Date: 08/04/10 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 11 - It feels empty
OMG, poor Tom, i feel so sorry for him, but please update again soon!!! :)
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as my betaread will send me back the next chapter, promise! :)
Date: 08/04/10 10:34 am Title: Chapter 11 - It feels empty
Oh jeez such a filthy lie O.O LIES I hate them!!!! Alex is just like Tom so I hope he doesn't fall for that >.>
But wow I know she doesn't want to lose them but she's making things worse for them, hurting them by saying daddy doesn't love them :(
Author's Response: Well, she thinks it's the best way how to keep the little twins. Though, she didn't realize that she's hurting them, but don't worry, she'll find out one day, maybe really soon. Thanks for reading this story!! *hugs*
Date: 08/01/10 02:19 am Title: Chapter 10 - Something is wrong
aww sweet...sad...and wonderful :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! :))
Date: 07/31/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Something is wrong
Oh, poor little twins, younger and older. What is going to do? Tom is definitely a week off, so he definitely will look for their sons. :o) J.
Author's Response: Trust me, he will and what he'd found won't be nice :( But he's not that weak, I hope he'll manage it :))
Date: 07/31/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Something is wrong
Awesome can't wait :D
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)) I'll update as soon as I can!
Date: 07/31/10 11:42 am Title: Chapter 10 - Something is wrong
grrrr i dont know if i can read this story im very ticked off now. i hate that old fart and the twins mom. the bitchs
Author's Response: I hope you can read it, though! Yeah, the two of them are little bit... well, bitchs but it's just the way the story is :) I promise it won't last much longer!
Date: 07/31/10 10:18 am Title: Chapter 10 - Something is wrong
I don't think I will be able to read the next chapter where you break his heart :( The suspense of this one was amazing though. I hope Tome doesn't blame Bill, he's only one persone and those twins are a handful to deal w/.
Author's Response: If it's better for you to survive next chapter, I can tell you that in chapter 12 everything will started to go the right way again. Slowly but surely! And believe me, Tom's heart is much stronger than he knows now, so don't worry too much about him :))
Date: 07/30/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - You're not taking them away
O...M....G that was awesome! The ending fight scene, Fran's evil bitchieness.....whew...drama all up and through and I like it.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you like it! This story is my first in English so it's like my baby and it makes me really, really happy when people like it! And yeah, the drama it's only at the beginning...
Date: 07/26/10 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 - At Mike's
hehe yayayayay cant wait then
Author's Response: :)))
Date: 07/25/10 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - You're not taking them away
Two words.
Holy. Hell.
Author's Response: :D:D Thanks much!
Date: 07/25/10 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 9 - You're not taking them away
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg more more more more more more more more please
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can! Promise!
Date: 07/25/10 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 9 - You're not taking them away
He should have known better than to threaten Tom's babies XD
Bill's convo was a bit strange O.O I hope the boys are still there >.>
Author's Response: Well, you'll see ;)) And yeah, you're right, Aaron is... well, Aaron! :D
Date: 07/25/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 9 - You're not taking them away
OMG AWESOME CAN'T WAIT :D
Author's Response: Glad you like it!! Next chapter will be here, well, as soon as possible! :))
Date: 07/25/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 9 - You're not taking them away
im crying. but if u think taking the twins away is best for ur story i think bill and tom shouldnt talk to simone anymore ever and tom should become really bad till he gets what he wantsss. update soon
Author's Response: You know, when I started writing this story I didn't know where it'd lead but now I'm pretty aware about the direction it's taking. But yeah, I agree they should not talk to their mother anymore, but hey, she's their mother and did just what she thought was best for them. I'll try update soon, though.
Date: 07/24/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Chipmunks
damn that was messed up what she said
Author's Response: It was, right? I don't like her too much but at some point I understand her, at some point - and I don't know what the point is!
Date: 07/14/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Chipmunks
Those two little guys are amazingly cute: o) I think it is possible Francizka blaming Tom for the death of her daughter... subconsciously maybe. For her, Tom is an irresponsible teenager, who can not take care of their children. I hope they resolve it, because the relationship of Tom and his twins is amazing. Uncle Bill is perfect for them, so hopefully it can handle together. Perfect, I enjoyed the wonderful J.> :o)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, Janul. It means a lot to me. Well, Francizska just wanted Tom to know his babies but she never expected them to like him that much and when little boys want nothing more than their Daddy, so she's afraid of losing them. I can't blame her, though, but she's overreacted. I hope you'll enjoy next chapter as much! D. :))
Date: 07/14/10 10:11 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Chipmunks
Your English isn't bad really. I knew exactly what you were trying to say. You could use an online *What language do you speak* to English.
Besides that, Francizska has some issues
Author's Response: I'm glad you understand my English. As soon as my beta-read will send me correct version of this chapter, I'll repost it, thought. And believe me, I tried online "Czech-to-English" translator but it was much worse than my own English xD Yeah, Francizska has some issues but I think it's kind of undestandable to the situation she is in.
Date: 07/13/10 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Chipmunks
Started reading your story today and think it is awsome and your English isn't that bad!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you like my story! I hope you'll like what's in next chapters, too! :))
Date: 07/13/10 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Chipmunks
fran can go to hell. sorry love the story update soon
Author's Response: Well, she might eventually go, but who knows. I'm happy you like it! I'll update as soon as possible, promise! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/13/10 02:00 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Chipmunks
i think its perfect!!
ur english isnt bad :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your opinion - on my Englisch and on the story! :))