Date: 06/02/10 07:42 pm Title: Wet Dream
hothothot lovee itt!!!
Author's Response: heheh we are glad you did!!
Date: 06/02/10 07:14 pm Title: Wet Dream
i think i will leave a dark red review because, lets be honest, Bill's wet dream was
H E L L A . C A L I E N T E (:
*thatwassomespicystuff* XD
I really like the idea that Bill is a stripper, who gives lap dances to tons of guys, and who has no need to remember names [unless they are a usual customer, maybe? xD] But totally finds himself overwhelmed with thoughts of Tomi.
This was quite tantalzing and like you said, DEFINITELY HOT (:
Ich liebe es, so far ^^
-Samantha
Author's Response: It was hella caliente, huh? ;) Ash stayed up ALL NIGHT writing that amazing smut!!! More is definitly on its way!!!
Date: 06/02/10 06:58 pm Title: Wet Dream
LOL.
I thought the dream was a flashback actually. xDDD I loved the smut of it. very sexy, and loved the screaming of Bill's... Without sex screaming it's boring and blah. I like pain in it as well. x3
haha came the hardest he had ever... better find your Tom again before you start cumming other things. -shot- that doesn't even make sense.. but, use your imagination!!! O_o
loved it btw! (:
Author's Response: Oh I love pain too! Roughness! ;) Oh and Ashley was awake nearly ALL night writing this awesomeness, so props go to her! XD She can't comment on these reviews for some reason :/
Date: 06/01/10 11:43 am Title: The First Dance
OMG the banner! *dies* its just wow! i think i spent a full 5 minutes just staring at the banner and drooling, lol =)
im loving this story..i love the idea
and its kinda reminding me of a song called im in love with a stripper by t-pain..(yep randum.. thats my middle name)
good first chapter..well done! and keep it up..
*faves story* and *gives you a bag of skittles*
im looking forward to more..so get to work! lol
Author's Response: Hahaha as did I when I first saw this amazing picture!!! Gah :)rnrnIt's slightly based off of the song I'm In Love With A Stripper but it's a little different too. I'm so glad you liked it! YUMMMM Skittles ^.^rnMore is on it's way!!
Date: 06/01/10 06:18 am Title: The First Dance
aaaahhhhhh i want no need more please
Author's Response: More is on it's way! Thanks for reading!! XD
Date: 06/01/10 02:53 am Title: The First Dance
Why do I have such a thing for Stripper Bill??
Liking this and looking forward to more! :]
And the banner is quite nice too. :D
Author's Response: I have a thing for Stripper Bill as well ;) More is coming soon!!
Date: 06/01/10 02:01 am Title: The First Dance
I can't stop coming back to see the banner,, ahahaha dang! hey can i save it or something? please... *puppy eyes
Author's Response: http://media.photobucket.com/image/bill%20kaulitz%20manip/Vagia93/Bill%20Kaulitz/billmanipx1.jpg?o=3rnrnHere's the link to the BEAUTIFUL picture!!! ;)
Date: 06/01/10 01:33 am Title: The First Dance
lol i keep coming to see the banner.. ahahahaha... when u gunna upload the next chapter... ???
Author's Response: The next chapter should be done in a little bit. I'm just waiting for Ash to send me her chapter! :)
Date: 05/31/10 09:30 pm Title: The First Dance
Lol, "Tom wanted Bill. Stripper Bill." XDDD
Loved it.
I'll see what this becomes (:
Author's Response: It will become sexy!! ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/31/10 09:05 pm Title: The First Dance
OMFGoodnees!! my I nearly feel outs my chair when i was Bill haha ...I lovezz this story plz plz Continue XD
Author's Response: Hahaha Ashley is writing the other chapter and it will be updated soon! :)
Date: 05/31/10 08:12 pm Title: The First Dance
O M T H :O
who ever [or would it be 'whom ever'? XD] photoshopped that picture you used for the banner. W O W . What an eye-catcher *teehee* Plus, they even got down to the nitty gritty detail by giving the picture what appeared to be a slight nipple piercing (:
I have to say, just from the summary and after reading this first chapter.
The idea you two have come up with, could seriously turn into a genius fic.
I mean Bill as a stripper. Y U M XD
always such a pleasant thought, I suppose. & Tom breaking up with a girlfriend to be with Bill. Well that adds a bit of pure lovely romance (:
This is such a wonderful start.
& a really great job to the both of you.
btw just curious, are you two splitting up the chapters, like one person writes the odd numbers and the other writes the even, or is this a full on collaboration between the both of you? (:
I felt a bit bad for Tomi at the end though. I mean he comes home to a sleeping girlfriend after getting a complete boner from Bill.
Having to create his own relief. so sad
XDD
*looking foward to some more*
-----Samantha
Author's Response: I know! I found the picture and my jaw literally dropped at the hotness!! GAH!! XDrnrnI'm so glad that you enjoyed the first chapter! Ashley and I are taking turns with the chapters. I wrote the first and she will write the second, and so on and so forth. However, we are colabing on the entire thing. I send her the chapters I write and vice versa. rnrnI'm soooooo excited about you liking this! Your comment made me smile!! :) rnrnMore is coming and thanks for reading!! XDrnrn-Amanda
Date: 05/31/10 08:04 pm Title: The First Dance
i liiiikkeeee it, therefore me wants morrreee of it hehe :P
Author's Response: More is comingggggg!!!! XD
Date: 05/31/10 08:03 pm Title: The First Dance
FUCK YEA CHICKIES.....STRIPPER BILL. me liekies!!! *graby hands* Although....I wanted SECKS NAU! O_O DO EET!!! SECKS THEM NAU!!! lolz...jk good job guys..and as Tim Gunn would say, "Make it Work!!"
Author's Response: Hahaha! Ash says that she's writing the smut right now, so we hope that you like!!! ;) Thanks so much for reading!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs*
Date: 05/31/10 08:02 pm Title: The First Dance
the banner is hard to ignore... my jaw literally drop when i saw it.. god! im so gunna track this..
Author's Response: I know, right?? I saw the picture and thought, OH YES! So, I used it!! And I'm glad that you liked this! Ash is writing the next chapter now! :)
Date: 05/31/10 08:02 pm Title: The First Dance
Well, damn that was good! Ready for the next chapter...
Author's Response: :) Ashley is writing the next chapter soon!! I'm soooo glad you enjoyed it ;)