Date: 04/27/23 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! SO HOT!!!
Date: 10/07/14 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
I've eyed this story for a very long time, but I never had the time or patience to read it, so I left it hanging and pushed the reading back. But now I finally read this and oh dear lord, I loved this! I have nothing bad to say! This is amazing :)
Date: 07/26/12 03:57 am Title: Chapter 5
this was a good story!
Date: 03/12/11 08:45 am Title: Chapter 5
I can't believe I didn't see this fic before!!! I SHOULD BE IMPRISONED FOR SUCH A CRIME!!! *slaps face*
I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS FIC!!! And the botTom's to blame for the most part loooool I have to admit I love botTom and there ain't much Tom/Bill fics out here that's botTom... I'm so glad I found this!!! I love the way you wrote it, the way Bill slowly brougjt it to Tom and the older twin just had to give in cuz it's sooooooooo good lol...XD Love a submissive Tom begging to be fucked hahahahaha *perv* XD Love this sfm!! Thank you for sharing this to us!! Wish there's more botTom Tom/Bill pairing in THF heeeeeee..XD
Author's Response: Oh wow, what an amazing review! Thank you so, so much, I'm so happy you enjoyed it this much! :D
Date: 10/06/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 5
Sigh, I love botTom.
Cute and sexy, I loved the dynamic of their established relationship.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :))
Date: 07/03/10 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
i'm super late to the party but omg o/ awesome top!bill!
Author's Response: haha, but at least you're here! Thanks, bb <3
Date: 06/30/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lovelovelove. Hothothot.
So hot~
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/26/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love how Bill gradually built Tom up to the main event. >:D Wicked, determined, sexy Bill! Very nice, I enjoyed this a lot. It was quite sensual.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! <3
Date: 06/25/10 01:27 am Title: Chapter 5
This has to be one of my favorite bottom!Toms ever. So well done! :D
Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you! I'm flattered <3
Date: 06/25/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 4
Dear god. *_____________*
Author's Response: I'll take that as a positive thing ;D
Date: 06/24/10 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Shit, that was hot. *_*
Author's Response: Tehe >:D
Date: 06/24/10 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow. awesome fic. love it *-*
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/24/10 08:08 am Title: Chapter 5
Hot, very hot. :)
However, I had expected there to be at least a bit of angst. The subject of which twin tops is usually accompanied by some form of macho "i top cuz i'm the man" type attitude on Tom's part, which is always very enjoyable to read cuz it makes u wanna hit Tom over the head. lol. I had esspecially expected this after they were checking out those girls at the club. So I guess I made myself disappointed. lol.
The story was super hot though. I love Tom's first time. hehe. It's like fate biting him in the ass for pretending he's such a player, lol, and now he's the virgin. It's one of my fav kinks.
I get that this story was just supposed to be cute and lighthearted sex, and it was, I just think you missed out on making it a bit more interesting: angst, bitchy twin fight, girl-related jealousy, etc. Pick any one of those, and they would have been very effective in spicing this up. Just saying.
In case Tom getting rimmed isnt spicey enough for u. :P
I did really enjoy this tho. Like I said: very hot! And well written I think. Great naughty imagery.
Author's Response: It's "usually" accompanied, yes, but not with this Tom. Had I included angst, this would have turned into a much longer multi-chapter fic, which I didn't want to happen. I'm glad you liked it, though, thanks :)
Date: 06/23/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, I love bottom!tom, he's in such denial of what he really likes and loves *giggle* such a little slut, he is just playing hard to get and because of that Bill should fuck him through the mattress u.u
Author's Response: lol, isn't that what Bill did? ;)
Date: 06/23/10 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ah, beautiful ending. xD I loved the smut, and switch in roles, and Tom's final acceptance. It was short, and that made it brilliant. :)
Good job< 3
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews <3<3
Date: 06/23/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love it O_O!!!!
Author's Response: Awesome :D
Date: 06/23/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
*________* fhnfhnfhnfhn.
Loved it!
The end was gold xD Awh, Tom.
Author's Response: hahaha, good! Thank you for the boost to write this, <3<3
Date: 06/23/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
sooo sooo hot :D well done
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 06/23/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was really hot ! Of course Tom loves it now ! lol Amazing little fic, I enjoyed it a lot !
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I'm happy you liked it <3
Date: 06/21/10 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh hawt daaayuuuummm!!!! O__o
Author's Response: :DDD