Date: 06/07/10 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
awesome smut and sex - awesome. ;) I love all the kinkiness. Bill needs some rimming from Raine - I'm just sayin'
woohoo!
lol, and I'm older too, so rock on. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much. I'm glad you're enjoying my little story. It's going to get better really soon. Yay another oldie but goodie! <3
Date: 06/07/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 14
Oooh wow . Tom and A.J that's a first . Next one
Author's Response: Poor Tom. He's just not sure whether he's enjoying A.J. or not. But guess what? He is. <3
Date: 06/06/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hahahaha horniest guide :)
next one? :)
Author's Response: I just posted it and I'm waiting for them to validate. Happy reading. <3
Date: 06/06/10 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yeah it's just a little different having someone a little older post these sort of stories . That is all, but if that little older person posts stories like this I'm all for it .
Author's Response: I'm glad because the second one I'm working on for this site is twincest. That should rattle a few cages. :D I'm glad you're enjoying and I'm now going to post chapter 14 cause I just finished it. Hope you enjoy future chapters and thanks for sticking with me. <3
Date: 06/06/10 09:59 am Title: Chapter 12
oh my fuckable Tom
im sooo fucking turned on right now...
damn that was fucking hot!!!!
more more more more more more
i need more xD
and noooo way in hell did u go overboard on this chapter...i enjoyed it veryyyyyyy much xD
ehehehehe
Author's Response: I am sooooo glad you are enjoying it. I wasn't sure if I should go so far but what the hell eh? Might as well go nuts. <3
Date: 06/06/10 09:56 am Title: Chapter 12
oh my fuckable Tom
im sooo fucking turned on right now...
damn that was fucking hot!!!!
more more more more more more
i need more xD
and noooo way in hell did u go overboard on this chapter...i enjoyed it veryyyyyyy much xD
ehehehehe
Date: 06/06/10 06:52 am Title: Chapter 12
Mmm okay you're 59, are you serious?
That is a little seedy.
Either way it's a good story.
Author's Response: I'm a little curious at what my age has to do with anything. Would it matter if I was 14? Is my age a problem? Anyway, I'm glad you're enjoying it and it will probably get a lot more seedy as I continue. Just a warning. :D
Date: 06/06/10 03:48 am Title: Chapter 11
Wow. That was good. What's your name? And how old are you? This is goodi would like the next one soon :P :)
Author's Response: My name is Maril and I am 59. I'm glad you're enjoying my little story. I've already sent in the next chapter so I hope you enjoy it. <3
Date: 06/06/10 03:23 am Title: Chapter 10
"For fuck's sake guys get the hell offa me. You weigh a ton. Especially you Tom."
Author's Response: You likee! <3
Date: 06/05/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
i'm addicted to this story
good job :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was worried that his chapter was a little boring. <3
Date: 06/05/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm if you make it a little twincest you might lose a reader or two. Eg. Tanuix I know she hates that shit. But ashamed as I feel for saying this I find it quite a turn on. Hehe. So I don't know if you want to do it . I have no problem with it as long as it doesn't take up the whole story because it will change it heaps. But yeah I have no problems with it . And thank you for replying to my review :)
Date: 06/05/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm if you make it a little twincest you might lose a reader or two. Eg. Tanuix I know she hates that shit. But ashamed as I feel for saying this I find it quite a turn on. Hehe. So I don't know if you want to do it . I have no problem with it as long as it doesn't take up the whole story because it will change it heaps. But yeah I have no problems with it . And thank you for replying to my review :)
Author's Response: I'm not going to put any twincest into this particular fanfic. I am writing another story completely. I think having both Bill and Tom involved with Raine is quite enough for my first story. Thank you for all your comments. They mean a great deal to me. I'm just about finished the next chapter. So hopefully within the next 30 minutes I should post it. Hope it doesn't disappoint. <3
Date: 06/05/10 10:18 am Title: Chapter 10
Wouldn't it be cool if you add some twincest? I think Raine would like to see that, lol.
Author's Response: Don't think I haven't though of it. I have something in my mind but I might save the twincest for my next story. <3
Date: 06/05/10 09:42 am Title: Chapter 10
Hhhehe Tom and raine shall keep coming and coming and coming ;D hehehehehehe. Well what can I say? I absolutely fucking love this story.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are loving this story. I am loving writing it let me tell you. <3
Date: 06/05/10 03:35 am Title: Chapter 9
WHOA! WHAT? Yeah baby xD That was definately a surprise. Shit I think I need a cigarette now! WOW! I don't know what else to say, so yeah O_O
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying this little piece of fluff. What the hell would I do without you and your comments? I don't know and I certainly don't want to find out. Thank you again sweetie. <3
Date: 06/05/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter 8
Lmao! When everyone was wishing her good luck I swear I was thinking the same thing she was before i'd even read it. I'm happy they made it official. I love it!
Date: 06/05/10 03:19 am Title: Chapter 7
WHOA! Nice visual there, I pictured the whole thing lol. Fuck I was trying to imagine him with his hair down and then dripping wet from the shower. I would love to see at least one picture of his hair without the braids xD Another fantastic one!
Date: 06/05/10 03:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Awwwwwwwwww! I'm cheesin' like a fuckin' idiot coz i'm so happy right now lol. I can't believe she turned Marshall down but then again.....it is Tom after all haha. The candles were damn sweet. I love it!!
Author's Response: I don't know where I get this imagination. Thank you again for liking my little baby. <3
Date: 06/05/10 03:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww Tom lol. If ppl would stop interrupting them he could fuck her properly xD Another fantastic one!
Date: 06/05/10 02:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Lmao, literally! Luckily no one was within ear shot or they would have thought I was crazy laughing at the computer lol. It's bad enough u got me smiling at it =) Another fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: I'm trying to make it a little funny too. I'm glad to see it's working. As always Ang I love to read your comments. They literally make my day. You have always been supportive of me and my writing since my first blog. Thank you for being my friend and teaching me the ropes of writing. I appreciate it. And thank you for loving my lovely little porn story. <3