Date: 09/07/10 10:30 am Title: Chapter 11- Jobs and Almost Getting Caught
UGH-dang Tom's dad!!! I hope Simone and Georg can get the ole' man to lighten up, but that probably won't happen :(
Author's Response: We can still hope :) Thanks for reviewing! XD
Date: 09/07/10 09:01 am Title: Chapter 11- Jobs and Almost Getting Caught
but maybe georg will support tom and try and help him. i mean those last few second of the dad and him talking was like he was trying to get his dad off toms back. that would be a good twist.
Author's Response: I'll have to consider that. Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 08/27/10 09:50 am Title: Prologue- New Beginnings
Yeah pastors can marry. With that said there was a part where you wrote Priest :3 And thank you for writing this awesome story >w
Author's Response: You're very welcome! :D
Date: 08/27/10 08:05 am Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
i honestly don't like the idea of his preacher father being so decietful. you could've come up with something else hun. i still love you though.
Author's Response: Yeah, I can understand the idea of a preacher or religious figure of any kind acting this way isn't a very appealing one. I already had the story planned out though and I didn't really want to stray from my plans. I'm probably going to stay away from writing anymore religious based fics in the future, because I know it can be a touchy subject, and the last thing I want to do is offend anyone. I have to warn you, I'm going to stick to my original plot, and Jorg is going to remain pretty decietful through the rest of the fic. Thanks for the review, and your opinion. :) I still love you too <3
Date: 08/24/10 05:08 am Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
what a crappy family. and how sick for the parents to involve another of their kids, pitting them against each other. the part with tom and bill was happy and great. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I agree with you about pitting Georg against Tom...gives us all the more reason to hate them! lol :D
Date: 08/23/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
ohhhhh cnt wait
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/22/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
Their first time was so sweet. That damn Jorg-he's incredible, I hope he get's put in his place!
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought soo!!!! Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 08/22/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
oh my god! evil Jorg!
Luff itt
Author's Response: Thanks!! :D
Date: 08/22/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
i hate jorg
Author's Response: Me too! >:(
Date: 08/22/10 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
i really really wanna kill Tom's family! >:[ maybe bill and tom can earn enough money to move the hell away from them!! i'm still really liking this story so post when you can please!(:
Author's Response: I have a feeling they will figure it out eventually ;) Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 08/22/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
I want to hit Jorg with my bedside-light. "of course I know it's warm. Why do you think I try to push it up your ass?" xD
Author's Response: LMAO! XD
Date: 08/22/10 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
Aw screw Jorg DX But I just noticed, and I'm not sure if it's been written in any where else, but Normally Priests are Catholics and aren't allowed to be married have kids. As far as I know Protestants have Preachers.
But hurry and post D= I wanna know what happens ;-;
Author's Response: Yes, Catholic priests aren't allowed to be married, but Jorg is not a priest, he is just a Christian pastor, and I am pretty sure they are allowed to be married. Reverand Lovejoy on the Simpsons is married! lol. Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 08/22/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
I KNEW IT! I KNEWWWWWWWW IT! Aweeee, FUCK.
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the review!! <3
Date: 08/22/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
*glares at jorg*
there should be laws against ppl like him... there seriously should... and wouldn't the tracing device be an invation of privacy? since tom is 18 and all, jorg really has no right to be doing this... *glares harder* though i have a hope that georg feeling jealousy might actually make him realize he's a mere mortal. afterall, it's one of the 7 deadly sins, so that makes him just as bad as his little brother, right? =D
and yay for bill/tom smutty fluffiness!! ^^ me likes =D
can't wait to read more!! *hopes that melanie can enlighten tom about the wonders of GPS tracking device thingies in cell phones* she's a bit more in touch with the "outside world", right? she must have seen cop shows where they track ppl through their cellphones... *tries not to get her hopes up too much*
Author's Response: *glares at Jorg also*rnrnWhy is it that your reviews always make me smile? lol.rnrnI agree, what Jorg is doing is basically child abuse or something! And Georg may have a little bit of decency, but not much. And thank you for commenting on the smut part of it...you were like the only one! I didn't think it was that bad, lol. rnrnAnd I don't really know what a tracking device looks like, maybe I'll have to look it up, but would someone be able to find one just my looking at the phone? But yes, you're right, Melanie definitely knows a bit more about technology. *I hope you don't get your hopes up to much either, lol* Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 08/22/10 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
Oh snap! A tracking device. That preacher must have been a FBI agent before he started speaking the word. Geez.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: lol, that could be a possibility! haha XD Next chapter will be out to you be Sunday! :D
Date: 08/22/10 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
IM crying D:
Dont let... Horg ruin Bill&Toms sweet life! They are so cute together, and dont let anyone kill that D""": PLEASE.
I love ur story as hell
Author's Response: Please don`t cry!!! :( Thank you so much! I love you for loving the story! :D
Date: 08/22/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
I like the way the story is going O_O
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
:D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 08/22/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
more please?
Author's Response: Forsure by Sunday! I promise :)
Date: 08/22/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
YAY!!! I want them to run away! :D
but,,UGHH!! why does his dad have to be such a bitch >:
Author's Response: I don`t know why he is such a bitch...maybe he is on the rag or something, lol. Thanks for reviewing!!! XD
Date: 08/22/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 10- First Times and First Plots
well at least things are in motion for them to leave together...I really like this story but you're killing me. haha.
Author's Response: Yes, they finally have a plan! XD I don`t means to kill you :( I promise to stop!! lol. Thanks fore reviewing! :D