Date: 12/03/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 20- Help
Ooooh I have a bad feeling about those electrical shocks :@
Author's Response: It's definetly not a good thing XD Thanks for reviewing!!! :D
Date: 12/03/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 20- Help
It's like A Clockwork Orange! Hopefully that treatment won't work in this story, though :/ I'd be sad if it did.
Author's Response: The treatment didn't really work in Clockwork Orange either ;) I think our Tommy boy loves his Billy to much to let a few shocks change that XD Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 12/03/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 20- Help
Is Muriel dead wtf O.O Bill doesn't need anymore stress >.
Author's Response: I definitely agree with you there. And if anything does happen to Muriel, they better get his Tomi out of that place asap, because he is going to need him! Thanks for reviewing!! :D
Date: 12/03/10 10:48 am Title: Prologue- New Beginnings
Another awesome chapter!
What happened to Muriel? She didn't die or anything, right? She can't! She needs to be there for Bill and Tom! She's like a grandma to them. Not to mention that she's also both of their employer. She's probably just sleeping and needs to wake up.
Sorry to say, but getting a lawyer for free won't do anyone any good. Even if the reward of the case may be huge in the end, a public defender won't take the case seriously enough because of the lack of time and resources that they have. By the time he gets around to the case, Tom's brain will already be fried. (Especially if they find a picture of Bill to show Tom :) ) They need to do something serious and crazy if they wanna break Tom out of there!
Thanks for updating! Really looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Sorry for such the long wait, but I assure you, more will be coming soon (hopefully in less than a week)...yeah, I don't tend to study things to in depth before I write them, which I should probably start doing, so I don't know to much about lawyers and what not. Not to give anything away, but they aren't going to end up using a public defender anyway, I just for some reason threw that randomly in there, lol. And as for Muriel...I don't want to give anything away, but I hope you aren't too upset if it turns out shes not just sleeping. Thank you so much for the review! <3
Date: 11/19/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
This is so good! Omg i need you to more, please! its really good and i love it!!! Its one of the best stories i have ever read, please continue!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am very flattered. And I will continue as soon as possible...in fact this is my last review to respond to so I plan to get right back to writing the next chapter after this. Thanks again, and I am sorry for the wait <3
Date: 11/11/10 08:11 am Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
yaaaaay ^____^
i don't mind that u missed a week, i haven't had time to read in forever anw =P
but my GOD do i wanna hug georg right now!!! i might not be able to say much postive about jorg, but he did raise two fine sons *nods*
Author's Response: This is very true :) Thank you so much for the review, and I am sorry for the wait. More is on its way soon, I promise <3
Date: 11/09/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Go Georg! Help them back together! It's freaking me out they cannot be together XD
Author's Response: Don't worry, I am not so cruel as to keep them apart for too long...or am I? MWAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAH...but seriously I'm not, lol. Thanks for reviewing! <3
Date: 11/09/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Wey.. Nice story!x3
I've read this since..Eh. chapter 5 or something. And I really like this one :"D
U get both the feeling, and the action in one sentence.. Its really.. Cool. and attractiive :"D
Ur story is really nice, and Im NOT looking forward 'til its finished D":
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! <3
Date: 11/08/10 01:48 am Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
I just started reading this and love it already!!! Jorg is such an asshole!!! If I were Tom, I would have punched him out a long time ago >{
I wanna know whats going to happen to Georg for going to see Bill. I wanna know how they plan to get Tom out. Also, I have to have great empathy for Tom right now because I'm eighteen and I know how it feels to have people constantly putting you down and still treating you like a child even when you're an adult. I understand how much Tom hates to be there against his will. I don't even know what I would do if I were him. Probably just wait on Bill to come save me, like he is.
Anyway this story is awesome and I really wanna read more! Please post again.
Author's Response: I am sorry for the long wait on the next chapter, but thankfully you won't have to wait much longer XD Thank you so much for the review! <3
Date: 11/07/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Georg is seeing the errors of his way. : )
Author's Response: He sure is XD Or he is at least seeing the error of his father's ways. Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 11/07/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Love the stiffs progress. It was sad to see not Tom in this chapter:( but please update soon:)
Author's Response: Tom will return in the next one ;) Thanks for reviewing! <3
Date: 11/07/10 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
well damn...this story is really fucking awesome!! i love how Georg is helping Bill!! yay!! i'm so proud!! and as for Jorg...can i shoot him?....please? BUT! post soon please!!(:
Author's Response: Feel free to shoot away XD lol. Thanks so much for the review, and my apologises on taking so long. More will be up soon <3
Date: 11/07/10 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Poor Bill, poor Tom. It seems I've been starting my last couple of reviews that way. I was sitting her chanting, "come on Georg" waiting for him to finally decide to go and help Bill. I'm happy that he is finally standing up to his father a bit, that he sees that what is happening is wrong. This was another great chapter and I can't wait for more, but don't rush yourself. Real life comes first, trust me I understand that one just as well as anyone.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes real life *sighs* at least I get to disappear into my story worlds once in awhile. But I am please to annouce that I am back at work and the next chapter should be up very soon :) <3
Date: 11/07/10 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
yay yay yay i knew georg wasnt bad
Author's Response: Yup, even though he doesn't approve he still loves his brother and realizes what their dad is doing is wrong. Thanks for the review! XD
Date: 11/07/10 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
I KNEW GEORG WAS GONNA HELP!!! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Georg finally saw the error of his ways XD Thanks for the review, and more is on the way soon :D
Date: 11/07/10 11:37 am Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
:o PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!!!!! I'm begging you!!!!
Author's Response: Even though it has been a while I am writing more as we speak. It should be up shortly. So sorry for the wait XD Thanks for reviewing! <3
Date: 11/07/10 11:20 am Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Omg this is awesum!!! I loved it soooo much..I love all your stuff so keep writing...I can't wait til the next capter comes out!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter is coming soon I promise, I apologise for the wait <3
Date: 11/07/10 09:06 am Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Oh Geo, God has shown you the way!!! Honesty is the best policy XD
I think Jorg has a story to go along with his radical ways :/
Author's Response: Perhaps I will have to touch on Jorg a little more in upcoming chapters to see if there is in fact a reason for all of this. Thanks for reviewing! XD
Date: 11/07/10 08:54 am Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Yes! Total points scored for Georg right there.
Author's Response: All hail Georg! XD Thanks for the review! <3
Date: 11/07/10 05:12 am Title: Chapter 19- Broken Hearts and Help
Good. And maybe once they rescue Tom they can prosecute the entire "hospital" staff for kidnapping and unlawful imprisonment!
Author's Response: We shall see ;) Thanks for reviewing! <3