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Reviewer: Bizackiuke Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/13 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 5: In wich Bill goes through a nightmare

which and more.

Reviewer: veestone Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 02:25 am Title: Chapter 5: In wich Bill goes through a nightmare

I love this, very adventurous. Please write more!

Reviewer: Hinomaru Aki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/11 11:08 am Title: Chapter 5: In wich Bill goes through a nightmare

I donīt play computer games, but i like their stories. And this is really good. I want next chapters! xD

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: In which Bill buys a video game

omg m so gonna play later tonight!   i love the deadric quests!

Author's Response: *gasp* yes, another Elder Scrolls player! *dances* there will be Daedric Shrine quests in here, so look forward to that, hey? ^_^

Reviewer: Trauemer36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 5: In wich Bill goes through a nightmare

awesome chapter! i like the whole jostav pairing btw ;D and nice use of descriptive words and imagery.

Author's Response: hehe, the Jostav was fun. lol thanx! <3

Reviewer: Trauemer36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 4: In wich Bill gets an explanation

gahh i really need to get this game. it sounds addicting. good story so far

Author's Response: it is addicting. my heart BROKE when the computer with my epic game on it crashed and i had to start over.

Reviewer: candySmack Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 5: In wich Bill goes through a nightmare

Grrr... I wanna know what happens!

Author's Response: hehe. eventually...*innocent face*

Reviewer: candySmack Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 4: In wich Bill gets an explanation

AHH! David and Gustav?! And he ran into Tom didn't he?

Author's Response: YEAH David and Gustav! XD....*shifty eyes* MEBBE. lol

Reviewer: candySmack Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: In wich Bill recieves a mission

Does he wake up and get back into the real world? Cause that would be a good thing!

Author's Response: . . . mebbe. XD

Reviewer: candySmack Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 2: In which we start the quest

It better be the way out, he can't freakin die! Hopefully he finds Andi and the zombies don't pop again :)

Author's Response: zombies really aren't very tough..but they're rather alarming if you don't expect them. XD

Reviewer: candySmack Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: In which Bill buys a video game

I wanna know what happens next! On to the next chappie!!!

Author's Response: then read on, my friend! READ ON! XD

Reviewer: ashalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: In wich Bill goes through a nightmare

Hahahhaha. I remember the room with all of those shooting arrows. Legitly took me 40 minutes to do that pain! :) I think ur doing a great job telling the story though! :D

Author's Response: haha, i know...thanks so much!

Reviewer: squishy07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 5: In wich Bill goes through a nightmare

GAH! NO!!! you cut it off *growls* WHY? gah! i liked this quest! im glad bill is doing it!

Author's Response: because it's soeffinglong. lol

Reviewer: squishy07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 4: In wich Bill gets an explanation

GAH! the thief was Tom! lol anyway, i can't wait to read more of this! im really excited but unhappy thatt even though i'm your coauthor i get like NO sneak peeks. ITS UNCOOL! -sigh- ANYWAY, i like this chapter! they met, even if it was briefly!
Love,
Ashley

Author's Response: yes! i TOLD you they'd meet. ^_^ i'm sorry...but you were a reader before you were a coauthor. and...well, i like to surprise my readers. thanx!

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 3: In wich Bill recieves a mission

go bill!!! this is such a good story...i love this idea and can't wait for the next chapter...

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: squishy07 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: In wich Bill recieves a mission

OMFG IM A COAUTHOR! -flails and dies- I LOVE IT! it seems a bit diff than MY version of the game but oh well......IM A COAUTHOR!!! -dies-

Author's Response: YES YOU ARE. *revives* well...PC version. *shrug* YES YOU ARE...lol *revives again*

Reviewer: Trauemer36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 2: In which we start the quest

awesome story!! would love to read more!

Author's Response: yay! i'm so glad you liked. ^_^

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 02:07 am Title: Chapter 2: In which we start the quest

i remember this...and i played it badly too...that has got to be so awesome though...being in a video game...i've often thought of that...

Author's Response: hah, i briefly though about being in a game....then i realized i didn't wanna fight daedra without a 'quicksave' button. lol.

Reviewer: Tsantsii Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: In which we start the quest

I have never heard of this game (īcause don't like to play these things... duh :D )but that doesn't matter!

good start! did catch my interest. Keep going, i'm waiting to Tom apppear :D:D

Author's Response: thanks! don't worry, Tom will come. ^_^

Reviewer: ashalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 2: In which we start the quest

If u follow the main quest and stuff, that would be much more than epic!!! I have yet to finish the main quest let alone getting recomendations for the arcane university hahah. But I love that game! I think ur doing a great job writing this so far! :)

Author's Response: i intend to follow the quest somewhat...with just a few tweaks. (so no hints for you! lol) ahh...the university. what fun. ^_^ thanks so much!

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