Date: 06/30/10 10:12 am Title: Chapter 5
What I think...I think you're a fucking genius!! Can you do another one like this? Or a series or something, I just want more O.O
Author's Response: Thank you! :D I will most certainly think about it :)
Date: 01/18/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
I THINK YOU SHOULD FINISH THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It's not done? :S
Date: 04/09/09 04:39 am Title: Chapter 5
daamn.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/19/08 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
Holy scheisse what a story!!
It was pretty fucked up, but so well-written.
Very very nice job!
Author's Response: Haha :P Thank you so much! :D
Date: 06/19/08 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so angry with 'the voice' right now!
It made Tom rape his own brother for fucks sake!
May I kill the voice, or at least beat it up?
This is such a well-written story!
Author's Response: Hoho :P Thanks :D
Date: 06/19/08 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Okay, now I'm pretty pissed off with 'the voice'. Shall I slap you, shall I be very mean to you without any reason, huh?!
I'm totally caught up in the story!
Nice work!
Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks! ;D
Date: 06/19/08 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
What the fuck is that little, annoying, irritating, voice-thingy up to?
I'm still confused what that talking creature is, but I so like this story.
*reads further*
Author's Response: Thanks! ;D
Date: 06/19/08 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is strange, and it made me curious!
*reads on*
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/16/08 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Lol, Bill! What a cutie! "omg, you player!"
WHAT IS HAPPENING TO TOM?? I'm scared.
Author's Response: God, this story is sso old, that I almost forgot it xD
Date: 05/05/08 03:45 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh my God! That was totally awesome. That last sentence was just perfect. Evil voice though, man. And poor Lillian, though I wondered how her obsession with Bill ended up in Terry's death and why if she was obsessed with Bill she slept with Tom.
Author's Response: Her obsession changed over to an obsession with Tom. Thank you very much for your kind words ^^
Date: 03/29/08 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow... nicce. Different. ♥
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 03/15/08 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really liked this - it's written really classily!
x
Author's Response: Wow, thanks ;D
Date: 03/04/08 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
interesting spin on the end! I like it!
Author's Response: ;D Thanks.
Date: 03/04/08 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
Gustav needs to beat that voice outta Tomi.
Author's Response: Ya! :P
Date: 03/04/08 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
bad voice! Bad! lol! This is getting loads better, it was never bad, just odd.
Author's Response: Haha! ;D Thank you :)
Date: 03/04/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
seriously strange idea lol nice though
Author's Response: Thanks ;D
Date: 03/04/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
strange but enough so that it's got me curious.
Author's Response: Glad to hear that :)
Date: 03/04/08 12:51 am Title: Chapter 5
I loved this fic, but it felt like the ending was too rushed. You should have made it go on longer; it was really interesting and a good read. It reminds me of a manga I'm reading called Parasyte where these alien creatures land on Earth and try and take over their minds by crawling into their brain, but sometimes they run out of time and end up taking over, for example, a person's hand, resulting in a talking hand that can kind of control the person. I probably didn't explain it well ... XD But it's a similar idea to your story, which is cool.
Author's Response: Haha, I've never read manga :P Thanks, and ya... It could be better, but back then, this was what felt right.
Date: 02/28/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
This one was very scary!
Author's Response: Yay! I can do scary stuff! <3
Date: 02/16/08 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
That...
Was...
AWSOME
You're really good at writing these!
I'm loving them!
I can't wait to read more of them!
Gonna go do that now, expect more commenting from me!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's so nice of you! :D