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Reviewer: Rocky Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/07 09:47 am Title: Chapter 5

This is a very lovely fic...

Author's Response: thank you very much =D

Reviewer: TH4everbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/31/07 12:45 am Title: Chapter 5

aww man that was awesome, i loved it

Author's Response: thank you very much for your comment... i'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: zere Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/07 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

well, this is your first, so it was pretty good for your first.
just a few things i would change, mainly just the way you wrote some stuff...
but other than that, nice story.
^^

Author's Response: thank you very much...=)...I'll try to write better stories...can you tell me the parts in which I could have done a better job? that would be great!

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