Date: 06/02/10 05:27 am Title: We're Gay
I really liked this, it was so cute and well written. It made me giggle quite a few time and I love you pick of card and story, great job.
Date: 06/01/10 02:47 pm Title: We're Gay
This story gives hope to everyone who wants to believe that twincest is real:) it seems to be possible that Twins lie like that about their lives. Good story!
Date: 06/01/10 11:51 am Title: We're Gay
This was really cute. I enjoyed the way it flipped between the private reality for the twins and the interview, and jealous Bill is always adorable. It worked really well for the ecard ^_^
Date: 05/31/10 06:51 pm Title: We're Gay
Wow, great fic! I loved how the questions in the interview inspired flashbacks. Very well written too :)
Date: 05/31/10 03:02 pm Title: We're Gay
That was so cute! I enjoyed how each segment of the interview prompted a memory between the twins, very nicely interwoven.
Date: 05/31/10 03:30 am Title: We're Gay
This was enjoyable right from the start. I loved the interchanging of the interview and their memories. HOT memories, omg. I did giggle a little bit at the 'Soon', just because that's such a naughty word in this fandom. :p But this was great. Wonderful job. :D
Date: 05/31/10 12:27 am Title: We're Gay
I love how this went back and forth! This was really funny and entertaining. Great job!
Date: 05/30/10 11:44 pm Title: We're Gay
Haha That's really funny!!
How could they hide this secret for such a long time!!!!
Date: 05/30/10 10:16 pm Title: We're Gay
HAHAHAHA I love the end. The last line is priceless. It really brings everything together the way you wrote it. Great weave in and out of past sexual experiences and the interview. Naughty and sexy, hehe. :)
I liked this story, however I think you should proof-read your work again, because there are lots of little mistakes where you've got the wrong suffix tacked on to a word or wrong tense or a similar spelled word is substituted for the one you really meant to say. I have a feeling you used your spell checker a bit too quickly. Hehe. No biggy tho, just look it over.
This story is nice tho. Good twin dynamic with their secret looks and stuff. It made me smile. :)
Date: 05/30/10 09:53 pm Title: We're Gay
Omg, the dialogue used between Bill and Tom on most of the occasions was hilarious, I've never laughed so much, especially -
"You...hate my cock"
This was brilliant, I love the way you used the interview to combine with the flashbacks. It was such a clever idea.
The sex scenes were extremely steamy and hot, very descriptional which is a huge bonus. I've throughoutfully enjoyed this and will be reading it again :D
Huggles, x
Date: 05/30/10 09:48 pm Title: We're Gay
wait...so did they say they were gay in the interview??
Author's Response: No, the interview is the none italics, and the flashbacks were the italics. So the last "-gay" part was basically just the follow up from Toms: "Well I can't be, because I'm-". But the way its written seems like he's answering something else when he says "currently not dating anyone." Sorry if that was confusing. =]
Date: 05/30/10 08:52 pm Title: We're Gay
Clearly this is what Tom thinks about every time they give an interview, it explains all the smoldering looks in Bill's direction. ;) I liked all of Tom's suggestions for albums titles, too. Sex in the Studio totally would have sold~ =D
Date: 05/30/10 07:32 pm Title: We're Gay
The sex scenes were so good, can't believe you put so many in as well.
It was just brilliant how they seemed to turn to each other and think of exactly the same thing.
I especially liked the "That's not the main problem Tom... Look at my roots!" lol
This was gooood!
Date: 05/30/10 04:53 pm Title: We're Gay
I loved this! It was a perfect representation of what might just go through the twins' heads during an interview. I've noticed in videos how they tend to give each other these looks that look like they mean so much. xD You are a very good author, one of the best oneshots for this challenge that I've read so far. (:
-Faitherzzzz
Date: 05/30/10 04:53 pm Title: We're Gay
That was very good! I like how you build it, with the interview and the flash back! Really sweet and hot moments, I really enjoyed it!