Date: 06/09/10 09:00 pm Title: The First Dance
To my dearest Squishy, whom I christened: Your writing style is fabulous, but I'm not quite sure I can read more than a few sentences! XD But in all, I hope Tom and Bill end up together.... they better or I am disowning you!
Date: 06/09/10 03:25 pm Title: The Last Night
OH SHIT! Don't do it Tom, go for Bill!
Such a complicated love. >
Date: 06/09/10 07:27 am Title: The Last Night
DON'T GET MARRIED TOM!
Date: 06/09/10 07:11 am Title: The Last Night
omg noo!!! he needs to be with bill!!! ahhh!! that girl wont make him happy!!!! update soon pleaseee
Date: 06/09/10 05:08 am Title: The First Dance
superrrrrrrrrrrrr story!!
great job girls!!
but dont make billy cry.
give him tomi pleaseeeeee:))
p.s update soon
Date: 06/09/10 03:02 am Title: The Last Night
Don't get married Tom! You belong with Bill!
Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 06/09/10 01:27 am Title: The Last Night
Noooo don't get married Tomi lol
Date: 06/08/10 11:24 pm Title: The Last Night
NOOOOO Don't do it Tom---go for Bill!!! Oh man, i'll be on the edge of my seat waiting for an update to this!
Date: 06/08/10 10:26 pm Title: The Last Night
no no NO NO! AND NO he can NOT get married *kicks and screams* no no nein!
Date: 06/08/10 07:28 pm Title: First Time
I read this yesterday, but it was too late for me to actually leave a review [if my mom would have heard the keyboard clicking with her supersonic hearing past midnight on a school night, psh, i would have gotten a lecture. b o r i n g XD]
onwards to the review *points foward*
"me loves smut, yes its true, me loves smut, how 'bout you" [when you read that, you have to read it in a sing-song fashion. for emphasis]
This was a seriously hot chapter, even more so than the other sexy scenes, since Bill took Tom back for 'extra attention' *giggles*
I wonder, did Tom have to pay for that session? XDD
& the line at the end,
"oh my god, i'm in love with him" :O
the story is about to get even better. i can feel an impulse of drama coming up. tom's girl, and bill, and strip clubs, and missing money. someone will figure something out soon.
i just hope tom decides what the heck he wants, and sets things straight.
m o r e . b i t t e ? (:
-----Samantha
Date: 06/08/10 02:04 am Title: First Time
Omg! This is like, the BEST story on here man! You need to write more...and SOON!
Danke Shon
xx
Date: 06/08/10 12:57 am Title: First Time
That was oberly Sexy sexy lol
Date: 06/07/10 07:38 pm Title: First Time
ahhhh omg love it!!!!! moremoremore!!!
Date: 06/07/10 12:57 am Title: First Time
Oooooh! Smut! :D
I'm thinking Tom's not gonna get married now. As if he'd choose some random girl over Bill. :p
Can't wait for more!
Date: 06/06/10 11:55 pm Title: First Time
YES! Was hoping for this moment...now I can't wait to see how thing's go from here...
Date: 06/06/10 11:19 pm Title: First Time
all i have to say this tim is... MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM thanks Ashley
goddess lala
Date: 06/06/10 10:33 pm Title: First Time
I really enjoyed this chapter!! Ironically, I just downloaded Low by Flo Rida onto my iPod yesterday. So guess what-- I turned it on and listened to it while I read this chapter! Sexi :)
Oh, and I have a grammar mistake to correct you on:
Now of course, this made Tom even harder, if that was even possible.
Was should be were because that's the subjunctive mood. That confuses a lot of people, but were is correct.
Date: 06/06/10 10:04 pm Title: First Time
*sings around the room* sumty sumt sumt sumty sumt sumt LOVE....oh well...sumy sumt smut love oh love love love hehe loved it
Author's Response: Hahahaha... just for you ;)
Date: 06/06/10 05:12 pm Title: Hard Dick
LOL... man, this is hilarious XD "Tom’s dick twitched... got hot.... got ROCK hard" hahaha.. poor Tomi, tortured oh so much.. haha.. if i were him, i'd grab Bill's hand, and bring him somewhere where i can have him by myself.. but i'm not Tom soo XDD
love the story!! update soon!
Author's Response: Hahaha... I kinda of laughed while writing it :) I would have taken him to a back room, too!!! ;) Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 06/06/10 05:04 pm Title: Wet Dream
THAT WAS HOT. soooo extreme and amazing to the point that my heart starts beating faster and stars starts to appear and i have to blink really fast to get rid of them and continue reading. awesome job, squishy!! :)