Date: 06/19/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh yesssss. @_@
I love bottom!Tom.
Author's Response: I never used to, but now... maybe, just a bit >:D
Date: 06/18/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
That was very very hot, but sweet at the same time... best kind of fic :) Can't wait for the final chapter !
Author's Response: Yay :) Final chapter coming asap :)
Date: 06/18/10 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
I loved it. ;D
Top Bill :333
Can't wait for their talk tomorrow. ;D
wonderfully sexy chapter xD
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear this! Thank you for reading <3
Date: 06/13/10 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Haha ! Bill is always right, of course Tom loved it! The ice cream part was funny :) Can'T wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes! Bill is always right. Tom just needs to start believing him more ;) Next chapter asap :)
Date: 06/13/10 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hot Hot Hot! Bill always got what he wants eventually :)
Author's Response: Oh, yes he does ;)
Date: 06/13/10 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, that was really hot! I'm so glad there is more chapter for me to read ! I absolutely love how you wrote this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 06/10/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
*thumbs up*
great chapter X
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/10/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
*takes a cold shower* its brilliant..really just amazing and im looking forward 2 more..i really loved the tw-interaction..
but you know what? reading it i was kinda hoping the ice cream would be used in their "activities"
(omg i am such a pervet) lol =) just ignore me X (update soon)
Author's Response: haha, sorry that the icecream wasn't included. :p
Date: 06/10/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 3
Nice! I liked the little ice cream side story.
Author's Response: heh, Thanks! :D
Date: 06/09/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
*___*
I should have started this from chapter one, but for some reason the title didn't appeal to me.
That was WONDERFUL O_________O
I don't usually like Top!Bill, but I LOVE Bottom!Tom! XDDDD So I'll love to see that and I know it'll happen. ;)
This was a great chapter. ;3
Tom gave in.. but he needs to more O:
I love the humor, sexiness, and emotion in this fic. :)
Do continue < 3
Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to read it now, then, if the title didn't strike you :) Thank you for reading <3 I'm happy you like it so much; yes! Tom does need more! And he'll get it... soon, heh. Thank you so much <3
Date: 06/09/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
What a devoted (possibly whipped) brotherlover. ;> can't wait to see what Bill talks him into next!
Author's Response: Of course he's whipped. ;D Oh, Bill's got more planned, don't worry! ;)
Date: 06/09/10 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
This continues to be very sexy. I'm looking forward to seeing Bill turn the tables on Tom!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! :D
Date: 06/09/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, that was intense. :3 I love all the vocal feedback they gave each other, and somehow Tom ordering Bill to "squeeze it" was just the sexiest thing. >:D
Author's Response: Thanks! A couple of people have commented on that and I didn't even notice them, so I'm glad they've worked, :P
Date: 06/09/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter, but too short:P I can't wait to read about some top!Bill action :)
Author's Response: But it's been the longest chapter yet! haha. Top Bill will happen... soon >_> Eventually, lol.
Date: 06/07/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOL! haha i love how tom defends himself by saying "it's not how we work!" who the hell believes that?! Im excited to see what u write in the next chappie!
Author's Response: Tom believes that! ...for now. ;) Next chapter will be up in a day or two :)
Date: 06/05/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
This fic is bad for my blood pressure! O_O
Love the puppy interction throughout. It's funny and works really well to have that cute streak running along with the pure porn, lol.
Licking foward to the next chapter. Did I say licking? Sorry, looking ...
Author's Response: lol, I had to include the pups. The appeared and wouldn't let go throughout, so they just stayed (; haha, the next chapter is finished and will be updated in a few days :D
Date: 06/03/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was great! Even though it was smut, at least it was a back story to the actual plot smut (which I'm now excited to read).
I liked how unique you made the sex scene, with all the little details like their chests rubbing together and the dialogue where Tom tells Bill to "squeeze."
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! Thank you very much :)
Date: 06/01/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY, you wrote it! *dances* This was hot. I can't wait for top!Bill.
>:D
Author's Response: I did! I'm glad you liked it! Top!Bill coming... in a few chapters. >_> :D
Date: 06/01/10 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 06/01/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
D: haha! more than wanting Top!Bill i love Bot!Tom, it's such a weird but lovely thing in this site! really! DX so yeah! im willing to read this! also the theme, the power, haha, I do think they both get their times, sometimes bill is stronger others tomi, so yeah! im wating for next chappie! :D
Author's Response: It's bizzare to me that I'm writing bottom!Tom. I used to be completely, 100% for Bottom!BILL, heh. I'm glad you're gonna read it! Next chapter will be up soon :)