Date: 06/14/10 05:15 am Title: 4. I Never Want To See You Again
Grrrr! that Jorg! I knew he'd find a way to corner Bill and say something. Interesting that when Bill entered his room he thought it felt cold and then saw Jorg in there. *shudders*
Loving this! Can't wait for more! Hope you have a great senior week! :D
Author's Response: Senior week was great! It was basically the last time I'll see my friends before college, and we had so much fun there!! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 06/13/10 11:01 am Title: 4. I Never Want To See You Again
NOOO!!! Please update soon, I loved the first story from this series, so I was bored and searched you up to see if you had started the sequal, i couldn't believe you've already done four chapters, im sooo thrilled!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you've kept up with this series! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 06/13/10 10:35 am Title: 4. I Never Want To See You Again
This story, counting it's first part, have made me laugh, cry, and feel really strange. You have a gift with writing, it's driving me crazy that I know I have to wait for your next update >.<
I saw your accomplishment in the final chapter of the previous story and wanted to say that that's great :) I have a friend who was diagnosed with anorexia our freshman year (we're juniors now) and he continues to struggle with it badly. I hope he, as well as you, can completely rid yourselves of this disease one day. Another friend was diagnosed with bulimia last year and she has yet to return to school or answer any phone calls. :/
Reading this story, especially the scenes where we see Bill throwing away food and avoiding the cafeteria, has let me see a little into my friends' minds and the problems they are going through.
This chapter: Ack! I wanna murder Jorg! :( Poor Bill and dumb Tomi for not realizing something fishy was going on when Jorg hugged Bill! But um...good for his step-mom, I guess..Though I don't understand why she didnt't leave when she knew about the physical abuse. Wasn't she worried it would be aimed at her?? I hate women like that :/ If I were ever in a situation when a child was being abused, that man had better pray I leave enough of him for the cops to identify. Abuse is something that played a role in my past and not something I will allow in my future. I can't believe she didn't realize something sexual was happening between Jorg and Bill though, I mean, how could she not wonder where he went at night or whose blood and cum were on the sheets of Bill's bed previously?! Gah!
I hope your senior week is amazing :)
Author's Response: I'm very happy that you enjoy my story so much!! I wish I could update more frequently, but right now I'm a bit swamped with personal stuff. Hopefully everything will calm down over the next few weeks and I can get back into writing mode. :)rnrnIt's wonderful that you're friends are getting help for their eating disorders. I've never been diagnosed, which sucks because I sometimes think that no problem exists, even though I am positive that I have an ed. I'm very scared of entering an eating disorder clinic, so I don't know well I'd be able to handle proper treatment. It's also hard for me to accept that there's a problem because as of now, I'm not in danger of dying...rnrnBill's stepmother did not know that the sexual abuse existed because when she moved in, Jorg virtually stopped that form of abuse. He only sexually abused Bill twice after she began living with them- once when Bill was drunk and tried to commit suicide, and second when Bill was drugged by Bushido after the club scene. The stepmom only knew about the physical abuse and because she was only linked to the family by money (Jorg's rich), she didn't do anything about it. Plus she might have been blamed for neglect if she went to the police about it anyways...rnrnAnd yea, senior week was incredible :)
Date: 06/12/10 10:27 pm Title: 3. Cleaning Out My Closet
*pets about Note #3*
Also, that's pretty smart of Bill's step-mom to get out of there. I hadn't given her that much credit before, and she may not deserve it, but I do admire women that can recognize a bad situation and gtfo. :)
Date: 06/12/10 07:09 pm Title: 4. I Never Want To See You Again
at least your fast at updating your stories
Author's Response: *hangs head* I haven't updated that much recently... faster updates will come soon :)
Date: 06/12/10 05:36 pm Title: 4. I Never Want To See You Again
o what a great chapter! but im sad no updates! :( but have fun on senior week! :)
Author's Response: New chapter's up!! :)
Date: 06/12/10 03:50 pm Title: 4. I Never Want To See You Again
I'm so happy bill is finally out of that house. I cant believe a father would have the balls to do that to his child.
Author's Response: I think Jorg's already proved that he's just a huge asshole who doesn't give a shit about anyone else.... He'll get it in the end though *winks*
Date: 06/12/10 01:26 pm Title: 4. I Never Want To See You Again
Eff Jorg I say!
Can't wait till next week!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/12/10 10:34 am Title: 4. I Never Want To See You Again
Love. As usual. Can you just knock Jorg off already? What an ass! And I'm totally waiting for Bill and Tom to fall in love! :) LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Ohh don't worry, Jorg will definately get what's coming to him eventually. But we've still got quite a bit to go before then ;D
Date: 06/10/10 04:55 am Title: 3. Cleaning Out My Closet
Wut do u want bills dad to get???
Author's Response: I want Bill's dad to get exposed for all of the terrible things he did to Bill (in When You Lose Something YOu Cannot Replace). He molested, abused, raped, and hated Bill, and he got away with it without any civil punishment. I want him to be punished for it, to tie up some loose ends. :)
Date: 06/10/10 04:44 am Title: 1. Welcome Home Bill
I think you shud use dear Agony by breaking Benjamin cuz it wud sorta make sense with the story :) I really like this story btw and I was totally surprised u made a sequel to the when you lose something you can't replace :D I loved tht story :)
Date: 06/09/10 03:56 pm Title: 3. Cleaning Out My Closet
Good to see you again. I believe i shall come to enjoy this story as much as the last. And just so you know, if you ever need to talk about stuff, you can email me.
Author's Response: Nice to see you again too! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story so far. And thanks, if I ever need to talk, I won't hesitate to contact you. :)
Date: 06/09/10 10:30 am Title: 3. Cleaning Out My Closet
yay sequel!! im really glad your doing a sequel and i know its gonna be brilliant..i cant wait for more and the first few chapters are great..i hate jorg..something horrible should happen to him..btw you have good taste in music.. i love the tracks you mentioned at the start of each chapter..
have you heard alejandro by lady gaga? thats the song i have blasting out through my headphones at the mo...
Take care (update soon) xXx
Author's Response: I agree, something horrible should happen to Jorg!!! And I know exactly what!!! But you'll have to wait a little while for that...*grins* Thanks! I'm glad you enjoy my taste in music. And actually, I'm listening to Alejandro right now ironically... Alejandro is my favorite song from the Monster album, and when I saw Gaga live, this was the most kick ass dance number. :)
Date: 06/09/10 08:11 am Title: 3. Cleaning Out My Closet
Thank you for everything that you share in this story, it really means a lot to me. and it seems like these chapters are shorter then the ones in "when you lose something you cannot replace" but thats prob just me cause i read that story in one sitting after you finished it. so its torture to have to wait. but when you finally do upload the next chapter its always so good. i love the way you write!!! thank you again for this story! and all of your chapter notes!
Author's Response: These chapters are a bit shorter (for now!) because I'm just starting up again and I haven't gotten to the main plot yet. DOn't worry, the chapters will definately start getting longer. New chapter today!! :)
Date: 06/09/10 03:12 am Title: 3. Cleaning Out My Closet
I'm glad Bill and his stepmom made up sort of. Glad she's leaving him too.
Of course now I'm wondering if Bill's dad is going to start stalking Bill since he has no one to play with.
Great story! Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad too, now that Jorg is being left by everyone. Hm... interesting thought. *winks* You'll have to wait and see!!! XD
Date: 06/09/10 02:31 am Title: 3. Cleaning Out My Closet
I loved that you had that slight reconciliation scene with Bill and his stepmother. Even if they hardly like each other, it really helped tie up loose ends. I wonder where Jorg will go from here? I would love it if a rather unfortunate accident happened to him...:3 Either that, or I want him to comprehend even one tenth of the emotional damage he did and repent. Although, that's highly unlikely so I think I'll stick with the first. :3
Please update again soon! This is one of my favorite series on this site.
Author's Response: Well, Jorg will definately be reappearing later in this fic. *winks* But I doubt that when he reappears it will be to repent. ;D
Date: 06/09/10 01:37 am Title: 3. Cleaning Out My Closet
I never noticed that Bill's "mom" never had a name until you said something, lolz. Makes sense though.
Will Bill show Tom his journals? That would be interesting. And wasn't he keeping one while he had amnesia?
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Lol. I don't think anyone else noticed either... Hm... that's an interesting idea. Maybe, maybe not!! You'll have to wait and see! And yes, Bill was keeping one while he had amnesia. :)
Date: 06/08/10 10:14 pm Title: 2. He's Back Again
wow such a good start off to the second one im sooo excited i really want bill to get his memory back!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!!! Hm... we'll see... :)
Date: 06/08/10 08:56 pm Title: 1. Welcome Home Bill
Codplay"Yellow"-for you i bleed myself dry
Date: 06/08/10 02:11 pm Title: 2. He's Back Again
cant wait, cant wait, cant wait!!!! for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! XD