u*
thank you!!!! thank you so much for your fic
Date: 09/11/12 07:42 am Title: Chapter 24- Saying Goodbye
i'm glad that place got shut down...and they're going to be just fine...simone should've beat the crap out of him...i would've...
Date: 09/10/12 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 23- The Reunion
it's sad that she died, but she left them the best gift she possible could...and getting that place closed down would be a godsend...
Date: 09/10/12 11:24 am Title: Chapter 24- Saying Goodbye
This chap was unexpected and caught me off guard, but it was a nice turn to see things working themselves out. Looking forward to the next chappie.
Date: 09/10/12 09:44 am Title: Chapter 24- Saying Goodbye
I'm so happy you updated. I love this story. So brave of Tom to speak out on camera like that. And for Simone and Georg to stand up to Jorg. I'm really hoping that Tom will be reconciled with his mum and brother at least. Glad there'll be another couple of chapters to tie things up, and so happy that Bill and Tom will be together.
Date: 09/10/12 09:41 am Title: Chapter 24- Saying Goodbye
Love the new chapter XD
Date: 09/10/12 09:32 am Title: Chapter 24- Saying Goodbye
Really like this chapter!