Date: 07/08/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 3- An Awkward Dinner
Poor Bill stupid Jörg >.
Date: 07/08/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2- Forgiveness and Insight
XP stupid kids.
Author's Response: Agreed!
Date: 07/08/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
That was the BEST!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 07/08/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
This story is adorable :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 07/08/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
I really like this story so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
Date: 07/08/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
Cute!!! I'm so glad Tom found Bill. Holy cow Tom's family is going over board and would drive me nuts. I think Tom and Bill are going to end up having to move. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: You may be right, but we'll have to wait and see! XD Thanks so much!
Date: 07/08/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
Okay, I just read the story and I really liked it so far, the whole idea and your writing style.
But there's one thing that's confusing me:
Tom's turning 18 years old, so in Germany he is a legal adult now, he can do whatever he wants to and his parents can't tell him a single thing, so HOW can they still tell him not to see Bill?
Why isn't he just seeing him, without asking permission?
Author's Response: Because Tom still lives at home and has no job or anything, I think the whole 'you live under our roof so you'll follow our rules' thing will come into play. But for future events I wanted him to be 18...but there is also future events where the whole 'hes 18 so he doesn't have to do this' thing will also come into play, but we should all just ignore it! lol. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 07/08/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
8 am? Here in Sweden it's 11 pm xD But isn't Tom 18 now? Can't he just like move away from his parents? Hm... Well, good chapter anyways :D
Author's Response: He could move away, but he has no job or anything and he's still in school and stuff. I know he could technically just leave, but a part of him is still attached to his family. I'll probably get into more in later chapters, lol. And thank you! :)
Date: 07/08/10 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
YAY!!! Bill and Tom are together!!! REBELLION!!! Go Tom!!! Haha XD I like the way the story is heading. Don't worry bout the mistakes. I think theres only one at the most but wat ever at least you updated!!! :D
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! :)
Date: 07/08/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
Waaaah! Finally together! Awesome! Please keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 07/08/10 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
yay! best brithday EVAR!
tom's parents suck though... way too strict... and georg too.. like a friggin' lapdog to his dad.. *shakes head at tom's fam*
can't wait to read more!!! wonder how they're gonna work out the sneaking around thing ;D
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 07/08/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
Awwww!!!!! I love it!!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!! XD XD XD
Author's Response: Thanks!! :)
Date: 07/08/10 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
Hi there! This is a really lovely story: I love this mysterious and charming Bill and I also love how Tom is trying to rebel against his family's rules (maybe because coming from a Catholic family I often find myself in his position :))
It is also well written (and for me it's always a good thing.) Just a thing:
"Taking the lords name in vein" should be "Taking the Lord's name in vain" otherwise it's really good.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! And I shall go fix that mistake now, lol. :)
Date: 07/08/10 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
Heep! They're boyfirend and boyfriend!
Author's Response: As Bill and Tom should always be! lol
Date: 07/08/10 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 5- The Best Birthday Ever
omg omg please write faster this is so good
Author's Response: Thanks! I won't make you wait to much longer for more! :)
Date: 07/05/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 4- Punishment and Realizations
Hi!!
awww poor Tom... hope he can find family aceptance. I find quite amusing that Geo was like that u know? he being so.. well, so Geo XD
please! update soon this is one of my favs!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :)
Date: 07/04/10 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 4- Punishment and Realizations
awww!! poor tom!
and yeah, i hate ppl who blow religion out of proportion too! and i totally agree with what u wrote about how ppl ignore the foundations of a religion and then call themselves strong believers... fucktards...
can't wait to read about tom sneaking around ;D
Author's Response: Agreed! Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 07/04/10 01:33 am Title: Chapter 4- Punishment and Realizations
I think, that when I'm reading a good story, I don't really have much to comment or say. So. That being said, I will see you next update. (basically, I just wanted to let you know that I was here, and that I did read it. I'm excited for this story!)
Author's Response: I appreciate the review, and I'm glad you are reading and liking the story. <3
Date: 07/04/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 4- Punishment and Realizations
I liked the realization in this chapter. I must admit, though, that all the ellipses got a little distracting.
Author's Response: Jeez I'm slow, I had to look up 'ellipses'! lol. I do admit that I am pretty bad when it...comes...to...this, lol. I do that in all my writing, I don't know why, but I probably shouldn't because it isn't proper writing. I thank you for the review, and the critique, I will try and cut back on that. :D
Date: 07/04/10 12:51 am Title: Chapter 4- Punishment and Realizations
I hope there will be BIORG here.
Oh please! Even though just one chapter?
PLEASE!
Author's Response: I really hate to disappoint people, and I usually try to take peoples suggestions and put them into stories, but unfortunatly, I wouldn't count on any Biorg. Georg is pretty hardcore into his faith in this story, and I don't even think the sex on legs that is Bill could seduce him. But thanks for the review, and the suggestion! :D