Date: 06/08/10 03:14 pm Title: [[HABiiTS]]
The song is awesome and the fic is too I love it :D
Date: 06/08/10 02:45 pm Title: [[HABiiTS]]
Why does they hate eacother? I really didn't get it? XDD
Date: 06/08/10 02:11 pm Title: [[HABiiTS]]
that was hot, but ultimately sad it kinda broke my heart at the end there, i would like ot see more ...and maybe see them happy? for once? and for longer than just ten hours... maybe?
Author's Response: I've decided, that I'm to dedicate this to you and Sechslings, because the only reason why I wrote this was because I was kinda upset that I didn't win, and people kinda starting saying that the only reason I was nominated was because I was popular, not because I write good fics [which makes no sense, in order to be popular, your fics MUST ROCK!] and that I'm just original--no talent and I wanted to kinda prove to people i can do more than just rom-comedy fiction and do something smutty and dramatic. For you ladies, I'll rite at least three more. ::hugs::
Date: 06/08/10 12:13 pm Title: [[HABiiTS]]
Here I was thinking how beautiful, hot and sexy this chapter was--(it was HOT)but the ending made me think-WTF?
This story is so interesting-ready for more...
Date: 06/08/10 10:02 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
This has the potential to become a full-out story with several chappies. It's one of those ideas that works well short but can work even better if you expand. I really enjoyed this.
Date: 06/08/10 09:56 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
NEEEEEEEIN! It's DONE?! Nooooo! Please don't stop here! This fic has got so much potential, I think you should definlitely continue it. It could be like, Tom and Bill trying to hide it from the world, and lot's of drama happens, maybe someone finds out, blah blah blah. Pluhleeeas!
Date: 06/08/10 08:56 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
Whoa! Damn, that was so very hot, but I'm a bit confused, they're twins?
I'd love to read those shots if you write them, especially if they're as unbelievably hot and awesome as this was. :D
Date: 06/08/10 07:09 am Title: [[Bad]]
he almost kills him yet he goes to see him every saturday? i guess you can't help how you feel sometimes...
Date: 06/08/10 06:01 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
:O omg!!! I mean.. WOW!! u're master of words... :D Absolutely unbelievable!! I really, REALLY love this story!! :D and.. wow!!! :) I'm already hooked on this xD please, please update soon again :)
Date: 06/08/10 05:39 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
Wow!!! I love this and the song is pretty awesome! Just Wow O_O
Date: 06/08/10 05:23 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
This really blew my mind. Brains out and all. My GOD this was so awesome...ahhhh.
Date: 06/08/10 04:58 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
woah they are twins? but they have different names and parents...at least i thought they did. o.o *is cornfuzzled* i am liking this though. ^_^
Date: 06/08/10 04:55 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
no this definitly needs a couple of more chapters! So onlythe twins know their twins? 0.o and why do they have diffrent last names?
I would have loved it if their friends find out their little secret.......by accident xD
Date: 06/08/10 04:19 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
Okay now that you've told me that I'm going to be anticipating it! It just sound so juicy of a story to read, yes please add the extra chapter :)
Date: 06/08/10 04:12 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
Holy mother of god!!! I don't belive in god, but still... They're twins!? Totally didn't see that coming, but so sad :( why did it have to end like that...? But i really love this anyway :)
Date: 06/08/10 04:04 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
DAMN! This chapter was just pure smut with a bit of fluff! They fucked EVERYWHERE! I loved that you put the computer chair! I was like 'Dammmmmmn!' Lol! I personally dont think they could stop if they wanted to and the twin brother thing killed me! I was like 'WHAT?!?!' I never would of thought!
Excellent job! :)
Author's Response: Hey Brittany! And heck yeah! I did my job then with smut and I'm happy you were surprised! I was going for all of those things! And I had sex on a rolly chair...landed straight on my face and he keep going lol I'm going to go call boyfriend and tell him he sucks!!!!! XD! :D thanks for the review! Your awesome!
Date: 06/08/10 04:02 am Title: [[HABiiTS]]
Whoa!!! That was insanely hot...and the kicker was def the realization that they are twins in this universe as well!
Okay, I've thought able it and I really, really, feel that it cannot end here. I sense an entire chapter-ed story here, I want, no I need to know the background of the story. I can imagine it but I want to know what you were thinking when you wrote it.
The conversation at the end of the story was def an indication that there is a back story to how they got into that situation in the first place. Like they loved each other and all that before they realized they were twins. Or they knew they were twins etc before but then fell into this weird (but in a good way) relationship that they eventually gave into. And now the story "Bad Habits" occurs somewhere in the middle of the story. I hope I'm explaining what I'm trying to say ;)
Any who, thanks for sharing this!
-Sabrina
Author's Response: Firstly, thanks for hitting the nail directly on the head. The backstory of this piece of fiction is great since I revealed that they are indeed identical twins. I justed want my readrs mind to tickle with three things--why they hate each other, have sex and have different last names. You've got it!:D thanks for the review! I might add a chapter explaining what happened next. Even I have this emty feeling!
Date: 06/07/10 11:34 am Title: [[Bad]]
this is really good! :D
but please dont make it a two-shot D,:
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not :D thanks for the review! Your awesome!
Date: 06/05/10 09:21 pm Title: [[Bad]]
I love it so far please write more soon!!
Author's Response: :D thanks for the review! Your awesome!