Date: 06/05/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Omg woman xD I swear I think I smiled through this entire chapter. Fuck that was hott! I'm guessing Tom has her undies? Nice haha! Gah I just love ur writing. Fucking amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so proud of this fanfic and I don't even know why. I do know that I think it's the best one I've done yet. At least it is to me. <3
Date: 06/05/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Fucking awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one. The banner upload it to photobucket.com and then when it comes up with the codes copy the HTML one and paste it in your description box where you explain the tiff about the story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. For both the review and the advice. I shall definitely try to put up my banner soon. And also thank you for your comments. They make this worth writing although I think this story is pretty much writing itself. I don't know where it's coming from but it sure is easy to write. I think I'm gonna try a little Twincest next. What do you think? <3
Date: 06/05/10 12:55 am Title: Chapter 8
Oooh this is heaps interesting anf now I'm going to read the next chapter. Haha
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like my little baby. I'm kind of proud of her myself. lol <3
Date: 06/05/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm I wonder if anyone saw them have sex? Hmmm
Author's Response: I guess only time will tell. <3
Date: 06/05/10 12:43 am Title: Chapter 6
Oooooh Tom is nice hey :) hehehe Eminem ;D
Date: 06/05/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 5
I wonder is Tom getting jealous :/ hmmmm
Date: 06/05/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 4
Hehhehr :) this is so great xD
Date: 06/04/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love this story! It's amazing and this was another amazing chapter! Can't wait until I get back to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Hope to keep you as a reader on the next and future chapters. Hope you have/had a wonderful vacation. <3
Date: 06/04/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow so Hot, I love this. She got to unbraid his hair, sexy
Author's Response: I thought it was sexy too. Thank you. <3
Date: 06/04/10 09:50 am Title: Chapter 6
Eminem!!! what a shocker...but he is a hottie xD hehehe
awwww Tomi is such a sweetie xD
more soon mum xD
cant wait xD
xxx
Date: 06/04/10 09:29 am Title: Chapter 6
=D Awe cute!
Date: 06/04/10 07:49 am Title: Chapter 4
oooh silky red and black boxers
yuuuummmy
xD
xxx
Date: 06/04/10 07:06 am Title: Chapter 6
aw....so romantic Tom lighting the cnadles!!:D
Date: 06/04/10 03:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy mother fuck me running up heel backwards!!!! Whoa okay....I think i'm done with my fit. Ooooh this is so damn good already. Raine is a kick ass bitch haha, I like her. I hope she carries extra undies with her with all that hot thinking she does. Although I guess going commando would be more suitable lol. I love this. Fantastic start.
Author's Response: Thanks Ang. It's kind of nice to be able to let loose and just write whatever you want. You should honestly think of doing one of these too. I might also try the dreaded "twincest" one of these days. lol Might be fun. I'm so glad you're enjoying this and hope to keep you entertained for a long time. <3
Date: 06/03/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awwww poor Tom :( I mean, yeah it's good to have a little of his own medicine but the girl just punched his ego, Ouch!
I loved :D
I want moreeeeee!!!!
Author's Response: Yippee!!!! Thank you sooooo much. <3
Date: 06/03/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Tom likes her =] Or he just really, really likes the sex!
Author's Response: You never know. It might be both. You'll have to wait and see. <3
Date: 06/03/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ohhhh that'd be awesome! I think Raine would make such an amazing duet with MY Bill! Okay now, you tell that biatch to stay away from MY androginous babe xD lol Or Imma have to rob her Tomi for a while. Yeah that's it, that's what Alice will do *Sorry Bill, you know I heart u :(*
Date: 06/03/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
LMAO xD Heyyy! Our big boy's left unclenched by our sexual girl here! The boy needs to let it out someway Ms Maril, pleaseeeee let it be? I pictured him sleeping, awww what a cute little imagine! Nothing compared to the orgasmic face he must pull off when he's ... *ahemmmm* u get me ;)
Author's Response: I have quite the imagination eh? God knows where it's coming from cause I'm certainly not getting any. :D Writing this must be the way I get rid of my sexual frustrations. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying it. <3
Date: 06/03/10 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
HEY guess who???
schrei_nation!!!! babe
lol LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi sweetie. They just posted the next chapter. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I am going to go in and edit the lead page and dedicate it to you and Tom'sParking. You both just love my little sex scenes so much. LOL Hope you enjoy the next chapter too. Remember change the name Tom to --- and it'll be much better. :D Love you THMom
Date: 06/03/10 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
RAWR I love how Tom's so passionate about it! Damn! I bet that lip piercing will come in handy if I ever were to be in that same situation with him![don't blow the whistle to Bill, that'd be the death of me O_o]
Author's Response: Alice thank you. Raine's pretty passionate too. You stay away from my Tom or I'll have to beat you with my cat. Or maybe I'll just squeal to Bill. That's what I'll do. I'll just tattle. :D