Date: 09/19/11 03:57 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 06/10/10 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loves this, to no end. It is what I expected from you, spectacular. Very good detail, gave me perfect visuals and all. This is really good. :D
Author's Response: thank you. even though im not that good of a writer
Date: 06/06/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it. It was so fucking cute *_* I read the first version, too. And I love both of them but this the most. :) This was so detailed and very well written. I love how we got to know what they were thinking directly. :D It was.. ughnn romantic and sweet. I loved it *_* I'm favoriting this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I didn't think the first version was bad, but I just jumped right into everything and there wasnt any detail whatsoever(is that one word?. So I took alot more time this time to find a good setting and know what they were doing before hand and like you said, what they were thinking directly. Thank you for favoriting and i'm happy you liked it.rnrnThank you for reading and taking time to review!rnrnP.S. I must say I love your writing and i'm in love with "By The Piano"
Date: 06/06/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
*mouth remains agape* :O
That was seriously fantastic, mhhmm.
I was questioning, 'what the fuck' when Tom announced that Bill had his own room. & then felt bad for Bill being all alone for a little bit.
[until Tomi came and saved the day. ba-badda-baaaa! XD]
As for their dinner.
H O L Y M O L Y , the food must have been absolutely divine for the cost on the check. [but it makes sense as it was in a super lovely restaurant ^^]
And what they ordered, Manicotti Formaggio and the Chicken, Oh goodness. Foods that I have no idea how to pronounce are always spelled like they would be delicious :D
I think you did a fantastic job on this.
* f a v i n g *
-Samantha
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! Lol, yes Tom had a surprise up his sleeve when he gave Bill his own key. If I was Bill I would be pissed off. I couldn't even imagine the cost of the bill. The food is delicious trust me. Fancy restraunts have the best food(but places like Burger King and Sonic are just as good =]) I tried really hard on ths story and I'm really happy you liked it. rnrnThank you for reading and taking time to review!rnrnBTW, I like the purple text, made me smile.
Date: 06/06/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
:D :D :D :D
I loved that.
It was very very sweet and sexy. :)
The entire concept was beautiful and the sex at the end was brilliant. (: Worth reading defiantly.
Mistakes I saw here you didn't " after ever dialog. And you wrote "he through the condom" not "threw".
Anyways, lovely fic! :D
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know, i'll go and fix that right now. I'm glad you liked it, I was a little worried about the sex but I think it was ok.rnrnThanks for reading and taking time to review!
Date: 06/06/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it, the first time i read it like the other night it stoped when Tom asked if Bill had been crying I was like WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha I loved this :) XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: lol. i realized that when it was posted it didnt even have half of what i had written. so i took it off and waited till it was accepted to add in the italics. sorry it cut you off. but im glad you liked it.rnrnThanks for reading and taking time to review
Date: 06/06/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
So detailed! Thats amazing! Much kudos to u! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! last time i posted i jumped right into the sex and didnt have alot of detail, plus it was badly written. But i took alot of time to write it this time. Happy you liked it!rnrnThanks for reading and taking time to review!