Date: 04/28/13 12:07 am Title: Visiting Andi
This is hilarious! Loved it! Love your style! I've just read all your stories. I wish there were more :)
Date: 09/27/10 03:47 am Title: Visiting Andi
hahahahaahaaaa aaaaw
Date: 09/26/10 03:37 am Title: Visiting Andi
Hilarious xD
Date: 07/20/10 12:08 am Title: Visiting Andi
Oh poor Andreas. He may need to rethink allowing the twins to stay overnight ever again.
Date: 07/03/10 01:12 pm Title: Visiting Andi
Hahaha!!! I came back just to read thru some of the challenge fics that I missed and I have to say that urs is really well written and seriously funny.
Poor poor Andi, but he doesn't realize how many TWC-fanatics would trade to be in his place. XD
Date: 06/15/10 10:03 pm Title: Visiting Andi
Too funny! I loved it even if you think it needed more work.
Date: 06/13/10 10:46 am Title: Visiting Andi
Hahahahahahahahaha.
LAWL
ROFL
Seriously, this was the only entry that actually made me laugh. So props to you!
Date: 06/12/10 10:16 am Title: Visiting Andi
Loved it ! Andi is so cute :)
Date: 06/11/10 08:43 pm Title: Visiting Andi
haha poor Andi xD this was a lovely little bit of humour to end my day with :)
Date: 06/11/10 08:55 am Title: Visiting Andi
This was priceless. Loads of sex, poor Andi D:
Date: 06/08/10 11:59 am Title: Visiting Andi
I really liked this! The light tone is great and I love the contrast between Andi's exasperation and hot twinloving. *g*
Date: 06/05/10 11:29 pm Title: Visiting Andi
Oh, Andreas. He should know better. Bill + Tom = footprints on the ceiling and a few disturbed neighbors. Fabulous job, I'm in love with it so much!
Date: 06/04/10 11:20 am Title: Visiting Andi
LOL! That was so unfortunate for Andreas, but it was hilarious!
Date: 06/01/10 08:04 pm Title: Visiting Andi
This story fit amazingly with the card, which is the exact point of the challenge and you done that bang on. The end was hilarious, I could honestly just imagine Bill saying something like that and Tom spitting his coffee out, it was like a movie playing in my mind, it was so easy to follow.
I absolutely loved it, seriously.
Amazing job :D x
Date: 06/01/10 11:53 am Title: Visiting Andi
haha, genious:')
Date: 06/01/10 09:30 am Title: Visiting Andi
Oooooohhh I love Andreas, as well as I love watching the twins' relationship from an external point of view, so this was definitely the first story to catch my attention, :D :D :D You don't seem to think too highly of your work here, but I assure you it's not as bad as you believe.
The card is funny and the plotline you invented was perfect for it (and that's important, since I guess that's the main point of the challenge), so the fiction was definitely hilarious; I smiled all the way through, ;D
Probably it would've worked a little better if you hadn't spent so much time describing the introductory part. After some paragraphs without any real action and most of all, without any dialogue, I started losing some interest, to be honest. For example, if you had started the story in medias res, with the boys already watching that movie, it would've been priceless, definitely. But that's something minor (well, that's just... that might just be me), so nothing worth taking care of anyway, :)
Absolutely lovely job :D :D
Date: 06/01/10 03:42 am Title: Visiting Andi
That was so funny. I think I'm feeling jealous of Andi though.
And I loved Mrs Night's reaction lol
Date: 05/31/10 09:33 pm Title: Visiting Andi
Haha ! I loved it! I really like story where someone knows about the twins, and even if I feel sorry for Andi, it was a really good fic! Great job!
Date: 05/31/10 09:26 pm Title: Visiting Andi
LOL They need to introduce a few kinks, maybe including a ball gag. xD This was cute. Your frustrated and sleep-deprived Andi was adorable.
Date: 05/31/10 09:00 pm Title: Visiting Andi
I sniggered, lol. I thought you found a really nice voice for Andi, entertaining and convincing; and what friends to have! Very much a giggle than worked well with the ecard!