Date: 09/20/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 16 - I love you
aww i love this story so much
Author's Response: I only can say: Thank you, thank you, thank you! It means a lot to me that someone really likes this story!
Date: 09/20/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 16 - I love you
Oh, this is so emotional! I'm smiling all the time that I read this chapter. I am happy with Tom. He is a sweetheart, as he loves his kids. He gets his twins, I believe Miriam, she will not betray him. :-) J. :o)
Author's Response: She will not, you already know that ;) :)) Yeah, Tom's really cute here I love him with kids so I hope it is visible here, too! :)) Thanks so much for reading this, Jani :) *kiss*
Date: 09/20/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 16 - I love you
awwwwww!!! so cute :D exited for next chapter :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Next chapter will be here maybe on Sunday or Monday ;)
Date: 09/15/10 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 15 - I screwed up
Wow! They kissed! This is a conflict of interest, is not it? :-D I hope this will not affect the court decision, that no one may know!
I am very curious about the next chapter! Perfect! J. :o)
Author's Response: Well, I haven't planed this, but my fingers write what they want to, so yeah... they kissed. But I hope Miriam is a really smart girl and won't do anything bad or so to Tom. She's smart, she knows what she can or can't do. :) .... But thank you! I apprasiate it! :))
Date: 09/14/10 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 15 - I screwed up
Wow :D it's awesome :D can't wait :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!! ;D
Date: 09/14/10 08:50 am Title: Chapter 15 - I screwed up
oh wow!
Author's Response: I hope it's a good wow! ;) :)
Date: 09/09/10 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The court is in a month and half from today
Finally! I'm glad the court that will be soon. Tom certainly has to get his boys! I look forward to the next chapter. J. :o)
Author's Response: Well, since it is about children I think it's for the best to have the court as soon as possible, and it is almost right after Tom's eighteenth birthdays :) .... The next chapter will be here, well, have no idea when! :D But I'll try soon :) .... Thanks so much, Jani *kiss*
Date: 09/08/10 04:25 am Title: Chapter 14 - The court is in a month and half from today
It's awesome and I don't want it to end :( can't wait :D
Author's Response: Well, everything has to come to end :D But don't worry, there are at least three chapters left :))
Date: 09/08/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 14 - The court is in a month and half from today
i LOVE it and im gonna cry when its over
Author's Response: Oh, I hope you won't cry! I don't like when people are crying because of me!! But I'm still glad you like it that much! Thank you! :))*
Date: 09/07/10 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The court is in a month and half from today
lol it seems like Tom is gonna be pacing the floor for a month and a half XD
Alex is so adorable, he made me melt him and his Theodore plushie :D
Author's Response: oh no, don't worry, Tom has other things to do :D .... but okay, I admit it, I love Alex and I really enjoy writing his parts! :))
Date: 08/30/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 13 - Eric, the lawyer and a social worker
omg i hate that old lady. someone kill her!
Author's Response: Pure Francizska, such a hate xD But I agree, she's... ugh! I myself have no word for her so I kind of underastand to you...
Date: 08/29/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Eric, the lawyer and a social worker
Wow awesome can't wait it's really great and I hate Francizska >.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter is already under betareading, so it should be soon - I hope! Well, Francizska... you all hate her! :D
Date: 08/12/10 08:52 am Title: Chapter 12 - Friday
yeah but i still have hate for there mom
Date: 08/11/10 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Friday
Okay, I'm glad that their mother is with her sons. Fighting in court will be hard. Tom is young, he will have to convince the judge. I keep my fingers crossed for Tom! J.: o)
Author's Response: Well, Janul, you've got it right! Thumbs up for you!! :D:D Thanks for Tom he'll need it but hope with me and believe in him; he might be young but he loves his childern more than anything (well, I don't count Bill, sure).
Date: 08/11/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Friday
I'll just say can't wait awesome :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ;D
Date: 08/08/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 11 - It feels empty
woa thats woa
Author's Response: :))
Date: 08/05/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - It feels empty
franciszka or what ever her name is isnt a nice lady :(
Author's Response: You right, she isn't :( But I hope you like the story, I can promise you she won't be there much longer - I hope! She's a strong lady and tries to stay there really hard! :) Don't be sad!! :-*
Date: 08/04/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 11 - It feels empty
ILL FUCKING KILL HER! WHO THAT FUCK SAYS THAT TO KIDS!? im sorry i took this to heart because right now drama with my brothers r going on and i just grr stuff like what she said to them is what my mom said about me and my sister to our brothers.. sry to blow up on u.. please update soon
Author's Response: It's okay, I don't take it personally :) And I sort of know how do you feel. Something like this had happened to my sister with her father when she was a little girl. It wasn't the same situation, but it was really alike. And then my own grandmather is kind of that woman who says "Don't stay with that woman, just pay her aliments." so this is where I took my inspirations. Please, don't be mad at me for her! I promise I'll kick her ass!! :D ..... I'll update as soon as I can!
Date: 08/04/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 11 - It feels empty
Well, Deni, you say that she's don't be bad? But good granny would have never said this: “Your Daddy does not love you anymore.”
I think that Francizka is bad grandmother. Psychologically, she hurt children more than if they spanked your ass. This is something that would hurt a child very much, and she knows it, if she is not stupid. Guys trust her and they believe her that their father loves them not.
She does everything better for myself, not for children. This can not be forgiven. She is definitely a bad woman for me, even if she meant it well.. I keep my fingers crossed for Tom to get the boys into his care. :o) J.
Author's Response: I know you're right, nobody says that to children if they are in their clear mind, but she's not. In this moment she would do everything to persuade twins that she's the one who loves them so they would stay with her willingly. I know it's not right and I kind of hate her, too, but well yeah ... Don't be afraid, I think Tom will get their custody :))
Date: 08/04/10 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 11 - It feels empty
I hate Francizska :/ can't wait :)
Author's Response: Next chapter will be here soon, I hope. And in that chapter will be no Francizska so I hope it would be easier for you :)