Date: 07/15/10 04:54 pm Title: Help Me.
POOR TOMII!! BUT HOW DID THEY DIE, WHAT HAPPENED?! I FEEL SO SAD AND I REALLY FELT HIS PAIN TO LOOSE SOMEONE SO I CRIED TOO. I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE, AND I HOPE U UPDATE 2 CHAPTERS THIS TIME BECAUSE I CAN'T STAND IT ANYMORE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SOO MUCH THAT ITS UNBEARABLE, JUST WOW. I'M STILL KINDA SAD FOR WHAT HAPPENED.
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Date: 07/15/10 04:06 pm Title: Help Me.
*sobs* poor tom :'(
okay so im not actually crying but you know this seems kinda appropriate.. you killed his family!!!
brilliant chapter and looking 4ward 2 more X
Date: 07/15/10 03:33 pm Title: Help Me.
Wow you really left him with nobody. I expected the rivsl gsng to swing back for his people but not that drastic >.<
I wonder how Bill can help :/
Author's Response: Don't worry, their deaths were not in vain. There was a reason they all had to die, in order for the story to progress. There will be more of an explanation for it in later chapters. ^^
Date: 07/15/10 03:11 pm Title: Help Me.
aw poor tomi. i think billa and tomi should call eeach other that. love think chapter very sad. please update soon
Date: 07/15/10 02:39 pm Title: Help Me.
When I was first reading this chapter I was thinkin' "OH SHIT TOM'S GONNA RAGE OUT ON BILL!!!" but then I kept reading, and I unintentionally let out a sigh of relief at the end, because Tom actually does trust him, and Bill's helping him ^_^ I was internally having a celebration :D Update soon!!
Date: 07/15/10 02:27 pm Title: Help Me.
Omg, I can't believe Rafael died! =[. That's so sad. I can't wait to read what happens next. I love this story!
Date: 07/15/10 02:13 pm Title: Help Me.
I feel kinda bad after reading this...
When I logged on and saw this at the top of the "Recent Stories" list, I was like "Yes!"
Now I just feel so bad for Tom... :(
But I'm glad you updated. Can't wait for more!
Date: 07/15/10 02:05 pm Title: Help Me.
MOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEE
Im in a hurry so sorry for this bad review
Date: 07/13/10 02:24 pm Title: His Saviors.
Tom cared! *_* :D
Date: 07/13/10 01:03 pm Title: His Saviors.
yay.. he's fine!!!
thanks for the quick update..
no way.. this was a great chapter..I LOVED IT!!!
yes.. the G's are in your story!
its BRILLIANT STORY!
i like bill's reaction.. and im looking forward 2 more..
Date: 07/13/10 12:36 pm Title: His Saviors.
awwwww Tomi cares! Yay! Now update dammit., This is where everything is getting goood!!!! (Not that it wasn't before but yeah) Updatey!!!
Date: 07/13/10 12:00 pm Title: His Saviors.
*sobs* Tomi cares! *cries*
...OK i'm not really crying but it seemed like the appropriate response, no? lol
thanks for the update!
Date: 07/12/10 10:55 pm Title: His Saviors.
YAY update again like now please love this story.. love the update every day
Date: 07/12/10 09:52 pm Title: His Saviors.
AWWW....THATS SOO CUTE!!
WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT BETWEEN THE TWO BOYS? I REALLY WANT TO KNOW!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE!!
:)
Date: 07/12/10 09:43 pm Title: His Saviors.
awww damn how sweet of tom!!! *sighs* so cute!!^^
Date: 07/12/10 08:59 pm Title: His Saviors.
*in the tone of Weezie from Dragon Tales*
LOOOOOOOVE IT! :D
I get a morning and evening update! Yay!
Date: 07/12/10 08:14 pm Title: His Saviors.
YAY!!! Tom cares!! :D I wonder if Bill will like kind of lay back a bit from Tom u know (after he says thanks of course). Like make Tom kind go towards him now... and Bill just act normal the whole 'absence makes the heart grow fonder' thing idk. :P
Date: 07/12/10 06:22 pm Title: Unlikely Meeting.
woah oh my goodness he got shot ugh bill always has the wrong timeing