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Reviewer: princesspss Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 5

I can't believe I got a dead person in my head!”

“Idiot, you're as good as dead yourself!”

“What is that supposed to mean?”

“Nothing, I just wanted to say it.”

hillarious.!That's what I say with my best friend all day long and crack up every single time!
I usually am the voice *cause she thinks I'm the creapiest one o.O*

Author's Response: Haha! You two are just too cute! ;D

Reviewer: understarryskies Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/08 03:09 am Title: Chapter 5

hehehehe. I love it. A voice within. omg thats good. =P.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

Reviewer: redflowergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/08 05:42 am Title: Chapter 4

i like the idea of this fic but i dont like bill's personality in this one at all o.0 ....
he was suddenly hit by tom and just got over it ....and over all the things been done to him alter and its the same with tom he was a bit emotionless ...i mean he should have shown alot more emotions then just sobbing o.0
but i like the idea though

Author's Response: Aye, maybe, but this was all from Tom's POW. He couldn't know what went through Bill's mind. I tried to make it an omnicient POW, you know? And Bill did understand that something had been controlling Tom and for that, he was ready to forgive him. It's like true love, yeno? And for Tom, there I got no excuses. I guess I could've tried harder ;)

Reviewer: SacredMonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

That was a breath-taking story! The plot was so original! Great job! I absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: smiliedolphin Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

wow!!!

Author's Response: ...! :P Kiitos ;)

Reviewer: sinlich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 5

I LOVE this story!
really really good, but i'm sad it ended so fast :(
And i'm happy that Bill knew!!! :D
Thank you so much! x)

Author's Response: Brothers always know... ;P Thank you :D

Reviewer: Heiligx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 5

Haha! Nice ending!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: princesspss Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

omg.! this was like wow.~!
You don't wanna know how much I cried while reading this..
o__o

Author's Response: Cried!? Oh, my, I'm so sorry :( Thanks, though.

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 5

ps: everytime I do something wrong or embarassing ill just say: the voice within told me to!


...

I guess its a bit creepy but fuck it! its cool!!! xD

Author's Response: Haha, if it works, it works, eh ;) I always say that it was God's will. Everybody thinks I'm a conservative christian ;) Riiighto...

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/08 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!!
THIS WAS JUST....BRILLIANT!! CRAZY!!!
OH SHIT!!!
the end........was.........breath taking
...
omg I love u. lol
this was the most crazy and yet wonderful story I ever read!!!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!!!! That is so sweet! :D Thanks again! :D <3

Reviewer: sinlich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

wicked = awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: Oh, goodies! :D Thank you, then!

Reviewer: sinlich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

by the way... ur sense of humor is wicked! xD

Author's Response: What? Thank you ;D I hope xD

Reviewer: sinlich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

Holly crap! The bastard raped him! (not speaking of Tom of course)
No no no... no... just no! It's way too short :p
Come on you write so good! Why stop now? ^^
I'm waiting for the next part, i just LOVE your story!
And please make Bill soon know what's really happening to Tom. I hate to see him so sad...

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :D This is the one I'm prioriting now, so it will be updated shortly :)

Reviewer: BlackShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

goooooood!!! man! this.. woah keep going!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

AKK!!! Horibble. Not ur writing. LOL. I mean its horrible the things Tom's 'other half' is making him do. I'm scared. But reeally eager to find out what happens next. More please!!

Author's Response: haha, you scared me :P Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

OH. MY. GOSH. That voice is completely ruining his relationship with Bill! And also that poor guy's life, I bet he's shocked by all this and I wouldn't be surprised! Just.. please, post soon *-* *most pleading and pretty face*

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! This is my priored fic, so more will come soon :)

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

What the hell! Why is this voice picking on Bill?! I can't stand reading of him like this, oh gosh go on go on this is so exciting!

Author's Response: Thanks, and you'll know ;)

Reviewer: DieLetzteHoffnung Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Your mean wifeee, but i love you anyways

Author's Response: Loba, loba! <3

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 2

WTF?! This fucking voice won't hurt Bill, the hell it will! Please go on it's so interesting, where did it come from?? Moooore!

Author's Response: You will find out. Thank you!

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/08 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Mh, this is really interesting.. go on, for sure.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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