Date: 07/25/11 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 07/03/10 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, i LOVE how the twins aren't super close (that seems to happen in every single fic with twins... I'm not sure why xD) and I love the bitchery. I love bitchery in general. :)
Keep writing :)
Date: 06/06/10 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1
There aren't many stories out there that center around twin girls, and I find their relationship with each other pretty interesting. This story is very good for your first attempt at a fanfiction.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the twin sister angle and thanks for all your encouragement. I am trying to use the girls as a sort of modern day Cain and Abel. The fellow witer who inspired me to try my hand at fan fic was enthusiastic about the concept. I'll be working on chapter 2 this week. Hope you like it!
Date: 06/05/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay I'm interested .
It was a good introduction for the story.
I can't wait to read more.
And don't worry about trying to make it better .
You said earlier it was your first fic on here
so just write and let it lead you in the right
direction, but if there is something terribly wrong or silly or blaaaah ... Etc. I'm sure someone will let you know.
Sorry for the long ramble.
Have a nice night/day, whenever you read this, if you do.
:)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it and don't worry about the long ramble, I tend to travel that way myself most of the time! I am happy of any critique or suggestions afterall our goal as writers is to entertain , your job as readers is to help us to become better writers. I was thrilled to read the comments from people who read chapter 1 of my story. I still can't believe it was so well accepted! Whereever you are I hope you spend the night/day with someone you love, sometimes this can just be yourself. I'll be working on chapter 2 this week. I wish you peace and continued good reading. :)
Date: 06/05/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good start, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Short, but sweet. Thank you for your kind and supportive note. This is my first attempt at fan fic and I'm having so much fun I wonder I didn't do it long ago! I'll be working on chapter 2 this week so keep an eye open! :D