Date: 06/15/10 02:23 am Title: Disadvantage
aww. i really like this story a lot. update soon? please! haha
Author's Response: thank you! I'll do my best :)
Date: 06/12/10 11:53 pm Title: Disorder
ya... this is currently my favorite story sooooo.... update. pleeeease??? *puppy-dog face* O_O
Author's Response: ahh thank you! rni'm trying to have enough to post as fast as i can, but i'm currently in my exams so it might go a little slower ;p x
Date: 06/09/10 06:20 pm Title: Deceptively
wooooohoooooooo we finally know his name!!
Author's Response: cheer for all :D
Date: 06/09/10 12:54 pm Title: Deceptively
EEEEEK! UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE! i am really excited for this story! HURRY UP PLEASE!
Author's Response: thank you! xD i'm working on it and will post as soon as possibe :)
Date: 06/09/10 12:37 pm Title: Disorder
ok, it does seem like something worth reading. was it beta'd tho? minor spelling and grammatical errors. otherwise a great story start.
Author's Response: no it wasn't, i just check most of the parts myself, but i'm not english so i'm sorry for the mistakes :)
Date: 06/09/10 12:28 pm Title: Disorder
Oh and yeah another thing, I have no idea if things like headphones were already invented in 1988, But let's just say they have. In my world they have xD
i was born in 1979. trust me when i tell you that they were already in existance, just kinda big and klunky. lol. ok, so i'ma go actually start reading now cuz the summary was enticing.
Author's Response: hahaha thank you for the information! yeah it were thgose big things i was imagining in my head xDrnrnthanks for your review x
Date: 06/09/10 12:13 pm Title: Deceptively
You're so awesome. I didn't know your English was that good shaunitzel :p! I thought Razielle was the ''bad guy'' :'). I didn't expect Bill to have killed them:P. And still everytime I read Razielle I think it's me :')! YOUR FAULT!
xxxxxxxxxrazzie.
Author's Response: heheee thanks honey:)rnwell..maybe there is more than one bad guy :Drn<3loveyouuu
Date: 06/09/10 11:12 am Title: Deceptively
I LOVE IT...
i loved the whole humour thing.."im the personification of evil" lol
really excited for next chapter.. im totally hooked..
im curious of the direction ur gonna take this story..looking forward 2 more (update soon)
Author's Response: hehe i'vze got it all in my head what way it's gonna go! xDrnthanks for reading & reviewing, i appreciate it alot :)
Date: 06/09/10 10:56 am Title: Distress
cold gust of wind..closed window..freaky..i felt the tension and fear he was feeling
*thumbs up* good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate it! x
Date: 06/09/10 10:53 am Title: Disorder
oooh interesting! i like how you write,you've got a unique writing style..
i liked this first chapter, and the idea is intriguing,
*faves story*
im gonna shut up now and check out the next chapter =)
Author's Response: whiii haha thank you, i'm glad you like it! rnx
Date: 06/03/10 02:14 pm Title: Distress
Shauniiiiiiiii this story makes me so nosy. Pfft, flikker maar op, ik ga nederlands praten:'). Heb je al alles uitgeschreven of?
xxxxraz
Author's Response: wat is nosy? hahahahah xDrnnee nog niet, het is at the moment xp rnmaar ik heb wel verschillende stukken/momenten/zinnetjes/gebeurtenissen die ik er moet tussenplakken, het zit wel al in me kop xD
Date: 06/01/10 03:20 pm Title: Disorder
Shauni seriously, RAZIELLE?
Just wait till i see you, i swear i'm gonna kill you :')!
But i really love the story!
I just hope you decide to FINISH this one :p.
xxxxxrazje.
Author's Response: WHAHAHAHAH Raz i didn't even think about that oe seriously i just got the name from one or another site oh god now i'm gonna think about you every time i have to write that name and seriously, it's not gonna be good xDDD rnI hope so too! and thank you <33 loveyou