Date: 06/02/10 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
NOOOOO!!! please stop Tom, I don't want him to die!!!! But he is crazy, I am sure of that. Poor Bill, he will not have another option... He have to tell Tom that he love him.
PLEASE CONTINUE!!
Date: 06/02/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
ohhmyybill!!! nein! is he goingg to die??
i needd the nextt chapterr pliss write more
Author's Response: i will u see i have it all written down on another website but it is not well done and kinda difficult to understand so to put my story out there i am taking my chapters and pretty much redoing them as in punctuation spelling and grammar ya no boring stuff like that and it takes me forever! UGGH! but thanks for u review im glad u like the story :) :) :) it means a lot
Date: 06/01/10 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Kind of short but you have a great start can't wait for more ;]
Author's Response: yea they get longer as we go :) thank u for the reviewrn
Date: 06/01/10 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope asap means every day if u already have 33 chapters writen, very very good start I'm hooked
Author's Response: i will probably not today but tomorrow for sure babe :) thank u for the review :)