Date: 06/10/15 09:42 pm Title: Oh people
Aw man poor Bill :(
Date: 06/10/15 09:17 pm Title: Help
I love bushido too :D like as an artist, not the character haha. Most people here hate him and think he's an asshole but hey, i think Billshido is hot af so there is no way i can hate him. But back to the fic, grrr Bill kind of makes me angry here because it's like he doesn't even care about his baby. I mean yes he does but he isnt fightig for her. :(
Date: 06/10/15 09:06 pm Title: Right back
Why did Bill do that!! It was clear Bushido was just gonna come and take the baby :( i dont care if she is Bushidos too and he wants her because Bill cares more, i know :(
Date: 06/10/15 08:57 pm Title: Where are you going
Aw Bill is so caring as a 'mum' looking for a basket for his baby. I feel really bad for him- he's so lost :(
Date: 06/10/15 08:45 pm Title: My baby
Omg this is so intriguing! Ive never read something like this before but i'm in love with the plot already. How Tom is really caring and looking after this baby and then Bill, who you can tell is completely broken and has kind of no choice about where his baby gets to be. I hope he doesnt overreact to Tom!
Date: 08/31/14 11:26 am Title: Chapter 12
I hope you will continue this story
Date: 01/22/11 09:13 am Title: Oh people
I was just going through my favs, and figured I would catch up with this story, and I find my username on the top :D Made me happy ^^;
I hope you update soon, and I will be a better reviwer ;3
Date: 09/27/10 09:57 pm Title: My baby
hehehehe!
awe!
thanks! hhahahahaha i feel dumb ! ahah but i loooove your story!
Author's Response: thank you.
Date: 09/25/10 12:53 pm Title: My baby
hehehhe :) your welcome ( :
god, i wish something would smack him in the face! (oh i should have saved that for another review!) tom is a sweetie! haha yes!! july could just sit there and ide still review her! lool.
your welcome! thanks for an amzing story!
Author's Response:
Date: 09/16/10 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
bill....just leave bushido!
aw, toms to sweet. (:
july (:
Author's Response:
Date: 09/13/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww dont stress yourself out with the word count hun, however much you wanna write is fine for me :)
And I wish Bill would interact with July more. I just dont get a parental vibe from him
Author's Response:
Date: 09/13/10 03:02 am Title: Chapter 12
cute last image. thanks for the update. =)
Author's Response:
Date: 09/12/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
ohh.. I was really scared July wasn't going to be okai.....
Author's Response:
Date: 08/27/10 06:28 pm Title: My baby
oh its no big ;)
i try to review all (:
Author's Response: :3 Thank you, you're so kind<3
Date: 08/27/10 10:34 am Title: And the rain pushed you back
aweeeeee!
daddy tom!! hehehe
Author's Response: Yah Daddy Tom ^____^ I really thank you for reviewing nearly every chapter. :D Really, thanks. :')
Date: 08/25/10 04:18 am Title: And the rain pushed you back
Well, Anis doesn't know where tom lives, so Bill should just stay there. forever.
Author's Response:
Date: 08/24/10 11:55 pm Title: My baby
*flutterclaps vigorously*
I love when I come home from an exhausting day of school to find that stories I'm following have updated.
There really is nothing better than indulging yourself in a fictional universe where your mind can rest at ease (:
Before I tell you my thoughts on this particular chapter, I wanted to do two things:
-Congratulate you on the sixty reviews ^^
You're already almost at seventy so hopefully you will get there tonight (:
- Address the fic you are writing with OWL. I haven't read any of the chapters, or the authors notes or anything, but there are a few warnings listed that usually give me a scare. The "major character death" & "suicide" warnings. {just because I don't like when one of the twins die} So if you think it's still safe for me to read the chapters you two have posted so far, let me know. I'll take your word for it ;)
O N . T O . T H E . S T O R Y (:
I really liked this chapter ^^
{Am I repetitive in saying that? I hope not, if so, it's only because it's been completely true everytime}
The beginning, I had to go back and read it twice {not because I couldn't comprehend it, I just wanted to make sure everything was prim and proper in my mind ^^} & I enjoyed the way you narrated Bill's confusion. I thought you did a good job and showing how he couldn't distinguish between reality, flashback, or nightmare until the thought of Andi sparked his memory.
I'm worried for itty bitty July. I hope the poor baby has just a minor case of the shivers or of a cold. It would be devestating to Bill {& perhaps even Tom} for her to fall ill with something major.
& CAN I GET A WOOP-WOOP FOR TOM? :DD
I'm always happy when he pops into the story. I love the tenderness he shows towards July, its heartwarming (:
{not to mention, everytime I think of Tom and a baby I think of how sexy of a dad he would be. *-*}
Bill's reaction to Tom giving the warm water to July, was a bit shocking. I suppose he is just aggravated/irratated with everything else going on. We shall see how that plays out in the next chapter I suppose (:
Wonderful Update Dear (:
Looking foward to more as Always.
-----Samantha
P.S. I hope this review doesn't turn out to be one big piece of Scheisse. I don't really have much time to re-word anything, since I need to get some sleep.
Author's Response:
My school has not started yet.. Sept. 7 for me! :D I'm glad my fic is one of those that eases your mind. ^_^ Yay thanks, now I have 70 reviews. I feel amazing. xD Suicide is not the twins, they will not kill themselves. Major Character death goes for a few things, which I cannot explain. Hmm... well, there is death in chapter 2... but nothing to do with the twins... XD OMG just read it. xDDD Man up haha. No you don't have to seriously. But I'd be amazing if you did.
rnSTORY TEIM. rnAw you reread it? x3 That makes me smile. really does. :)rnCchh, I thought I was failing at that. xDrnTom is like... the sunshine of the story. *.* XD I hope it is, heartwarming.rn{sexy daddy Tom omg yes !_!}rnHe is. :) Next chapter will be different.rnThank you for reviewing means a lot to me.rnNo, it's not a big piece of Scheisse. We had a power outage & when I got on I saw this big fat purple review at 2 am.. I died. :) Now I hope you got yourself that sleep. :p :) and thanks again!
Date: 08/24/10 09:03 pm Title: And the rain pushed you back
Dear Bill,
You're pissing me off with your asshattery. Get yourself together boy!
Love,
Elle
This short review will be the death of me!
Author's Response:
Date: 08/24/10 08:45 pm Title: And the rain pushed you back
Bill is pissing me off with his bad parenting. Get it together Biu! Good chappy though :D
Author's Response:
Date: 08/24/10 06:14 pm Title: And the rain pushed you back
Why is Bill acting like such a bitch? I mean Tom was just trying to help him and he just got mad and yells at Tom. I really don't understand Bill sometimes.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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